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From: Markus Elfring <Markus.Elfring@web.de>
To: Masami Hiramatsu <mhiramat@kernel.org>,
	Steven Rostedt <rostedt@goodmis.org>,
	linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-fsdevel@vger.kernel.org
Cc: kernel-janitors@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org,
	Alexey Dobriyan <adobriyan@gmail.com>,
	Andrew Morton <akpm@linux-foundation.org>,
	Arnaldo Carvalho de Melo <acme@kernel.org>,
	Frank Rowand <frowand.list@gmail.com>,
	Greg Kroah-Hartman <gregkh@linuxfoundation.org>,
	Ingo Molnar <mingo@redhat.com>, Jiri Olsa <jolsa@redhat.com>,
	Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>,
	Linus Torvalds <torvalds@linux-foundation.org>,
	Namhyung Kim <namhyung@kernel.org>,
	Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>,
	Rob Herring <robh+dt@kernel.org>,
	Thomas Gleixner <tglx@linutronix.de>,
	Tim Bird <Tim.Bird@sony.com>,
	Tom Zanussi <tom.zanussi@linux.intel.com>
Subject: Re: [for-next][PATCH 12/26] Documentation: bootconfig: Add a doc for extended boot config
Date: Thu, 20 Feb 2020 10:10:20 +0100	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <23e371ca-5df8-3ae3-c685-b01c07b55540@web.de> (raw)

I wonder about a few details in the added text.


…
> +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/bootconfig.rst
…
> +C onfig File Limitation

How do you think about to omit a space character at the beginning
of this line?


> +Currently the maximum config size size is 32KB …

Would you like to avoid a word duplication here?


> +Note: this is not the number of entries but nodes, an entry must consume
> +more than 2 nodes (a key-word and a value). …

I find the relevance of the term “nodes” unclear at the moment.


Could an other wording be nicer than the abbreviation “a doc for … config”
in the commit subject?

Regards,
Markus

             reply	other threads:[~2020-02-20  9:11 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 16+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2020-02-20  9:10 Markus Elfring [this message]
2020-02-20 13:13 ` [for-next][PATCH 12/26] Documentation: bootconfig: Add a doc for extended boot config Masami Hiramatsu
2020-02-20 15:00   ` Markus Elfring
2020-02-21 10:16     ` Masami Hiramatsu
2020-02-21 16:43       ` [for-next][12/26] " Markus Elfring
2020-02-22  4:18         ` Masami Hiramatsu
2020-02-22  9:48           ` Markus Elfring
2020-02-22 15:56             ` Masami Hiramatsu
2020-02-22 16:15               ` Markus Elfring
2020-02-24  3:13                 ` Masami Hiramatsu
2020-02-24 10:00                   ` Markus Elfring
2020-02-25  6:49                     ` Masami Hiramatsu
2020-02-25  7:56                       ` Markus Elfring
2020-02-25 10:29                         ` Masami Hiramatsu
2020-02-25 11:10                           ` Markus Elfring
  -- strict thread matches above, loose matches on Subject: below --
2020-01-14 21:03 [for-next][PATCH 00/26] tracing: Updates for 5.6 Steven Rostedt
2020-01-14 21:03 ` [for-next][PATCH 12/26] Documentation: bootconfig: Add a doc for extended boot config Steven Rostedt

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