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[116.206.12.34]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id m7-20020a170902768700b00186b549cdc2sm9923551pll.157.2022.11.09.20.09.33 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 bits=256/256); Wed, 09 Nov 2022 20:09:34 -0800 (PST) Received: by debian.me (Postfix, from userid 1000) id AE254103F55; Thu, 10 Nov 2022 11:09:30 +0700 (WIB) Date: Thu, 10 Nov 2022 11:09:30 +0700 From: Bagas Sanjaya To: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, linux-kselftest@vger.kernel.org, kunit-dev@googlegroups.com Cc: Jonathan Corbet , Brendan Higgins , David Gow , Lukas Bulwahn , Khalid Masum , Sadiya Kazi Subject: Re: [PATCH RESEND 0/7] KUnit documentation rewording Message-ID: References: <20221023130846.63296-1-bagasdotme@gmail.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha256; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="2IAzyiGk8CMOMEah" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20221023130846.63296-1-bagasdotme@gmail.com> Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kselftest@vger.kernel.org --2IAzyiGk8CMOMEah Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Sun, Oct 23, 2022 at 08:08:40PM +0700, Bagas Sanjaya wrote: > Hi everyone, sorry for quickly resending this patch series due to > duplicated patch [7/7] sent as result of amending the corresponding > commit. >=20 > The proses written in KUnit documentation are IMO incomprehensible (my > brain has to process what the meaning of words used) and different from > wordings that I normally read from technical writings. Thus, rewrite these > using clearer words. >=20 > Anyway, it's great to see native English speakers help reviewing this > series. >=20 > The first two patches are v3 of rewriting "Writing Your First Test" > section of "Getting Started" patch [1], which was submitted about a > month ago. The rest are actual documentation rewriting. >=20 > Note that this series only rewrites intro, test writing and running docs. >=20 > [1]: https://lore.kernel.org/lkml/20220929132549.56452-1-bagasdotme@gmail= =2Ecom/ >=20 ping --2IAzyiGk8CMOMEah Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name="signature.asc" -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- iHUEABYIAB0WIQSSYQ6Cy7oyFNCHrUH2uYlJVVFOowUCY2x5dgAKCRD2uYlJVVFO o2eaAP93Zz1AtML2RdwzrudpDIVJvJrKYjlJ0z1SYzK2vamYhAEAidIAw/2EhAnS /5PMzOMF3qAWU+EEvbclMSmph7gAIwU= =GH4c -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --2IAzyiGk8CMOMEah--