From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-10.0 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00, HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS,INCLUDES_PATCH,MAILING_LIST_MULTI,SIGNED_OFF_BY, SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_PASS autolearn=unavailable autolearn_force=no version=3.4.0 Received: from mail.kernel.org (mail.kernel.org [198.145.29.99]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 291ADC433E4 for ; Tue, 21 Jul 2020 10:49:22 +0000 (UTC) Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by mail.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0B55820674 for ; Tue, 21 Jul 2020 10:49:22 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1729208AbgGUKtV (ORCPT ); Tue, 21 Jul 2020 06:49:21 -0400 Received: from mx0b-001b2d01.pphosted.com ([148.163.158.5]:29826 "EHLO mx0b-001b2d01.pphosted.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1729387AbgGUKtV (ORCPT ); Tue, 21 Jul 2020 06:49:21 -0400 Received: from pps.filterd (m0098417.ppops.net [127.0.0.1]) by mx0a-001b2d01.pphosted.com (8.16.0.42/8.16.0.42) with SMTP id 06LA4M24136103; Tue, 21 Jul 2020 06:49:19 -0400 Received: from pps.reinject (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mx0a-001b2d01.pphosted.com with ESMTP id 32d5pfmkxu-1 (version=TLSv1.2 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 bits=256 verify=NOT); Tue, 21 Jul 2020 06:49:19 -0400 Received: from m0098417.ppops.net (m0098417.ppops.net [127.0.0.1]) by pps.reinject (8.16.0.36/8.16.0.36) with SMTP id 06LA4Vow137276; Tue, 21 Jul 2020 06:49:19 -0400 Received: from ppma02fra.de.ibm.com (47.49.7a9f.ip4.static.sl-reverse.com [159.122.73.71]) by mx0a-001b2d01.pphosted.com with ESMTP id 32d5pfmkwx-1 (version=TLSv1.2 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 bits=256 verify=NOT); Tue, 21 Jul 2020 06:49:18 -0400 Received: from pps.filterd (ppma02fra.de.ibm.com [127.0.0.1]) by ppma02fra.de.ibm.com (8.16.0.42/8.16.0.42) with SMTP id 06LAaA7v011777; Tue, 21 Jul 2020 10:49:17 GMT Received: from b06avi18878370.portsmouth.uk.ibm.com (b06avi18878370.portsmouth.uk.ibm.com [9.149.26.194]) by ppma02fra.de.ibm.com with ESMTP id 32brq7uv39-1 (version=TLSv1.2 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 bits=256 verify=NOT); Tue, 21 Jul 2020 10:49:16 +0000 Received: from b06wcsmtp001.portsmouth.uk.ibm.com (b06wcsmtp001.portsmouth.uk.ibm.com [9.149.105.160]) by b06avi18878370.portsmouth.uk.ibm.com (8.14.9/8.14.9/NCO v10.0) with ESMTP id 06LAlxFd60621284 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 bits=256 verify=OK); Tue, 21 Jul 2020 10:47:59 GMT Received: from b06wcsmtp001.portsmouth.uk.ibm.com (unknown [127.0.0.1]) by IMSVA (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6BFA3A405B; Tue, 21 Jul 2020 10:47:59 +0000 (GMT) Received: from b06wcsmtp001.portsmouth.uk.ibm.com (unknown [127.0.0.1]) by IMSVA (Postfix) with ESMTP id 77BD7A4054; Tue, 21 Jul 2020 10:47:58 +0000 (GMT) Received: from linux.ibm.com (unknown [9.148.205.118]) by b06wcsmtp001.portsmouth.uk.ibm.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS; Tue, 21 Jul 2020 10:47:58 +0000 (GMT) Date: Tue, 21 Jul 2020 13:47:54 +0300 From: Mike Rapoport To: Bhaskar Chowdhury Cc: rppt@linux.vnet.ibm.com, corbet@lwn.net, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH] Made single word change in fourth paragraph for right sentence construction Message-ID: <20200721104754.GG802087@linux.ibm.com> References: <20200721101933.32500-1-unixbhaskar@gmail.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20200721101933.32500-1-unixbhaskar@gmail.com> X-TM-AS-GCONF: 00 X-Proofpoint-Virus-Version: vendor=fsecure engine=2.50.10434:6.0.235,18.0.687 definitions=2020-07-21_03:2020-07-21,2020-07-21 signatures=0 X-Proofpoint-Spam-Details: rule=outbound_notspam policy=outbound score=0 bulkscore=0 malwarescore=0 mlxlogscore=999 suspectscore=1 lowpriorityscore=0 adultscore=0 priorityscore=1501 mlxscore=0 phishscore=0 impostorscore=0 spamscore=0 clxscore=1015 classifier=spam adjust=0 reason=mlx scancount=1 engine=8.12.0-2006250000 definitions=main-2007210070 Sender: linux-doc-owner@vger.kernel.org Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org Hi, On Tue, Jul 21, 2020 at 03:49:34PM +0530, Bhaskar Chowdhury wrote: > Signed-off-by: Bhaskar Chowdhury > --- > Mike/Jon, > it is nit ...but catch my eyes while reading...so the patch. That's the right approach! :) It would be great if you could update the patch subject to better describe the context and the actual change, e.g: docs/mm: concepts.rst: remove unnecessary article > Documentation/admin-guide/mm/concepts.rst | 2 +- > 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) > > diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/concepts.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/concepts.rst > index c2531b14bf46..fa0974fbeae7 100644 > --- a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/concepts.rst > +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/concepts.rst > @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ physical memory (demand paging) and provides a mechanism for the > protection and controlled sharing of data between processes. > > With virtual memory, each and every memory access uses a virtual > -address. When the CPU decodes the an instruction that reads (or > +address. When the CPU decodes an instruction that reads (or > writes) from (or to) the system memory, it translates the `virtual` > address encoded in that instruction to a `physical` address that the > memory controller can understand. > -- > 2.26.2 > -- Sincerely yours, Mike.