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* [PATCH net-next 0/2] docs: Fix failover build warnings
@ 2018-07-11 21:42 Tobin C. Harding
  2018-07-11 21:42 ` [PATCH net-next 1/2] docs: networking: Add failover docs to index Tobin C. Harding
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From: Tobin C. Harding @ 2018-07-11 21:42 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: David S. Miller
  Cc: Tobin C. Harding, Sridhar Samudrala, linux-doc, netdev, linux-kernel

Hi Dave,

This is my first patch set to net-next.  Please shout loud and clear if
I've botched anything.

Recently failover and net_failover modules were added to the mainline.
Documentation was included in rst format but they were not added to the
toctree in `networking/index.rst`.  Also building docs for net_failover
is currently emitting a few warnings.

Patch 1 adds failover and net_failover to the index toctree
Patch 2 fixes the build warnings for net_failover

I haven't been super active on netdev list so if there is some reason I
missed why these files are not in the index please do say so.

Has there been any discussion on preferred order for the toctree index
list?  I just added them to the bottom of the list.

thanks,
Tobin.


Tobin C. Harding (2):
  docs: networking: Add failover docs to index
  docs: networking: Fix failover build warnings

 Documentation/networking/index.rst        |   2 +
 Documentation/networking/net_failover.rst | 111 +++++++++++-----------
 2 files changed, 59 insertions(+), 54 deletions(-)

-- 
2.17.1


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* [PATCH net-next 1/2] docs: networking: Add failover docs to index
  2018-07-11 21:42 [PATCH net-next 0/2] docs: Fix failover build warnings Tobin C. Harding
@ 2018-07-11 21:42 ` Tobin C. Harding
  2018-07-11 21:42 ` [PATCH net-next 2/2] docs: networking: Fix failover build warnings Tobin C. Harding
  2018-07-16 18:28 ` [PATCH net-next 0/2] docs: " David Miller
  2 siblings, 0 replies; 5+ messages in thread
From: Tobin C. Harding @ 2018-07-11 21:42 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: David S. Miller
  Cc: Tobin C. Harding, Sridhar Samudrala, linux-doc, netdev, linux-kernel

Currently we have rst format docs for the failover and net_failover
modules however these docs are not linked to within the index.

Add `failover` and `net_failover` to the networking documentation index.

Signed-off-by: Tobin C. Harding <me@tobin.cc>
---
 Documentation/networking/index.rst | 2 ++
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+)

diff --git a/Documentation/networking/index.rst b/Documentation/networking/index.rst
index fec8588a588e..6123a7e9e1da 100644
--- a/Documentation/networking/index.rst
+++ b/Documentation/networking/index.rst
@@ -15,6 +15,8 @@ Contents:
    kapi
    z8530book
    msg_zerocopy
+   failover
+   net_failover
 
 .. only::  subproject
 
-- 
2.17.1


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* [PATCH net-next 2/2] docs: networking: Fix failover build warnings
  2018-07-11 21:42 [PATCH net-next 0/2] docs: Fix failover build warnings Tobin C. Harding
  2018-07-11 21:42 ` [PATCH net-next 1/2] docs: networking: Add failover docs to index Tobin C. Harding
@ 2018-07-11 21:42 ` Tobin C. Harding
  2018-07-13  9:04   ` FYI: " Markus Heiser
  2018-07-16 18:28 ` [PATCH net-next 0/2] docs: " David Miller
  2 siblings, 1 reply; 5+ messages in thread
From: Tobin C. Harding @ 2018-07-11 21:42 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: David S. Miller
  Cc: Tobin C. Harding, Sridhar Samudrala, linux-doc, netdev,
	linux-kernel, Jonathan Corbet

Currently building the net_failover docs causes a bunch of warnings to
be emitted.  These warnings are all related to indentation and correctly
highlight missing '::' (for code sections).  It looks, from other rst
files in Documentation, that the first column should be indented 2
spaces.

Add '::' before code snippets and indent all snippets uniformly starting
with 2 spaces.

Cc: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
Signed-off-by: Tobin C. Harding <me@tobin.cc>
---

Cc'd Jon incase he wants to suggest a preferred level of indentation.

thanks,
Tobin.

 Documentation/networking/net_failover.rst | 111 +++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 57 insertions(+), 54 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/networking/net_failover.rst b/Documentation/networking/net_failover.rst
index 70ca2f5800c4..06c97dcb57ca 100644
--- a/Documentation/networking/net_failover.rst
+++ b/Documentation/networking/net_failover.rst
@@ -36,37 +36,39 @@ feature on the virtio-net interface and assign the same MAC address to both
 virtio-net and VF interfaces.
 
