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From: Jarkko Sakkinen <jarkko.sakkinen@linux.intel.com>
To: linux-sgx@vger.kernel.org
Cc: Jarkko Sakkinen <jarkko.sakkinen@linux.intel.com>
Subject: [PATCH for v24 3/3] x86/sgx: Remove a subordinate clause
Date: Mon,  4 Nov 2019 22:01:41 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20191104200141.5385-3-jarkko.sakkinen@linux.intel.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20191104200141.5385-1-jarkko.sakkinen@linux.intel.com>

The subordinate clause of last sentence of the sgx_ioc_enclave_pages()
does not provide any insight not already provided. Thus, remove it.
Also, using "i.e." (and "e.g.") in the documentation should be
considered a bad practice because it leaves it open ended.

Signed-off-by: Jarkko Sakkinen <jarkko.sakkinen@linux.intel.com>
---
 arch/x86/kernel/cpu/sgx/ioctl.c | 8 +++-----
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/arch/x86/kernel/cpu/sgx/ioctl.c b/arch/x86/kernel/cpu/sgx/ioctl.c
index 289af607f634..87b2fb62825a 100644
--- a/arch/x86/kernel/cpu/sgx/ioctl.c
+++ b/arch/x86/kernel/cpu/sgx/ioctl.c
@@ -468,11 +468,9 @@ static int sgx_encl_add_page(struct sgx_encl *encl,
  * @encl:       pointer to an enclave instance (via ioctl() file pointer)
  * @arg:	a user pointer to a struct sgx_enclave_add_pages instance
  *
- * Add (EADD) one or more pages to an uninitialized enclave, and optionally
- * extend (EEXTEND) the measurement with the contents of the page. The range of
- * pages must be virtually contiguous. The SECINFO and measurement mask are
- * applied to all pages, i.e. pages with different properties must be added in
- * separate calls.
+ * Add one or more pages to an uninitialized enclave, and optionally extend the
+ * measurement with the contents of the page. The address range of pages must
+ * be contiguous. The SECINFO and measurement mask are applied to all pages.
  *
  * A SECINFO for a TCS is required to always contain zero permissions because
  * CPU silently zeros them. Allowing anything else would cause a mismatch in
-- 
2.20.1


  parent reply	other threads:[~2019-11-04 20:02 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 14+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2019-11-04 20:01 [PATCH for v24 1/3] x86/sgx: Use GFP_KERNEL for allocations Jarkko Sakkinen
2019-11-04 20:01 ` [PATCH for v24 2/3] x86/sgx: Destroy enclave if EADD fails Jarkko Sakkinen
2019-11-04 20:54   ` Sean Christopherson
2019-11-04 22:31     ` Jarkko Sakkinen
2019-11-04 20:01 ` Jarkko Sakkinen [this message]
2019-11-04 21:21   ` [PATCH for v24 3/3] x86/sgx: Remove a subordinate clause Sean Christopherson
2019-11-04 22:36     ` Jarkko Sakkinen
2019-11-04 22:37       ` Jarkko Sakkinen
2019-11-04 20:46 ` [PATCH for v24 1/3] x86/sgx: Use GFP_KERNEL for allocations Sean Christopherson
2019-11-04 22:26   ` Jarkko Sakkinen
2019-11-05  2:17     ` Sean Christopherson
2019-11-06 21:54       ` Jarkko Sakkinen
2019-11-06 21:59         ` Jarkko Sakkinen
2019-11-06 22:02           ` Jarkko Sakkinen

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