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From: "Khem Raj" <raj.khem@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 31 Mar 2021 08:39:31 -0700
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Subject: Re: [docs] [PATCH 1/1] YP overview manual: style improvements
To: Michael Opdenacker <michael.opdenacker@bootlin.com>
Cc: docs@lists.yoctoproject.org
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On Wed, Mar 31, 2021 at 2:14 AM Michael Opdenacker
<michael.opdenacker@bootlin.com> wrote:
>
> Hi Khem,
>
> Thanks for your review!
>
> On 3/30/21 9:50 PM, Khem Raj wrote:
> >
> >
> > On 3/30/21 8:19 AM, Michael Opdenacker wrote:
> >> - A few style improvements
> >> - Fix a few typos
> >> - Fix one of these typos happening in ref-manual/migration-2.1.rst
> >>    too
> >>
> >
> > thanks, this looks great, I was curious if the formatting piece will
> > be automatic for display, right ? or do we need some work in that
> > direction too.
>
>
> Oops, I must confess I'm not sure I understand what you mean here. Could
> you elaborate?
>

the left and right margins,  how do they look on epub readers for this
document was
what I was wondering.

> Cheers,
>
> Michael.
>
> --
> Michael Opdenacker, Bootlin
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>