 Here is an example XML snippet that shows such configuration.
-
- <interface type='network'>
-   <mac address='52:54:00:00:12:53'/>
-   <source network='enp66s0f0_br'/>
-   <target dev='tap01'/>
-   <model type='virtio'/>
-   <driver name='vhost' queues='4'/>
-   <link state='down'/>
-   <address type='pci' domain='0x0000' bus='0x00' slot='0x0a' function='0x0'/>
- </interface>
- <interface type='hostdev' managed='yes'>
-   <mac address='52:54:00:00:12:53'/>
-   <source>
-     <address type='pci' domain='0x0000' bus='0x42' slot='0x02' function='0x5'/>
-   </source>
-   <address type='pci' domain='0x0000' bus='0x00' slot='0x0b' function='0x0'/>
- </interface>
+::
+
+  <interface type='network'>
+    <mac address='52:54:00:00:12:53'/>
+    <source network='enp66s0f0_br'/>
+    <target dev='tap01'/>
+    <model type='virtio'/>
+    <driver name='vhost' queues='4'/>
+    <link state='down'/>
+    <address type='pci' domain='0x0000' bus='0x00' slot='0x0a' function='0x0'/>
+  </interface>
+  <interface type='hostdev' managed='yes'>
+    <mac address='52:54:00:00:12:53'/>
+    <source>
+      <address type='pci' domain='0x0000' bus='0x42' slot='0x02' function='0x5'/>
+    </source>
+    <address type='pci' domain='0x0000' bus='0x00' slot='0x0b' function='0x0'/>
+  </interface>
 
 Booting a VM with the above configuration will result in the following 3
 netdevs created in the VM.
-
-4: ens10: <BROADCAST,MULTICAST,UP,LOWER_UP> mtu 1500 qdisc noqueue state UP group default qlen 1000
-    link/ether 52:54:00:00:12:53 brd ff:ff:ff:ff:ff:ff
-    inet 192.168.12.53/24 brd 192.168.12.255 scope global dynamic ens10
-       valid_lft 42482sec preferred_lft 42482sec
-    inet6 fe80::97d8:db2:8c10:b6d6/64 scope link
-       valid_lft forever preferred_lft forever
-5: ens10nsby: <BROADCAST,MULTICAST,UP,LOWER_UP> mtu 1500 qdisc fq_codel master ens10 state UP group default qlen 1000
-    link/ether 52:54:00:00:12:53 brd ff:ff:ff:ff:ff:ff
-7: ens11: <BROADCAST,MULTICAST,UP,LOWER_UP> mtu 1500 qdisc mq master ens10 state UP group default qlen 1000
-    link/ether 52:54:00:00:12:53 brd ff:ff:ff:ff:ff:ff
+::
+
+  4: ens10: <BROADCAST,MULTICAST,UP,LOWER_UP> mtu 1500 qdisc noqueue state UP group default qlen 1000
+      link/ether 52:54:00:00:12:53 brd ff:ff:ff:ff:ff:ff
+      inet 192.168.12.53/24 brd 192.168.12.255 scope global dynamic ens10
+         valid_lft 42482sec preferred_lft 42482sec
+      inet6 fe80::97d8:db2:8c10:b6d6/64 scope link
+         valid_lft forever preferred_lft forever
+  5: ens10nsby: <BROADCAST,MULTICAST,UP,LOWER_UP> mtu 1500 qdisc fq_codel master ens10 state UP group default qlen 1000
+      link/ether 52:54:00:00:12:53 brd ff:ff:ff:ff:ff:ff
+  7: ens11: <BROADCAST,MULTICAST,UP,LOWER_UP> mtu 1500 qdisc mq master ens10 state UP group default qlen 1000
+      link/ether 52:54:00:00:12:53 brd ff:ff:ff:ff:ff:ff
 
 ens10 is the 'failover' master netdev, ens10nsby and ens11 are the slave
 'standby' and 'primary' netdevs respectively.
@@ -80,37 +82,38 @@ the paravirtual datapath when the VF is unplugged.
 
 Here is a sample script that shows the steps to initiate live migration on
 the source hypervisor.
+::
 
-# cat vf_xml
-<interface type='hostdev' managed='yes'>
-  <mac address='52:54:00:00:12:53'/>
-  <source>
-    <address type='pci' domain='0x0000' bus='0x42' slot='0x02' function='0x5'/>
-  </source>
-  <address type='pci' domain='0x0000' bus='0x00' slot='0x0b' function='0x0'/>
-</interface>
+  # cat vf_xml
+  <interface type='hostdev' managed='yes'>
+    <mac address='52:54:00:00:12:53'/>
+    <source>
+      <address type='pci' domain='0x0000' bus='0x42' slot='0x02' function='0x5'/>
+    </source>
+    <address type='pci' domain='0x0000' bus='0x00' slot='0x0b' function='0x0'/>
+  </interface>
 
