From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from relay2-d.mail.gandi.net (relay2-d.mail.gandi.net [217.70.183.194]) by mx.groups.io with SMTP id smtpd.web10.219.1617117553352016669 for ; Tue, 30 Mar 2021 08:19:13 -0700 Authentication-Results: mx.groups.io; dkim=missing; spf=pass (domain: bootlin.com, ip: 217.70.183.194, mailfrom: michael.opdenacker@bootlin.com) X-Originating-IP: 92.150.42.106 Received: from localhost (lfbn-mar-1-834-106.w92-150.abo.wanadoo.fr [92.150.42.106]) (Authenticated sender: michael.opdenacker@bootlin.com) by relay2-d.mail.gandi.net (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 9882C4000F for ; Tue, 30 Mar 2021 15:19:11 +0000 (UTC) From: "Michael Opdenacker" To: docs@lists.yoctoproject.org Subject: [PATCH 0/1] YP overview manual: style improvements Date: Tue, 30 Mar 2021 17:19:04 +0200 Message-Id: <20210330151905.13402-1-michael.opdenacker@bootlin.com> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.25.1 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit I'm starting to read the YP manuals to better understand the project and its resources. This is also an opportunity to propose style updates, and sometimes a more correct way of explaining some concepts. Here are my first proposed improvements, this time on the first part of the YP Overview Manual. Note that this document was reviewed on an e-book reader through Sphinx' "epub" export ("make epub"). Don't hesitate to try this too, the output is pretty good, except for the graphics that would need upscaling (at least in my case), but this is another topic. Thanks in advance for your reviews! Michael.