From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4F780C4708D for ; Sat, 3 Dec 2022 13:40:33 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S229733AbiLCNkc (ORCPT ); Sat, 3 Dec 2022 08:40:32 -0500 Received: from lindbergh.monkeyblade.net ([23.128.96.19]:36162 "EHLO lindbergh.monkeyblade.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S229608AbiLCNka (ORCPT ); Sat, 3 Dec 2022 08:40:30 -0500 Received: from mail-wm1-x32c.google.com (mail-wm1-x32c.google.com [IPv6:2a00:1450:4864:20::32c]) by lindbergh.monkeyblade.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 8ED9D1D667 for ; Sat, 3 Dec 2022 05:40:29 -0800 (PST) Received: by mail-wm1-x32c.google.com with SMTP id f13-20020a1cc90d000000b003d08c4cf679so2649877wmb.5 for ; Sat, 03 Dec 2022 05:40:29 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=layalina-io.20210112.gappssmtp.com; s=20210112; h=in-reply-to:content-disposition:mime-version:references:message-id :subject:cc:to:from:date:from:to:cc:subject:date:message-id:reply-to; bh=0NMltp6zd8QZS4GQRHIbc7N5NBSDI6lRWzkm44FFSyY=; b=UUfJfjLOApqouUil5C5u0XKtTEZpl8XwY/3SKdgCvdtiT0JxyAPJDDPeT8xQIgdpGy 9VVRhUNCJ++sc0FunLqB1GPKF0L+S26E6ZMQQll1SgD34HtR38716xWRreEr5aF0H58n G24m2u2NeyeZ+bmySKprTGl529MndilBQsVDV0UIjcbLlWzhZlcUOaa/Q0A0OuyJzGH2 CpQEeCSua9EtGa0VtKQ6Q/qtlEY46tosK3mQNLNZ8aRvG1S4F3pvkIu8KGXKUvbqVztq z0yRBx0zMrDIw2mmgltQWG/+hmEjlJ83MpejcjfGQrKl5M7Eu11TY+56wDx2VSjqVYTb hmpA== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20210112; h=in-reply-to:content-disposition:mime-version:references:message-id :subject:cc:to:from:date:x-gm-message-state:from:to:cc:subject:date :message-id:reply-to; bh=0NMltp6zd8QZS4GQRHIbc7N5NBSDI6lRWzkm44FFSyY=; b=eBR3U5UNrfPHKfNYJWPW3aR/DwA2bXqfAQsdeBE2zyx01zAPrA9TInC1GUeg+mQb6+ f2y3DwMl5MPAYmQTDd9696p9G6Wpiv8vWoFtoTKQL54sLQUKYjgZ+UcTox/Xgr+YWc8N wd1TpOqxx/p1M4hFpnSrrrAEEL7Srr1nhNCMPKvMIEtdcf8oWXNzvyneQBx1mhTN9DDw cCnSVBt68Zc70IN2p7ihRRlxxxI6GJtzOy3s5DH+KOuYUcRaiqQX19aqEcjCwADv4U5o J7XYh595MAtSDhNipbyBaX2iRInn++hmZl9knUB2aLqe9chcqdkUKcbWyGLKPhwQMT0J hIKQ== X-Gm-Message-State: ANoB5pnfnQiEhoM+iLvI1exK/uggeHo7fgkJNi3nY0Q9Q1vvrWfSO7CX jEC1EcS0r/zPy95MDv86YrAPlA== X-Google-Smtp-Source: AA0mqf4XepvQu8SCbGWIRhoC0afqYPkI2JwH0NCii/cfoqFm0KDy/jm2IcoYPmzBz/6f1YpYvPmQ/g== X-Received: by 2002:a1c:7504:0:b0:3cf:6b10:ca8d with SMTP id o4-20020a1c7504000000b003cf6b10ca8dmr59256540wmc.44.1670074828017; Sat, 03 Dec 2022 05:40:28 -0800 (PST) Received: from airbuntu (host86-130-134-87.range86-130.btcentralplus.com. [86.130.134.87]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id m21-20020a05600c4f5500b003b4fe03c881sm17130392wmq.48.2022.12.03.05.40.27 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 bits=256/256); Sat, 03 Dec 2022 05:40:27 -0800 (PST) Date: Sat, 3 Dec 2022 13:40:26 +0000 From: Qais Yousef To: Bagas Sanjaya Cc: Ingo Molnar , Peter Zijlstra , Vincent Guittot , Dietmar Eggemann , Jonathan Corbet , linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, Lukasz Luba , Xuewen Yan , Wei Wang , Jonathan JMChen , Hank , Paul Bone Subject: Re: [PATCH v2] Documentation: sched: Add a new sched-util-clamp.rst Message-ID: <20221203134026.ert6kax2f3okajj2@airbuntu> References: <20221127142657.1649347-1-qyousef@layalina.io> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org On 11/29/22 10:16, Bagas Sanjaya wrote: > On Sun, Nov 27, 2022 at 02:26:57PM +0000, Qais Yousef wrote: > > The new util clamp feature needs a document explaining what it is and > > how to use it. The new document hopefully covers everything one needs to > > know about uclamp. > > > > For patch subject, better say "Documentation: sched: Document util clamp > feature". ACK. > > > Signed-off-by: Qais Yousef > > Signed-off-by: Qais Yousef (Google) > > --- > > > > Changes in v2: > > > > * Address various style comments from Bagas > > > > I don't see any of my wording suggestions from [1] being applied. Still > a rather confused to read (maybe should be applied on top of jon's > suggestions)? Apologies! It was an oversight from my side when I revisited the thread and reworked the patch. I got confused somehow. All applied now almost as is. There was one tweak that used "40% utilization" that I replaced with "40% performance level" instead. Thanks a lot! Cheers -- Qais Yousef > > [1]: https://lore.kernel.org/lkml/Y3II59dyKuvQGIhG@debian.me/ > [2]: https://lore.kernel.org/linux-doc/87cz976pwn.fsf@meer.lwn.net/