Re: [v8,6/7] PCI: mediatek-gen3: Add system PM support

[Jianjun Wang <jianjun.wang@mediatek.com>]

Hi Krzysztof,

Thanks for your review,

On Wed, 2021-02-24 at 15:10 +0100, Krzysztof Wilczyński wrote:
> Hi Jianjun,
> 
> > Add suspend_noirq and resume_noirq callback functions to implement
> > PM system suspend hooks for MediaTek Gen3 PCIe controller.
> 
> So, "systems suspend" and "resume" hooks, correct?

The callback functions is suspend_noirq and resume_noirq, should I use
"systems suspend" and "resume" in the commit message?

> 
> > When system suspend, trigger the PCIe link to L2 state and pull down
> 
> It probably would be "the system suspends".
> 
> [...]
> > When system resum, the PCIe link should be re-established and the
> > related control register values should be restored.
> 
> Similarly to the above: "the system resumes".
> 
> [...]
> > +	if (err) {
> > +		dev_err(port->dev, "can not enter L2 state\n");
> > +		return err;
> > +	}
> 
> Most likely you want "cannot" or "can't" in the above error message.
> 
> > +	/* Pull down the PERST# pin */
> > +	val = readl_relaxed(port->base + PCIE_RST_CTRL_REG);
> > +	val |= PCIE_PE_RSTB;
> > +	writel_relaxed(val, port->base + PCIE_RST_CTRL_REG);
> > +
> > +	dev_dbg(port->dev, "enter L2 state success");
> 
> Just a nitpick.  What about "entered L2 states successfully"?
> 
> [...]
> > +	if (err) {
> > +		dev_err(port->dev, "resume failed\n");
> > +		return err;
> > +	}
> 
> This error message does not quite convey that the mtk_pcie_startup_port()
> was the function that failed, which is only a part of what you have to do
> to successfully resume.
> 
> > +	dev_dbg(port->dev, "resume done\n");
> 
> A nitpick.  Probably not needed, as lack of error message would mean
> that the device resumed successfully after being suspended.
> 
> Krzysztof

Thanks.