From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2A6BAC25B06 for ; Thu, 11 Aug 2022 21:14:04 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S235677AbiHKVOD (ORCPT ); Thu, 11 Aug 2022 17:14:03 -0400 Received: from lindbergh.monkeyblade.net ([23.128.96.19]:50940 "EHLO lindbergh.monkeyblade.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S229594AbiHKVOC (ORCPT ); Thu, 11 Aug 2022 17:14:02 -0400 Received: from ams.source.kernel.org (ams.source.kernel.org [145.40.68.75]) by lindbergh.monkeyblade.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id D50AD99B57; Thu, 11 Aug 2022 14:14:01 -0700 (PDT) Received: from smtp.kernel.org (relay.kernel.org [52.25.139.140]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ams.source.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 7219DB82292; Thu, 11 Aug 2022 21:14:00 +0000 (UTC) Received: by smtp.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 52274C433D6; Thu, 11 Aug 2022 21:13:58 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=kernel.org; s=k20201202; t=1660252439; bh=UEGFuFwbf7DEIfkoWKKvlIAB1teWJmIDIeNakWiee3Y=; h=Date:From:To:Cc:Subject:References:In-Reply-To:From; b=dJjPDtiRW21vLIJAnCb8MrA7nuiYS7pVsXO1wHR4sMMPt15eQax/fRzvsdnVv4cmB Su1honK3uqVEpA2aL+PyW8dDjgAwLOA0BghaDm7WKCg1f1frWz2FzPZ80/KvzyfeLP 1oLPfXTRzQbv1YwAOXEuBT/G8bNqMYVaShVtzCvGcDBlC/CQXVkSFeQHNpBo+/Y0ET KxY6+pWrN6MVbHIEn9RMNXP94oFr22NDXG5m8VZr38WnXczDGfXDqy8Dr2rTxFJTl5 CS+xyAJ6UrMKet9bnluQ77mOLN3CksMOLo4XjWM5GM1YBUOSD1uv7Y2bxSzGdvNv+9 FIYsyM4CVUQew== Date: Thu, 11 Aug 2022 23:13:55 +0200 From: Wolfram Sang To: luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com Cc: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-i2c@vger.kernel.org, Peter Rosin , linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH 8/9] docs: i2c: i2c-sysfs: improve wording Message-ID: Mail-Followup-To: Wolfram Sang , luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-i2c@vger.kernel.org, Peter Rosin , linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org References: <20220808141708.1021103-1-luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com> <20220808141708.1021103-9-luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha512; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="dcuh0Jc144kXWsQ6" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20220808141708.1021103-9-luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com> Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-i2c@vger.kernel.org --dcuh0Jc144kXWsQ6 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline > -First, let us define a couple of terminologies to avoid confusions in the later > -sections. > +First, let us define some terms to avoid confusions in the later sections. Does 'confusion' have a plural? I think singular is better here. Rest looks good. --dcuh0Jc144kXWsQ6 Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name="signature.asc" -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- iQIzBAABCgAdFiEEOZGx6rniZ1Gk92RdFA3kzBSgKbYFAmL1cRMACgkQFA3kzBSg Kbasjg//a9VmQM1gnBCacQH0b2PslGxIXoQ415Ih9+THfVTYnHmAhoKAz8FvAuTd 8vgGy8lNKPWVuoa2xzl26kW6F8Ifv4SP3zjwvvKjNsTnHj4gyKaddaOvoTZK49wY 2QtUViYz00bCYRsQQRB5hq15klHoig3vOyfuaamdRQIxXdozwXTxZw5YV+EYM0ye MSj1jcEDb50+byl9LQGERuIACVneKOhCQokzxsfC3frJZI+Oh3Wzjymr+xvQNal5 ysZqC2tIR7YsEDpi5Mgc0EtnYoVqruMfF4UTGKFD2FMbK+l2T/Y7EI7yJydIksNs 600Uy9ZoknQUnCqgv79lI+jyDhv3RQ+UpmMFGlift9JOW3Fp0nhwS+JcPcoiP4gv QQXoZsoDkggCJ+avo3+oOJHl7eHcYdOpAOVWLBv8XHGkU7O06b8LRFb90C0mG0Zh bl27kkIP8Pm5wcwLa/7EEDst2NnCwxmMH/f1UYdfZaYeOheudpnszRNzNP6uUl3O yGW9F2KoSVo6YXunzjHDvjhXbhlSPAmu36CrKZzufxEV2MOMx3RHIaiGB7K9ZWPc Cweqpye4o2CsiX1GW0rReJkN5RFfXR8qrbp0aeWLGDJxNxMqFSk6/zSUmkPa4t0T 1mPC4DnMRdwsoV5MXupf9tPkDOGMvzPZVIQeqB1Rg85XxX2wLwk= =pqOP -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --dcuh0Jc144kXWsQ6--