From: Petr Mladek <pmladek@suse.com>
To: Joe Lawrence <joe.lawrence@redhat.com>
Cc: Bhaskar Chowdhury <unixbhaskar@gmail.com>,
Matthew Wilcox <willy@infradead.org>,
jpoimboe@redhat.com, jikos@kernel.org, mbenes@suse.cz,
corbet@lwn.net, live-patching@vger.kernel.org,
linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org,
rdunlap@infradead.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH V2] docs: livepatch: Fix a typo and remove the unnecessary gaps in a sentence
Date: Mon, 8 Mar 2021 11:18:50 +0100 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <YEX6Cu0EcVpUklFG@alley> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <f8b10ee7-026c-1dc0-fb0c-2a887cd1e953@redhat.com>
On Fri 2021-03-05 11:00:10, Joe Lawrence wrote:
> On 3/5/21 8:37 AM, Bhaskar Chowdhury wrote:
> > On 12:56 Fri 05 Mar 2021, Matthew Wilcox wrote:
> > > On Fri, Mar 05, 2021 at 03:39:23PM +0530, Bhaskar Chowdhury wrote:
> > > > s/varibles/variables/
> > > >
> > > > ...and remove leading spaces from a sentence.
> > >
> > > What do you mean 'leading spaces'? Separating two sentences with
> > > one space or two is a matter of personal style, and we do not attempt
> > > to enforce a particular style in the kernel.
> > >
> > The spaces before the "In" .. nor I am imposing anything , it was peter caught
> > and told me that it is hanging ..move it to the next line ..so I did. ..
> >
>
> Initially I thought the same as Matthew, but after inspecting the diff I
> realized it was just a line wrap. Looks fine to me.
>
> > > > Sometimes it may not be convenient or possible to allocate shadow
> > > > variables alongside their parent objects. Or a livepatch fix may
> > > > -require shadow varibles to only a subset of parent object instances. In
> > > > +require shadow variables to only a subset of parent object instances.
> > >
> > > wrong preposition, s/to/for/ ..where???
>
> Hi Bhaskar,
>
> Thanks for spotting, I'd be happy with v2 as is or a v3 if you want to
> update s/shadow variables to only/shadow variables for only/ but knowing
> me, I probably repeated the same phrasing elsewhere. Up to you, thanks.
I could fix these when pushing unless anyone is against it.
> Acked-by: Joe Lawrence <joe.lawrence@redhat.com>
Acked-by: Petr Mladek <pmladek@suse.com>
Best Regards,
Petr
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2021-03-08 10:19 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 6+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2021-03-05 10:09 [PATCH V2] docs: livepatch: Fix a typo and remove the unnecessary gaps in a sentence Bhaskar Chowdhury
2021-03-05 12:56 ` Matthew Wilcox
2021-03-05 13:37 ` Bhaskar Chowdhury
2021-03-05 16:00 ` Joe Lawrence
2021-03-08 10:18 ` Petr Mladek [this message]
2021-03-09 0:26 ` Jonathan Corbet
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