From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-3.8 required=3.0 tests=HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS, MAILING_LIST_MULTI,SIGNED_OFF_BY,SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_PASS autolearn=no autolearn_force=no version=3.4.0 Received: from mail.kernel.org (mail.kernel.org [198.145.29.99]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B0E09C3F2CD for ; Mon, 2 Mar 2020 19:50:36 +0000 (UTC) Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [209.132.180.67]) by mail.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 95D0724673 for ; Mon, 2 Mar 2020 19:50:36 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1726454AbgCBTuf (ORCPT ); Mon, 2 Mar 2020 14:50:35 -0500 Received: from ms.lwn.net ([45.79.88.28]:58336 "EHLO ms.lwn.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1725446AbgCBTuf (ORCPT ); Mon, 2 Mar 2020 14:50:35 -0500 Received: from lwn.net (localhost [127.0.0.1]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ms.lwn.net (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 88E5E823; Mon, 2 Mar 2020 19:50:34 +0000 (UTC) Date: Mon, 2 Mar 2020 12:50:33 -0700 From: Jonathan Corbet To: Masami Hiramatsu Cc: Steven Rostedt , Randy Dunlap , linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, Markus Elfring Subject: Re: [PATCH v3] Documentation: bootconfig: Update boot configuration documentation Message-ID: <20200302125033.4a62e88e@lwn.net> In-Reply-To: <158313622831.3082.8237132211731864948.stgit@devnote2> References: <158313621831.3082.9886161529613724376.stgit@devnote2> <158313622831.3082.8237132211731864948.stgit@devnote2> Organization: LWN.net MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Sender: linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org On Mon, 2 Mar 2020 17:03:48 +0900 Masami Hiramatsu wrote: > Update boot configuration documentation. > > - Not using "config" abbreviation but configuration or description. > - Rewrite descriptions of node and its maxinum number. > - Add a section of use cases of boot configuration. > - Move how to use bootconfig to earlier section. > - Fix some typos, indents and format mistakes. > > Signed-off-by: Masami Hiramatsu > --- > Changes in v3: > - Specify that comments also count in size. > - Fix a confusing sentence. > - Add O= to make command. > Changes in v2: > - Fixes additional typos (Thanks Markus and Randy!) > - Change a section title to "Tree Structured Key". > --- So I tried to apply this but failed - it's built on other changes to bootconfig.rst that went into linux-next via Steve's tree. So Steve, would you like to take this one too? Thanks, jon