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Date: Sat, 16 Dec 2017 17:15:30 -0800
From: Matthew Wilcox <willy@infradead.org>
Subject: Re: [PATCH 7/8] mm: Document how to use struct page
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To: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>
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On Sat, Dec 16, 2017 at 09:47:16AM -0800, Randy Dunlap wrote:
> On 12/16/2017 08:44 AM, Matthew Wilcox wrote:
> > + * even after they have been recycled to a different purpose.  The page cache
> > + * will read and writes some of the fields in struct page to lock the page,
> 
> "will read and writes" seems awkward to me.
> Can that be:
>     * reads and writes

Sure!  I think I intended to write "will read and write", but fewer words is
usually better.

Thanks for reading.

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