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From: Giovanni Cabiddu <giovanni.cabiddu@intel.com>
To: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
Cc: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, Adam Guerin <adam.guerin@intel.com>,
	Tomasz Kowallik <tomaszx.kowalik@intel.com>,
	Wojciech Ziemba <wojciech.ziemba@intel.com>,
	Fiona Trahe <fiona.trahe@intel.com>,
	linux-crypto@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH next 2/3] Documentation: qat: rewrite description
Date: Tue, 12 Jul 2022 22:54:44 +0100	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <Ys3tpPBUS+ujnaoy@silpixa00400314> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20220712092954.142027-3-bagasdotme@gmail.com>

On Tue, Jul 12, 2022 at 04:29:53PM +0700, Bagas Sanjaya wrote:
> The sysfs description contains redundancy on returned and allowed values
> list, due to the described sysfs is read-write. Rewrite.
> 
> Cc: Adam Guerin <adam.guerin@intel.com>
> Cc: Tomasz Kowallik <tomaszx.kowalik@intel.com>
> Cc: Giovanni Cabiddu <giovanni.cabiddu@intel.com>
> Cc: Wojciech Ziemba <wojciech.ziemba@intel.com>
> Cc: Fiona Trahe <fiona.trahe@intel.com>
> Cc: linux-crypto@vger.kernel.org
> Cc: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org
> Signed-off-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-driver-qat | 34 +++++++---------------
>  1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-driver-qat b/Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-driver-qat
> index 43e081ec22cc4a..be6c200abd783c 100644
> --- a/Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-driver-qat
> +++ b/Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-driver-qat
> @@ -2,18 +2,14 @@ What:		/sys/bus/pci/devices/<BDF>/qat/state
>  Date:		June 2022
>  KernelVersion:	5.20
>  Contact:	qat-linux@intel.com
> -Description:	Reports the current state of the QAT device and allows to
> -		change it.
> +Description:	(RW) Reports the current state of the QAT device. Write to
> +		the file to initalize and start the device or to stop it.
                            ^^^^^^^^^
Typo: initalize.
It is possible just to say: "Write to the file to start or stop the
device".

Regards,

-- 
Giovanni

  parent reply	other threads:[~2022-07-12 21:55 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 8+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2022-07-12  9:29 [PATCH next 0/3] miscellaneous documentation fixes for linux-next Bagas Sanjaya
2022-07-12  9:29 ` [PATCH next 1/3] Documentation: qat: Use code block for qat sysfs example Bagas Sanjaya
2022-07-12 11:32   ` Giovanni Cabiddu
2022-07-12  9:29 ` [PATCH next 2/3] Documentation: qat: rewrite description Bagas Sanjaya
2022-07-12 11:33   ` Giovanni Cabiddu
2022-07-12 21:54   ` Giovanni Cabiddu [this message]
2022-07-12  9:29 ` [PATCH next 3/3] Documentation: kvm: extend KVM_S390_ZPCI_OP subheading underline Bagas Sanjaya
2022-07-12  9:38   ` Christian Borntraeger

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