-# Source Hypervisor
-#!/bin/bash
+  # Source Hypervisor
+  #!/bin/bash
 
-DOMAIN=fedora27-tap01
-PF=enp66s0f0
-VF_NUM=5
-TAP_IF=tap01
-VF_XML=
+  DOMAIN=fedora27-tap01
+  PF=enp66s0f0
+  VF_NUM=5
+  TAP_IF=tap01
+  VF_XML=
 
-MAC=52:54:00:00:12:53
-ZERO_MAC=00:00:00:00:00:00
+  MAC=52:54:00:00:12:53
+  ZERO_MAC=00:00:00:00:00:00
 
-virsh domif-setlink $DOMAIN $TAP_IF up
-bridge fdb del $MAC dev $PF master
-virsh detach-device $DOMAIN $VF_XML
-ip link set $PF vf $VF_NUM mac $ZERO_MAC
+  virsh domif-setlink $DOMAIN $TAP_IF up
+  bridge fdb del $MAC dev $PF master
+  virsh detach-device $DOMAIN $VF_XML
+  ip link set $PF vf $VF_NUM mac $ZERO_MAC
 
-virsh migrate --live $DOMAIN qemu+ssh://$REMOTE_HOST/system
+  virsh migrate --live $DOMAIN qemu+ssh://$REMOTE_HOST/system
 
-# Destination Hypervisor
-#!/bin/bash
+  # Destination Hypervisor
+  #!/bin/bash
 
-virsh attach-device $DOMAIN $VF_XML
-virsh domif-setlink $DOMAIN $TAP_IF down
+  virsh attach-device $DOMAIN $VF_XML
+  virsh domif-setlink $DOMAIN $TAP_IF down
-- 
2.17.1


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* FYI: [PATCH net-next 2/2] docs: networking: Fix failover build warnings
  2018-07-11 21:42 ` [PATCH net-next 2/2] docs: networking: Fix failover build warnings Tobin C. Harding
@ 2018-07-13  9:04   ` Markus Heiser
  0 siblings, 0 replies; 5+ messages in thread
From: Markus Heiser @ 2018-07-13  9:04 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Tobin C. Harding, David S. Miller
  Cc: Sridhar Samudrala, linux-doc, netdev, linux-kernel, Jonathan Corbet

Hy Tobin, 

> Add '::' before code snippets and indent all snippets uniformly starting
> with 2 spaces.

Just FYI about reST Markup (no need to fix anything in your patch).

You can also add '::' (the markup for literal blocks) at the last line of the
previous paragraph, e.g:

<snip>--- 
Booting a VM with the above configuration will result in the following 3
netdevs created in the VM.::

  4: ens10: <BROADCAST,MULTICAST,UP,LOWER_UP> mtu 1500 qdisc noqueue state UP
group default qlen 1000
      link/ether 52:54:00:00:12:53 brd ff:ff:ff:ff:ff:ff
<snap>---

IMO its more readable in plain text. Anyway it is not wrong to add '::' in a
separated new line ... and thanks for your patch.

If you have any doubt about reST markup, I recommend the primer from the Sphinx
project:

  http://www.sphinx-doc.org/en/stable/rest.html

and the quickref from the (underlying) docutils project:

  http://docutils.sourceforge.net/docs/user/rst/quickref.html

-- Markus --


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* Re: [PATCH net-next 0/2] docs: Fix failover build warnings
  2018-07-11 21:42 [PATCH net-next 0/2] docs: Fix failover build warnings Tobin C. Harding
  2018-07-11 21:42 ` [PATCH net-next 1/2] docs: networking: Add failover docs to index Tobin C. Harding
  2018-07-11 21:42 ` [PATCH net-next 2/2] docs: networking: Fix failover build warnings Tobin C. Harding
@ 2018-07-16 18:28 ` David Miller
  2 siblings, 0 replies; 5+ messages in thread
From: David Miller @ 2018-07-16 18:28 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: me; +Cc: sridhar.samudrala, linux-doc, netdev, linux-kernel

From: "Tobin C. Harding" <me@tobin.cc>
Date: Thu, 12 Jul 2018 07:42:48 +1000

> This is my first patch set to net-next.  Please shout loud and clear if
> I've botched anything.
> 
> Recently failover and net_failover modules were added to the mainline.
> Documentation was included in rst format but they were not added to the
> toctree in `networking/index.rst`.  Also building docs for net_failover
> is currently emitting a few warnings.
> 
> Patch 1 adds failover and net_failover to the index toctree
> Patch 2 fixes the build warnings for net_failover
> 
> I haven't been super active on netdev list so if there is some reason I
> missed why these files are not in the index please do say so.
> 
> Has there been any discussion on preferred order for the toctree index
> list?  I just added them to the bottom of the list.

Series applied, thanks.

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