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From: John Kacur <jkacur@redhat.com>
To: Daniel Bristot de Oliveira <bristot@redhat.com>
Cc: lkml <linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org>,
	RT <linux-rt-users@vger.kernel.org>,
	linux-trace-devel@vger.kernel.org,
	Steven Rostedt <rostedt@goodmis.org>
Subject: Re: [PATCH 2/2] rtla: Minor fix to grammar in README.txt
Date: Fri, 8 Apr 2022 09:49:35 -0400 (EDT)	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <6b8d24c-d793-866c-30a7-f015c7babd2d@redhat.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <24f79a7c-0146-ad0a-988a-608edd402faa@redhat.com>



On Fri, 8 Apr 2022, Daniel Bristot de Oliveira wrote:

> On 4/2/22 06:39, John Kacur wrote:
> > "The rtla" doesn't make sense, change it to "The rtla tool"
> > This is better than removing the word "The" since some packaging tools
> > need the description to start with a capital letter.
> > 
> > Signed-off-by: John Kacur <jkacur@redhat.com>
> > ---
> >  tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt | 2 +-
> >  1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
> > 
> > diff --git a/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt b/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
> > index 6c88446f7e74..3b809eeff5f9 100644
> > --- a/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
> > +++ b/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
> > @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
> >  RTLA: Real-Time Linux Analysis tools
> >  
> > -The rtla is a meta-tool that includes a set of commands that
> > +The rtla tool is a meta-tool that includes a set of commands that
> 
> I do not like bike-shedding but 'the rtla tool is a meta-tool" sounds repetitive.
> 
> Does:
> 
> The rtla meta-tool includes a set of commands...
> 
> sound good for you?
> 
> -- Daniel
> 
> 

Perfect


  reply	other threads:[~2022-04-08 13:49 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 6+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2022-04-02  4:39 [PATCH 1/2] rtla: Don't overwrite existing directory mode John Kacur
2022-04-02  4:39 ` [PATCH 2/2] rtla: Minor fix to grammar in README.txt John Kacur
2022-04-08 13:10   ` Daniel Bristot de Oliveira
2022-04-08 13:49     ` John Kacur [this message]
2022-04-08 14:11       ` Daniel Bristot de Oliveira
2022-04-08 13:11 ` [PATCH 1/2] rtla: Don't overwrite existing directory mode Daniel Bristot de Oliveira

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