From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.1 required=3.0 tests=DKIM_INVALID,DKIM_SIGNED, HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS,MAILING_LIST_MULTI,SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_PASS, USER_AGENT_SANE_1 autolearn=no autolearn_force=no version=3.4.0 Received: from mail.kernel.org (mail.kernel.org [198.145.29.99]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 56691C3F2D2 for ; Fri, 28 Feb 2020 04:36:27 +0000 (UTC) Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [209.132.180.67]) by mail.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2430F246A3 for ; Fri, 28 Feb 2020 04:36:27 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: mail.kernel.org; dkim=fail reason="signature verification failed" (2048-bit key) header.d=infradead.org header.i=@infradead.org header.b="IfcRCBLI" Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1730937AbgB1EgW (ORCPT ); Thu, 27 Feb 2020 23:36:22 -0500 Received: from bombadil.infradead.org ([198.137.202.133]:47786 "EHLO bombadil.infradead.org" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1730800AbgB1EgV (ORCPT ); Thu, 27 Feb 2020 23:36:21 -0500 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; q=dns/txt; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=infradead.org; s=bombadil.20170209; h=Content-Transfer-Encoding: Content-Type:In-Reply-To:MIME-Version:Date:Message-ID:From:References:Cc:To: Subject:Sender:Reply-To:Content-ID:Content-Description; bh=lTW94UBCUPJRu/vgnaOKmsgRovgXjQnsj+f3JMzvz1c=; b=IfcRCBLIneNu+5UXCSEUAv3LJW pVzVIiYsNQ9tvEhVY/XWyzm7EUzAJuy5FUvfEDbE1yY1tBcwrfSerN80p82gTFBLm5yv5FoIHveVU mdUXVyMOiVIavG0A/r2XN+BeRwY3POU2KmLP4niUcDhkGap1WrPpT8TUwoigO/zb2BYkgajKeLX+n Em9Lm6k9r5mySOlgTu64n2fbH4iyzgf8YlHOXhRET/OTHecmQnByFgtWe0+TJxwCeFTVv0LLdmrBt bmkgbeVh/nrvgJq80kf7eguuvTzwsSoD1AH2O3Y0bVP2Y+0aVQRyfBLN01feScl52e0LqGeyuc9Vc 2KSGrHlQ==; Received: from [2601:1c0:6280:3f0::19c2] by bombadil.infradead.org with esmtpsa (Exim 4.92.3 #3 (Red Hat Linux)) id 1j7XNr-0008GL-6V; Fri, 28 Feb 2020 04:36:20 +0000 Subject: Re: [PATCH 1/2] Documentation: bootconfig: Update boot configuration documentation To: Markus Elfring , Masami Hiramatsu , linux-doc@vger.kernel.org Cc: Jonathan Corbet , Steven Rostedt , linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, kernel-janitors@vger.kernel.org References: <158278834245.14966.6179457011671073018.stgit@devnote2> <158278835238.14966.16157216423901327777.stgit@devnote2> <8514c830-319b-33e9-025a-79d399674fb3@web.de> From: Randy Dunlap Message-ID: <130b7415-28b9-b95f-b0a4-3991b530571d@infradead.org> Date: Thu, 27 Feb 2020 20:36:18 -0800 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:68.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/68.5.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: <8514c830-319b-33e9-025a-79d399674fb3@web.de> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Language: en-US Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Sender: linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org On 2/27/20 11:12 AM, Markus Elfring wrote: > >> +The boot configuration syntax allows user to merge partially same word keys >> by brace. For example:: > > “by braces. > For example::”? It is fine as Masami has it IMO. > > >> +The file /proc/bootconfig is a user-space interface to the configuration > > “… is an user-…”? No, "is a user-space" or "is a userspace" is good. -- ~Randy