From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from relay10.mail.gandi.net (relay10.mail.gandi.net [217.70.178.230]) by mx.groups.io with SMTP id smtpd.web10.34425.1620051766083041846 for ; Mon, 03 May 2021 07:22:46 -0700 Authentication-Results: mx.groups.io; dkim=missing; spf=pass (domain: bootlin.com, ip: 217.70.178.230, mailfrom: michael.opdenacker@bootlin.com) Received: from [10.0.0.19] (lfbn-mar-1-666-11.w109-208.abo.wanadoo.fr [109.208.196.11]) (Authenticated sender: michael.opdenacker@bootlin.com) by relay10.mail.gandi.net (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id B25CE240012; Mon, 3 May 2021 14:22:42 +0000 (UTC) Subject: Re: [docs] [PATCH] sdk-manual: various cleanups to intro.rst To: Quentin Schulz , docs@lists.yoctoproject.org, "Robert P. J. Day" References: From: "Michael Opdenacker" Organization: Bootlin Message-ID: <600b21c7-859d-ae19-4d2d-19e3807a79d9@bootlin.com> Date: Mon, 3 May 2021 16:22:42 +0200 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:78.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/78.7.1 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Language: en-US Hi Robert, Thanks for these improvements! On 5/1/21 9:11 PM, Quentin Schulz wrote: > >> Welcome to the Yocto Project Application Development and the Extensible >> -Software Development Kit (eSDK) manual. This manual provides information >> -that explains how to use both the Yocto Project extensible and standard >> +Software Development Kit (eSDK) manual. This manual >> +explains how to use both the Yocto Project extensible and standard >> SDKs to develop applications and images. Actually, I caught multiple ones like this while reading the manuals (still ongoing work). I'll submit more such improvements. Sometimes the style is too verbose indeed. >> The :term:`Cross-Development Toolchain` consists >> of a cross-compiler, cross-linker, and cross-debugger that are used to >> -develop user-space applications for targeted hardware. Additionally, for >> -an extensible SDK, the toolchain also has built-in ``devtool`` >> +develop user-space applications for targeted hardwarer; in addition, > Small typo here, should be hardware and not hardwarer I think. I've fixed it and merged your patch into "master-next", with my "Reviewed-by" note too. Thanks to you both Robert and Quentin, Michael. -- Michael Opdenacker, Bootlin Embedded Linux and Kernel engineering https://bootlin.com