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Linux x86_64; rv:68.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/68.4.1 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="------------F43CF962B5F472510C7E1B4F" Content-Language: en-US --------------F43CF962B5F472510C7E1B4F Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-7 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On 2/11/20 11:16 AM, rpjday@crashcourse.ca wrote: > Minor fixes: > > - punctuation > - capitalization > - markup > - wording > > Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day Wrong ML. We have a docs@lists.yoctoproject.org with patchwork support. - armin > > --- > > diff --git a/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-development-e= nvironment.xml b/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-development-= environment.xml > index 2f1bd1610..dd12814fc 100644 > --- a/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-development-environm= ent.xml > +++ b/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-development-environm= ent.xml > @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ > The Development Host > > > - A development host or > + A development host or > = build host > is key to using the Yocto Project. > Because the goal of the Yocto Project is to develop images or > @@ -389,7 +389,7 @@ > In summary, a single point of entry > exists for changes into a "master" or development branch of the > Git repository, which is controlled by the project=A2s maintain= er. > - And, a set of developers exist who independently develop, test,= and > + In addition, a set of developers exist who independently develo= p, test, and > submit changes to "contrib" areas for the maintainer to examine= . > The maintainer then chooses which changes are going to become a > permanent part of the project. > diff --git a/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-yp-intro.xml = b/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-yp-intro.xml > index dbf62cc16..87b7e40b3 100644 > --- a/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-yp-intro.xml > +++ b/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-yp-intro.xml > @@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ > Additionally, if you have used the Yocto Projec= t to > create an image or application and you find you= rself > not able to support it, commercial Linux vendor= s such > - as Wind River, Mentor Graphics, Timesys, and EN= EA could > + as Wind River, Mentor Graphics, Timesys, and En= ea could > take it and provide ongoing support. > These vendors have offerings that are built usi= ng > the Yocto Project. > @@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ > not part of a standard toolchain, you can easil= y > customize that toolchain through specification = of > platform-specific tuning parameters. > - And, should you need to use a third-party toolc= hain, > + In addition, should you need to use a third-par= ty toolchain, > mechanisms built into the Yocto Project allow f= or that. > > > @@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ > Initial Build Times Can be Significan= t: > Long initial build times are unfortunately unav= oidable > due to the large number of packages initially b= uilt > - from scratch for a fully functioning Linux syst= em. > + from scratch for a fully-functioning Linux syst= em. > Once that initial build is completed, however, = the > shared-state (sstate) cache mechanism Yocto Pro= ject > uses keeps the system from rebuilding packages = that > @@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ > To illustrate how layers are used to keep things modular, c= onsider > machine customizations. > These types of customizations typically reside in a special= layer, > - rather than a general layer, called a BSP Layer. > + rather than a general layer, called a BSP layer<= /firstterm>. > Furthermore, the machine customizations should be isolated = from > recipes and Metadata that support a new GUI environment, > for example. > @@ -852,9 +852,9 @@ > > > > - This section provides an introduction to the choices or > + This section provides an introduction to the choices of > development methods you have when setting up your Build Hos= t. > - Depending on the your particular workflow preference and th= e > + Depending on your particular workflow preference and the > type of operating system your Build Host runs, several choi= ces > exist that allow you to use the Yocto Project. > > @@ -1013,7 +1013,7 @@ > > > > - Poky has a regular, well established, six-month release cyc= le > + Poky has a regular, well-established, six-month release cyc= le > under its own version. > Major releases occur at the same time major releases (point > releases) occur for the Yocto Project, which are typically = in the > @@ -1104,7 +1104,7 @@ > select (DEB, RPM, or IPK) is used to roll up the so= ftware. > > > - Different QA and sanity checks run throughout entir= e > + Different QA and sanity checks run throughout the e= ntire > build process. > > > @@ -1145,7 +1145,7 @@ > user-defined variables, and hardware configuration > information. > These files tell the > - Open-Embedded build system > + OpenEmbedded build system > what to build and what to put into the image to sup= port a > particular platform. > > @@ -1177,7 +1177,7 @@ > For more detailed information on layers, see = the > "Understanding and Creating Layers" > section in the Yocto Project Development Tasks Manu= al. > - For a discussion specifically on BSP Layers, see th= e > + For a discussion specifically on BSP layers, see th= e > "BSP= Layers" > section in the Yocto Project Board Support Packages= (BSP) > Developer's Guide. > @@ -1234,7 +1234,7 @@ > developed by the OpenEmbedded community that has be= en > pared down into a smaller, core set of continuously > validated recipes. > - The result is a tightly controlled and quality-assu= red > + The result is a tightly-controlled and quality-assu= red > core set of recipes. > > You can see the Metadata in the > @@ -1303,7 +1303,7 @@ > patches to apply. > Recipes describe dependencies for libraries or for = other > recipes as well as configuration and compilation op= tions. > - Related recipes are consolidated into a layer. > + Related recipes are typically consolidated into a l= ayer. > > > > > >=20 --------------F43CF962B5F472510C7E1B4F Content-Type: text/html; charset=iso-8859-7 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

On 2/11/20 11:16 AM, rpjday@crashcourse.ca wrote:
Minor fixes:

  - punctuation
  - capitalization
  - markup
  - wording

Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <rpjday@crashcourse.ca>

Wrong ML. We have a docs@lists.yoctoproject.org with patchw= ork support.

