From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-5.3 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00, HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS,MAILING_LIST_MULTI,NICE_REPLY_A,SPF_HELO_NONE, SPF_PASS,USER_AGENT_SANE_1 autolearn=no autolearn_force=no version=3.4.0 Received: from mail.kernel.org (mail.kernel.org [198.145.29.99]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2EA92C4338F for ; Wed, 11 Aug 2021 00:48:02 +0000 (UTC) Received: from mails.dpdk.org (mails.dpdk.org [217.70.189.124]) by mail.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 75D9D60C40 for ; Wed, 11 Aug 2021 00:48:01 +0000 (UTC) DMARC-Filter: OpenDMARC Filter v1.4.1 mail.kernel.org 75D9D60C40 Authentication-Results: mail.kernel.org; dmarc=fail (p=none dis=none) header.from=huawei.com Authentication-Results: mail.kernel.org; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=dpdk.org Received: from [217.70.189.124] (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mails.dpdk.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3C07840150; Wed, 11 Aug 2021 02:48:00 +0200 (CEST) Received: from szxga03-in.huawei.com (szxga03-in.huawei.com [45.249.212.189]) by mails.dpdk.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 295084003C for ; Wed, 11 Aug 2021 02:47:58 +0200 (CEST) Received: from dggemv711-chm.china.huawei.com (unknown [172.30.72.53]) by szxga03-in.huawei.com (SkyGuard) with ESMTP id 4GkrdZ3mB8z84hw; Wed, 11 Aug 2021 08:42:58 +0800 (CST) Received: from dggpeml500024.china.huawei.com (7.185.36.10) by dggemv711-chm.china.huawei.com (10.1.198.66) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_128_GCM_SHA256) id 15.1.2176.2; Wed, 11 Aug 2021 08:47:56 +0800 Received: from [10.40.190.165] (10.40.190.165) by dggpeml500024.china.huawei.com (7.185.36.10) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_128_GCM_SHA256) id 15.1.2176.2; Wed, 11 Aug 2021 08:47:56 +0800 To: "Walsh, Conor" , "thomas@monjalon.net" , "Yigit, Ferruh" , "Richardson, Bruce" , "jerinj@marvell.com" , "jerinjacobk@gmail.com" , "andrew.rybchenko@oktetlabs.ru" CC: "dev@dpdk.org" , "mb@smartsharesystems.com" , "nipun.gupta@nxp.com" , "hemant.agrawal@nxp.com" , "maxime.coquelin@redhat.com" , "honnappa.nagarahalli@arm.com" , "david.marchand@redhat.com" , "sburla@marvell.com" , "pkapoor@marvell.com" , "Ananyev, Konstantin" References: <1625231891-2963-1-git-send-email-fengchengwen@huawei.com> <1628596454-32918-1-git-send-email-fengchengwen@huawei.com> <1628596454-32918-6-git-send-email-fengchengwen@huawei.com> From: fengchengwen Message-ID: <64320d0e-ab30-fd14-4832-eed74a3bc37c@huawei.com> Date: Wed, 11 Aug 2021 08:47:55 +0800 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows NT 10.0; WOW64; rv:68.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/68.11.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Language: en-US Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Originating-IP: [10.40.190.165] X-ClientProxiedBy: dggems706-chm.china.huawei.com (10.3.19.183) To dggpeml500024.china.huawei.com (7.185.36.10) X-CFilter-Loop: Reflected Subject: Re: [dpdk-dev] [PATCH v14 5/6] doc: add DMA device library guide X-BeenThere: dev@dpdk.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: DPDK patches and discussions List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: dev-bounces@dpdk.org Sender: "dev" Many thanks, will fix in v15 On 2021/8/10 23:27, Walsh, Conor wrote: > [snip] > > Hi Chengwen, > I have included some feedback to improve the grammar and readability > of the docs inline. > [snip]