From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1757043AbcCVQAh (ORCPT ); Tue, 22 Mar 2016 12:00:37 -0400 Received: from mail-pf0-f170.google.com ([209.85.192.170]:33546 "EHLO mail-pf0-f170.google.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1752430AbcCVQAf (ORCPT ); Tue, 22 Mar 2016 12:00:35 -0400 Date: Tue, 22 Mar 2016 09:00:32 -0700 From: Eduardo Valentin To: "Champ, Andy" Cc: Javi Merino , "corbet@lwn.net" , "durgadoss.r@intel.com" , "leo.yan@linaro.org" , "kapileshwar.singh@arm.com" , "wni@nvidia.com" , "linux-doc@vger.kernel.org" , "linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org" Subject: Re: [PATCH] Syntactic and factual errors in the API document Message-ID: <20160322160030.GA4079@localhost.localdomain> References: <1458650245-24303-1-git-send-email-andycham@amazon.com> <20160322143529.GB3087@e104805> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.23 (2014-03-12) Sender: linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Hello Andy, On Tue, Mar 22, 2016 at 12:37:25PM +0000, Andy Champ wrote: > There are several places where the English in the document is syntactically > invalid, or unclear. There are also one or two factual errors. > > --- > Documentation/thermal/sysfs-api.txt | 44 ++++++++++++++++++------------------- > 1 file changed, 22 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-) Thanks for your patch improving the documentation. I have no comments in the text correction. The only minor is that the patch title should have 'thermal:' prefix (have a look in the git log Documentation/thermal/sysfs-api.txt). Also, I will get this patch only after the merge window is finished and my current pending patches queue has been sent and merged. BR, Eduardo Valentin