From: Daniel De Graaf <dgdegra@tycho.nsa.gov>
To: anshul makkar <anshul.makkar@citrix.com>,
Doug Goldstein <cardoe@cardoe.com>,
xen-devel@lists.xen.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH] XSM-docs: Flask operates on domain types and not on individual domain. Updated the documentation to reflect this.
Date: Tue, 19 Jul 2016 11:29:48 -0400 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <00c6b265-9a1e-f69c-b449-7f062b2a2d2e@tycho.nsa.gov> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <578E4570.6000903@citrix.com>
On 07/19/2016 11:21 AM, anshul makkar wrote:
> On 19/07/16 14:30, Doug Goldstein wrote:
>> On 7/19/16 4:05 AM, Anshul Makkar wrote:
>>> Signed-off-by: Anshul Makkar <anshul.makkar@citrix.com>
>>> ---
>>> * Resending the patch due to incomplete subject in the previous patch.
>>>
>>> docs/misc/xsm-flask.txt | 8 ++++----
>>> 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
>>> ---
>>> diff --git a/docs/misc/xsm-flask.txt b/docs/misc/xsm-flask.txt
>>> index 62f15dd..bf8bb6e 100644
>>> Some examples of what FLASK can do:
>>> - - Prevent two domains from communicating via event channels or grants
>>> - - Control which domains can use device passthrough (and which devices)
>>> + - Prevent two domains types from communicating via event channels or grants
>>> + - Control which type of domains can use device passthrough (and which devices)
>>
>> I disagree with this snippet. This is an example of what you can do with
>> FLASK. You can use flask to do those two actions. Adding the word
>> "types" in there takes it from being a concrete example to being more
>> ambiguous.
> "Prevent domains belonging to different types to communicate via event channels or grants". Does this sounds better.
>
> I think that its important to use the word "type" so that user doesn't get a wrong impression that the policy is per domain, while in actual its per type.
I think it would be clearer to leave the examples as is, but add a sentence to the
following paragraph about how the policy is written based on types.
For the other changes, I agree Doug's rewording is a bit clearer than the original.
--
Daniel De Graaf
National Security Agency
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2016-07-19 9:05 [PATCH] XSM-docs: Flask operates on domain types and not on individual domain. Updated the documentation to reflect this Anshul Makkar
2016-07-19 13:30 ` Doug Goldstein
2016-07-19 15:21 ` anshul makkar
2016-07-19 15:29 ` Daniel De Graaf [this message]
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