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From: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>
To: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org
Cc: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>,
	Jiri Kosina <jikos@kernel.org>,
	Benjamin Tissoires <benjamin.tissoires@redhat.com>,
	linux-input@vger.kernel.org, Jonathan Cameron <jic23@kernel.org>,
	Srinivas Pandruvada <srinivas.pandruvada@linux.intel.com>,
	linux-iio@vger.kernel.org, Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>,
	linux-doc@vger.kernel.org
Subject: [PATCH 6/8] Documentation: HID: hid-sensor editing & corrections
Date: Thu,  3 Dec 2020 22:20:20 -0800	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20201204062022.5095-7-rdunlap@infradead.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20201204062022.5095-1-rdunlap@infradead.org>

Do basic editing & correction to hid-sensor.rst:
- use HID consistently instead of hid
- drop a duplicate word
- change article adjective an -> a
- fix grammar & punctuation
- spell out RW -> read-write
- hyphenate multi-word adjectives


Signed-off-by: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>
Cc: Jiri Kosina <jikos@kernel.org>
Cc: Jonathan Cameron <jic23@kernel.org>
Cc: Srinivas Pandruvada <srinivas.pandruvada@linux.intel.com>
Cc: linux-input@vger.kernel.org
Cc: linux-iio@vger.kernel.org
Cc: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
Cc: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org
---
 Documentation/hid/hid-sensor.rst |   18 +++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

--- linux-next-20201201.orig/Documentation/hid/hid-sensor.rst
+++ linux-next-20201201/Documentation/hid/hid-sensor.rst
@@ -48,12 +48,12 @@ for different sensors. For example an ac
 an ambient light sensor can send illumination data.
 So the implementation has two parts:
 
-- Core hid driver
+- Core HID driver
 - Individual sensor processing part (sensor drivers)
 
 Core driver
 -----------
-The core driver registers (hid-sensor-hub) registers as a HID driver. It parses
+The core driver (hid-sensor-hub) registers as a HID driver. It parses
 report descriptors and identifies all the sensors present. It adds an MFD device
 with name HID-SENSOR-xxxx (where xxxx is usage id from the specification).
 
@@ -95,14 +95,14 @@ Registration functions::
 			u32 usage_id,
 			struct hid_sensor_hub_callbacks *usage_callback):
 
-Registers callbacks for an usage id. The callback functions are not allowed
+Registers callbacks for a usage id. The callback functions are not allowed
 to sleep::
 
 
   int sensor_hub_remove_callback(struct hid_sensor_hub_device *hsdev,
 			u32 usage_id):
 
-Removes callbacks for an usage id.
+Removes callbacks for a usage id.
 
 
 Parsing function::
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ This allows some differentiating use cas
 Some common use cases are debug other sensors or to provide some events like
 keyboard attached/detached or lid open/close.
 
-To allow application to utilize these sensors, here they are exported uses sysfs
+To allow application to utilize these sensors, here they are exported using sysfs
 attribute groups, attributes and misc device interface.
 
 An example of this representation on sysfs::
@@ -207,9 +207,9 @@ An example of this representation on sys
   │   │   │   ├── input-1-200202-units
   │   │   │   ├── input-1-200202-value
 
-Here there is a custom sensors with four fields, two feature and two inputs.
+Here there is a custom sensor with four fields: two feature and two inputs.
 Each field is represented by a set of attributes. All fields except the "value"
-are read only. The value field is a RW field.
+are read only. The value field is a read-write field.
 
 Example::
 
@@ -237,6 +237,6 @@ These reports are pushed using misc devi
 	│   │   │   ├── 10:53 -> ../HID-SENSOR-2000e1.6.auto
 	│   ├──  HID-SENSOR-2000e1.6.auto
 
-Each reports can be of variable length preceded by a header. This header
-consist of a 32 bit usage id, 64 bit time stamp and 32 bit length field of raw
+Each report can be of variable length preceded by a header. This header
+consists of a 32-bit usage id, 64-bit time stamp and 32-bit length field of raw
 data.

  parent reply	other threads:[~2020-12-04  6:22 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 13+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2020-12-04  6:20 [PATCH 0/8] Documentation: HID: edit/correct all files Randy Dunlap
2020-12-04  6:20 ` [PATCH 1/8] Documentation: HID: hid-alps editing & corrections Randy Dunlap
2020-12-04  6:20 ` [PATCH 2/8] Documentation: HID: amd-sfh-hid " Randy Dunlap
2020-12-05 17:12   ` Jonathan Cameron
2020-12-14  0:55     ` Randy Dunlap
2020-12-04  6:20 ` [PATCH 3/8] Documentation: HID: hiddev " Randy Dunlap
2020-12-05 17:17   ` Jonathan Cameron
2020-12-04  6:20 ` [PATCH 4/8] Documentation: HID: intel-ish-hid " Randy Dunlap
2020-12-05 17:24   ` Jonathan Cameron
2020-12-04  6:20 ` [PATCH 5/8] Documentation: HID: hidraw " Randy Dunlap
2020-12-04  6:20 ` Randy Dunlap [this message]
2020-12-04  6:20 ` [PATCH 7/8] Documentation: HID: hid-transport " Randy Dunlap
2020-12-04  6:20 ` [PATCH 8/8] Documentation: HID: uhid " Randy Dunlap

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