Re: [PATCH 7/8] Doc/git-submodule: improve readability and grammar of a sentence

[Stefan Beller <sbeller@google.com>]

On Sat, Jan 6, 2018 at 10:46 AM, Kaartic Sivaraam
<kaartic.sivaraam@gmail.com> wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Kaartic Sivaraam <kaartic.sivaraam@gmail.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/git-submodule.txt | 6 +++---
>  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/git-submodule.txt b/Documentation/git-submodule.txt
> index ff612001d..befbccde6 100644
> --- a/Documentation/git-submodule.txt
> +++ b/Documentation/git-submodule.txt
> @@ -132,9 +132,9 @@ expects by cloning missing submodules and updating the working tree of
>  the submodules. The "updating" can be done in several ways depending
>  on command line options and the value of `submodule.<name>.update`
>  configuration variable. The command line option takes precedence over
> -the configuration variable. if neither is given, a checkout is performed.
> -update procedures supported both from the command line as well as setting
> -`submodule.<name>.update`:
> +the configuration variable. If neither is given, a checkout is performed.
> +The update procedures supported both from the command line as well as
> +through the `submodule.<name>.update` configuration are:

Makes sense!
Thanks,
Stefan

>
>         checkout;; the commit recorded in the superproject will be
>             checked out in the submodule on a detached HEAD.
> --
> 2.16.0.rc0.223.g4a4ac8367
>