- armin

---

diff --git a/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-development-env=
ironment.xml b/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-development-en=
vironment.xml
index 2f1bd1610..dd12814fc 100644
--- a/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-development-environmen=
t.xml
+++ b/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-development-environmen=
t.xml
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
     <title>The Development Host</title>

     <para>
-        A development host or
+        A <firstterm>development host</firstterm> or
         <ulink url=3D'&YOCTO_DOCS_REF_URL;#hardware-build-system-t=
erm'>build host</ulink>
         is key to using the Yocto Project.
         Because the goal of the Yocto Project is to develop images or
@@ -389,7 +389,7 @@
         In summary, a single point of entry
         exists for changes into a "master" or development branch of the
         Git repository, which is controlled by the project=A2s maintainer=
.
-        And, a set of developers exist who independently develop, test, a=
nd
+        In addition, a set of developers exist who independently develop,=
 test, and
         submit changes to "contrib" areas for the maintainer to examine.
         The maintainer then chooses which changes are going to become a
         permanent part of the project.
diff --git a/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-yp-intro.xml b/=
documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-yp-intro.xml
index dbf62cc16..87b7e40b3 100644
--- a/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-yp-intro.xml
+++ b/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-yp-intro.xml
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@
                         Additionally, if you have used the Yocto Project =
to
                         create an image or application and you find yours=
elf
                         not able to support it, commercial Linux vendors =
such
-                        as Wind River, Mentor Graphics, Timesys, and ENEA=
 could
+                        as Wind River, Mentor Graphics, Timesys, and Enea=
 could
                         take it and provide ongoing support.
                         These vendors have offerings that are built using
                         the Yocto Project.
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@
                         not part of a standard toolchain, you can easily
                         customize that toolchain through specification of
                         platform-specific tuning parameters.
-                        And, should you need to use a third-party toolcha=
in,
+                        In addition, should you need to use a third-party=
 toolchain,
                         mechanisms built into the Yocto Project allow for=
 that.
                         </para></listitem>
                     <listitem><para>
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@
                         <emphasis>Initial Build Times Can be Signif=
icant:</emphasis>
                         Long initial build times are unfortunately unavoi=
dable
                         due to the large number of packages initially bui=
lt
-                        from scratch for a fully functioning Linux system=
.
+                        from scratch for a fully-functioning Linux system=
.
                         Once that initial build is completed, however, th=
e
                         shared-state (sstate) cache mechanism Yocto Proje=
ct
                         uses keeps the system from rebuilding packages th=
at
@@ -358,7 +358,7 @@
             To illustrate how layers are used to keep things modular, con=
sider
             machine customizations.
             These types of customizations typically reside in a special l=
ayer,
-            rather than a general layer, called a BSP Layer.
+            rather than a general layer, called a <firstterm>BSP la=
yer</firstterm>.
             Furthermore, the machine customizations should be isolated fr=
om
             recipes and Metadata that support a new GUI environment,
             for example.
@@ -852,9 +852,9 @@
         </para>

         <para>
-            This section provides an introduction to the choices or
+            This section provides an introduction to the choices of
             development methods you have when setting up your Build Host.
-            Depending on the your particular workflow preference and the
+            Depending on your particular workflow preference and the
             type of operating system your Build Host runs, several choice=
s
             exist that allow you to use the Yocto Project.
             <note>
@@ -1013,7 +1013,7 @@
         </para>

         <para>
-            Poky has a regular, well established, six-month release cycle
+            Poky has a regular, well-established, six-month release cycle
             under its own version.
             Major releases occur at the same time major releases (point
             releases) occur for the Yocto Project, which are typically in=
 the
@@ -1104,7 +1104,7 @@
                     select (DEB, RPM, or IPK) is used to roll up the soft=
ware.
                     </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para>
-                    Different QA and sanity checks run throughout entire
+                    Different QA and sanity checks run throughout the ent=
ire
                     build process.
                     </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para>
@@ -1145,7 +1145,7 @@
                     user-defined variables, and hardware configuration
                     information.
                     These files tell the
-                    <ulink url=3D'&YOCTO_DOCS_REF_URL;#build-syste=
m-term'>Open-Embedded build system</ulink>
+                    <ulink url=3D'&YOCTO_DOCS_REF_URL;#build-syste=
m-term'>OpenEmbedded build system</ulink>
                     what to build and what to put into the image to suppo=
rt a
                     particular platform.
                     </para></listitem>
@@ -1177,7 +1177,7 @@
                     <para>For more detailed information on layers, =
see the
                     "<ulink url=3D'&YOCTO_DOCS_DEV_URL;#understand=
ing-and-creating-layers'>Understanding and Creating Layers</ulink>=
"
                     section in the Yocto Project Development Tasks Manual=
.
-                    For a discussion specifically on BSP Layers, see the
+                    For a discussion specifically on BSP layers, see the
                     "<ulink url=3D'&YOCTO_DOCS_BSP_URL;#bsp-layers=
'>BSP Layers</ulink>"
                     section in the Yocto Project Board Support Packages (=
BSP)
                     Developer's Guide.
@@ -1234,7 +1234,7 @@
                     developed by the OpenEmbedded community that has been
                     pared down into a smaller, core set of continuously
                     validated recipes.
-                    The result is a tightly controlled and quality-assure=
d
+                    The result is a tightly-controlled and quality-assure=
d
                     core set of recipes.</para>

                     <para>You can see the Metadata in the
@@ -1303,7 +1303,7 @@
                     patches to apply.
                     Recipes describe dependencies for libraries or for ot=
her
                     recipes as well as configuration and compilation opti=
ons.
-                    Related recipes are consolidated into a layer.
+                    Related recipes are typically consolidated into a lay=
er.
                     </para></listitem>
             </itemizedlist>
         </para>




    

    

  


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