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* [PATCH v2] doc: Fix some errors in ras.rst
@ 2020-05-06 16:22 Waiman Long
  2020-05-06 16:37 ` Matthew Wilcox
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 3+ messages in thread
From: Waiman Long @ 2020-05-06 16:22 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Jonathan Corbet, Tony Luck, Borislav Petkov,
	Mauro Carvalho Chehab, James Morse, Robert Richter
  Cc: linux-edac, linux-doc, linux-kernel, Matthew Wilcox, Waiman Long

Make some miscellaneous fixes to the first paragraph of "ECC memory":
 - Change the incorrect "74 bits" to "72 bits".
 - Change "mentioned on" to "mentioned in".
 - Remove the extra "extra".
 - Rephrase some sentences as suggested by Matthew Wilcox.

Signed-off-by: Waiman Long <longman@redhat.com>
---
 Documentation/admin-guide/ras.rst | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/ras.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/ras.rst
index 0310db624964..e48f6bcf305b 100644
--- a/Documentation/admin-guide/ras.rst
+++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/ras.rst
@@ -156,11 +156,11 @@ the labels provided by the BIOS won't match the real ones.
 ECC memory
 ----------
 
-As mentioned on the previous section, ECC memory has extra bits to be
-used for error correction. So, on 64 bit systems, a memory module
-has 64 bits of *data width*, and 74 bits of *total width*. So, there are
-8 bits extra bits to be used for the error detection and correction
-mechanisms. Those extra bits are called *syndrome*\ [#f1]_\ [#f2]_.
+As mentioned in the previous section, ECC memory has extra bits to be
+used for error correction. In the above example, a memory module has
+64 bits of *data width*, and 72 bits of *total width*.  The extra 8
+bits which are used for the error detection and correction mechanisms
+are referred to as the *syndrome*\ [#f1]_\ [#f2]_.
 
 So, when the cpu requests the memory controller to write a word with
 *data width*, the memory controller calculates the *syndrome* in real time,
-- 
2.18.1


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* Re: [PATCH v2] doc: Fix some errors in ras.rst
  2020-05-06 16:22 [PATCH v2] doc: Fix some errors in ras.rst Waiman Long
@ 2020-05-06 16:37 ` Matthew Wilcox
  2020-05-15 17:38   ` Jonathan Corbet
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 3+ messages in thread
From: Matthew Wilcox @ 2020-05-06 16:37 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Waiman Long
  Cc: Jonathan Corbet, Tony Luck, Borislav Petkov,
	Mauro Carvalho Chehab, James Morse, Robert Richter, linux-edac,
	linux-doc, linux-kernel

On Wed, May 06, 2020 at 12:22:17PM -0400, Waiman Long wrote:
> Make some miscellaneous fixes to the first paragraph of "ECC memory":
>  - Change the incorrect "74 bits" to "72 bits".
>  - Change "mentioned on" to "mentioned in".
>  - Remove the extra "extra".
>  - Rephrase some sentences as suggested by Matthew Wilcox.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Waiman Long <longman@redhat.com>

Reviewed-by: Matthew Wilcox (Oracle) <willy@infradead.org>

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* Re: [PATCH v2] doc: Fix some errors in ras.rst
  2020-05-06 16:37 ` Matthew Wilcox
@ 2020-05-15 17:38   ` Jonathan Corbet
  0 siblings, 0 replies; 3+ messages in thread
From: Jonathan Corbet @ 2020-05-15 17:38 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Matthew Wilcox
  Cc: Waiman Long, Tony Luck, Borislav Petkov, Mauro Carvalho Chehab,
	James Morse, Robert Richter, linux-edac, linux-doc, linux-kernel

On Wed, 6 May 2020 09:37:15 -0700
Matthew Wilcox <willy@infradead.org> wrote:

> On Wed, May 06, 2020 at 12:22:17PM -0400, Waiman Long wrote:
> > Make some miscellaneous fixes to the first paragraph of "ECC memory":
> >  - Change the incorrect "74 bits" to "72 bits".
> >  - Change "mentioned on" to "mentioned in".
> >  - Remove the extra "extra".
> >  - Rephrase some sentences as suggested by Matthew Wilcox.
> > 
> > Signed-off-by: Waiman Long <longman@redhat.com>  
> 
> Reviewed-by: Matthew Wilcox (Oracle) <willy@infradead.org>
> 
Applied, thanks.

jon

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