From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.2 required=3.0 tests=DKIM_SIGNED,DKIM_VALID, DKIM_VALID_AU,FREEMAIL_FORGED_FROMDOMAIN,FREEMAIL_FROM, HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS,MAILING_LIST_MULTI,SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_PASS, USER_AGENT_SANE_1 autolearn=no autolearn_force=no version=3.4.0 Received: from mail.kernel.org (mail.kernel.org [198.145.29.99]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8E96DC2D0C8 for ; Tue, 31 Dec 2019 04:08:18 +0000 (UTC) Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [209.132.180.67]) by mail.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 538272053B for ; Tue, 31 Dec 2019 04:08:18 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: mail.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=gmail.com header.i=@gmail.com header.b="asSVrFaS" Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1726377AbfLaEIR (ORCPT ); Mon, 30 Dec 2019 23:08:17 -0500 Received: from mail-pj1-f47.google.com ([209.85.216.47]:37857 "EHLO mail-pj1-f47.google.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1726364AbfLaEIR (ORCPT ); Mon, 30 Dec 2019 23:08:17 -0500 Received: by mail-pj1-f47.google.com with SMTP id m13so710488pjb.2; Mon, 30 Dec 2019 20:08:17 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20161025; h=subject:to:cc:references:from:message-id:date:user-agent :mime-version:in-reply-to:content-transfer-encoding:content-language; bh=gmHUJOLLaB9uQbD8xdSCvMaI/BTVpj9YMHVwUXulGHY=; b=asSVrFaSM3ptGq2G1MOscGcpUb01d26yJ1MzLhamktRoZQ8FiIByFbu4HdTPDnyuwS 1fTRng1wvRzkpGYrqENuhUmdXDUqWJidl8EKK462/b3EMgBvoRCpt3VLzzBU2cZgEms8 JRUNiERTzLQltnJJCAy1PRQSqI766WvO0gQ/PqEO7mwVPx4Kl7aQHjoSvRVYGdymAYT/ YyKtW9wrzRD6+lnuz8n40iyHhjofP0RamyjZQrwTJMLDozxGLKomLvugc5EU1ZUYAHri K9kKSeiBOL6CFFkrMlmllIle4HgXUTJU682iRuwtttYH98Hl0w06kNpB10iIX19/TFei jGLw== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:subject:to:cc:references:from:message-id:date :user-agent:mime-version:in-reply-to:content-transfer-encoding :content-language; bh=gmHUJOLLaB9uQbD8xdSCvMaI/BTVpj9YMHVwUXulGHY=; b=TJeTzsxF9YzF9Tu3Vw0FhRBNbPf4Ot7XPdwJ2WuGvLP3Z6bOPjFls6uE32KicRMUcl 0LE+8R6gjhbrHx9tlHaO+7BXfxuIjXMRKMIS2X8nuwBJsGbzch/3M13yftewq0kxG+TY /Me5fxsyg4Y7Z0rQhqLqdvjfqovUu6BXwdZTIvkBg3RUvUS/KF0yO4W4LiCBEkbMd+Pm FSor9TG1sqwQPeLZOmnQwryotvx3DpDtxe3lhjaz4YcHEAEnOUcVBfc1R1tP7RXqgYPf wUFkdl9YNbRfAg4mnpisI6ANuJKS3YSsP9xtb/YZR3MxGaG4TVusOj9A8E2wW6igSbSA 8giw== X-Gm-Message-State: APjAAAVIy8CRUDRHsaW7LCJk87zLTsh60++tEKOUrQRpjsJ422iy6h7V ISbJcHDcrkqEokYGQuXLGio= X-Google-Smtp-Source: APXvYqwsLEkZt9ztYkbDCkRzSfI9MOyqrR4KZI+qAEuOfLBSooRKkbzRvuewk5oCTkPh9BXzgrJ7tg== X-Received: by 2002:a17:902:728b:: with SMTP id d11mr59344353pll.49.1577765296478; Mon, 30 Dec 2019 20:08:16 -0800 (PST) Received: from ?IPv6:2804:14d:72b1:8920:da15:c0bd:33c1:e2ad? ([2804:14d:72b1:8920:da15:c0bd:33c1:e2ad]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id c184sm54318701pfa.39.2019.12.30.20.08.13 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 bits=128/128); Mon, 30 Dec 2019 20:08:15 -0800 (PST) Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 2/8] Documentation: nfsroot.txt: convert to ReST To: Jonathan Corbet Cc: mchehab+samsung@kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, skhan@linuxfoundation.org, linux-kernel-mentees@lists.linuxfoundation.org References: <92be5a49b967ce35a305fc5ccfb3efea3f61a19a.1577681164.git.dwlsalmeida@gmail.com> <20191230121807.3a1f5f38@lwn.net> From: "Daniel W. S. Almeida" Message-ID: <47e2ea6e-a808-5012-6f9a-8800fbd3be00@gmail.com> Date: Tue, 31 Dec 2019 01:08:11 -0300 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:68.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/68.3.1 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: <20191230121807.3a1f5f38@lwn.net> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Language: en-US Sender: linux-doc-owner@vger.kernel.org Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org Hi Jon, thanks for the review. Would you please rephrase this? My first language isn't English and I am not sure I understood that. > It's best in general to avoid refilling paragraphs so as to make it clear > what is being changed. But we would also like to avoid creating such long > lines. Perhaps an add-on patch refilling things would satisfy both > criteria here.