From: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>
To: Markus Elfring <Markus.Elfring@web.de>,
Masami Hiramatsu <mhiramat@kernel.org>,
linux-doc@vger.kernel.org
Cc: Steven Rostedt <rostedt@goodmis.org>,
Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>,
linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [v4] Documentation: bootconfig: Update boot configuration documentation
Date: Wed, 4 Mar 2020 13:07:40 -0800 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <3118d72b-a33c-e6d7-36a1-204d39d2bdbb@infradead.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <a9f8980e-4325-52c1-d217-d2fca1add37d@web.de>
On 3/4/20 10:09 AM, Markus Elfring wrote:
>>>> What about the following?
>>>>
>>>> User can group identical parent keys together and use braces to list child keys
>>
>> The user
> …
>>>> under them.
>>>
>>> Another wording alternative:
>>>
>>> The user can group settings together. Curly brackets enclose a configuration then
>>> according to a parent context.
>>
>> I slightly prefer Masami's text.
>
> Would you like to improve the distinction for grouping the involved items?
I'm hoping to be done with the current changes. :)
--
~Randy
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2020-03-04 21:07 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 15+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2020-03-03 9:05 [PATCH v4 0/1] Documentation: bootconfig: Documentaiton updates Masami Hiramatsu
2020-03-03 9:05 ` [PATCH v4] Documentation: bootconfig: Update boot configuration documentation Masami Hiramatsu
2020-03-03 10:10 ` Markus Elfring
2020-03-04 4:55 ` Randy Dunlap
2020-03-04 11:37 ` Masami Hiramatsu
2020-03-04 14:45 ` [v4] " Markus Elfring
2020-03-04 16:20 ` Randy Dunlap
2020-03-04 18:09 ` Markus Elfring
2020-03-04 21:07 ` Randy Dunlap [this message]
2020-03-04 21:20 ` Markus Elfring
2020-03-04 21:22 ` Jonathan Corbet
2020-03-04 21:30 ` Markus Elfring
2020-03-05 0:59 ` Masami Hiramatsu
2020-03-05 0:58 ` Masami Hiramatsu
2020-03-03 9:50 ` [v4 0/1] Documentation: bootconfig: Documentation updates Markus Elfring
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