From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-14.2 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00,DKIM_SIGNED, DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,FREEMAIL_FORGED_FROMDOMAIN,FREEMAIL_FROM, HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS,INCLUDES_PATCH,MAILING_LIST_MULTI, MENTIONS_GIT_HOSTING,NICE_REPLY_A,SPF_HELO_NONE,URIBL_BLOCKED, USER_AGENT_SANE_1 autolearn=unavailable autolearn_force=no version=3.4.0 Received: from mail.kernel.org (mail.kernel.org [198.145.29.99]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 28320C43470 for ; Thu, 1 Apr 2021 18:28:59 +0000 (UTC) Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by mail.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id EBF6F60C3E for ; Thu, 1 Apr 2021 18:28:58 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S237690AbhDAS2y (ORCPT ); Thu, 1 Apr 2021 14:28:54 -0400 Received: from lindbergh.monkeyblade.net ([23.128.96.19]:34268 "EHLO lindbergh.monkeyblade.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S237858AbhDASEn (ORCPT ); Thu, 1 Apr 2021 14:04:43 -0400 Received: from mail-wr1-x431.google.com (mail-wr1-x431.google.com [IPv6:2a00:1450:4864:20::431]) by lindbergh.monkeyblade.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id AA9F3C0613B1; Thu, 1 Apr 2021 05:00:30 -0700 (PDT) Received: by mail-wr1-x431.google.com with SMTP id x16so1557317wrn.4; Thu, 01 Apr 2021 05:00:30 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20161025; h=subject:to:cc:references:from:message-id:date:user-agent :mime-version:in-reply-to:content-language:content-transfer-encoding; bh=IN8ma/Di2llyrq0H/t/B4q1AvpJ/EKX/tn/NrDgiOPo=; b=NF9+CybshsLJC4JuAI+jV/yXLbq7pjAZf9ZSHdQ0WJEI8c9SymKyVThTP6FHpe/2Ct DNYd4RW3Wo9MXqdcdtywsadSESKmNKi4Bhtl+wkCE7Y2Q2iurIck4+JwlKq3WwKJy200 Ysf2KZg+3VHRf7eG9kSSrwAV+PbNhXeq+rgHEuqkHdEpvy7xM1FkJBS3Y3ygB70AQZ3e eV1BxBpAkF6kvMvKj2ZQQJsMRzo2pqCQmoXRBo4j0ImYvHZPy+8LMUZxZUNDDwqm7Kdj wyRVHAiEI9Cj4pM15rfKtxKUuToiGBbSTrstpTObEogTVHhbsz8SOma1BN5Lyj3a8Op/ qpRw== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:subject:to:cc:references:from:message-id:date :user-agent:mime-version:in-reply-to:content-language :content-transfer-encoding; bh=IN8ma/Di2llyrq0H/t/B4q1AvpJ/EKX/tn/NrDgiOPo=; b=hjs+coMNFGIDk6KgqULy+BV1lYfOyvaiI3IaKk+I+9vMLEQXupjVuU2OtA6OZ34PLv lc2tg1WNexqrBsDDMEdxqCtuMPikD0USJlk2shHnnhAlcQuz0nyxtPCqak85NXa4KoXj ULPKIuw9dqdbzHM1ocr3Fl5fI/T24S+jX8Fk34W6ybKZaFbrhT8iYr8c8L1osCAFVk7Q ez+0molWk3kg8oMdKl9JcS0YNvcmeyJeqtiGbjPDxrZIiX/kFkgni/ZtnWMynKgtpjc+ 68GirUiWqMIc99qN/+nVwyObWPQRsmjnp4Q97acSCA/rG9YIULky23zDS5uCMnx2j9FP ZzVg== X-Gm-Message-State: AOAM532opkxuZkpkwqz7vVrwokFJL7n8EeKIKaNQJ40U8PvICyRHVs2L lsxrriN7pMeummB2+KW/fBA= X-Google-Smtp-Source: ABdhPJzpjYtrF2kVsDEgbJBP4aFj+go6/vx/MuIjXCtxMLpnHvHXJ3i009fdqrpu5QmTLXIcPLjEvA== X-Received: by 2002:a5d:564b:: with SMTP id j11mr9364649wrw.326.1617278429421; Thu, 01 Apr 2021 05:00:29 -0700 (PDT) Received: from [10.8.0.206] ([195.53.121.100]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id w22sm8770829wmi.22.2021.04.01.05.00.26 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 bits=128/128); Thu, 01 Apr 2021 05:00:28 -0700 (PDT) Subject: Re: [PATCH v5 0/4] man2: udpate mm/userfaultfd manpages to latest To: Peter Xu , linux-mm@kvack.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, linux-man@vger.kernel.org Cc: Axel Rasmussen , Nadav Amit , Mike Rapoport , Andrea Arcangeli , Michael Kerrisk , Andrew Morton References: <20210329221833.517923-1-peterx@redhat.com> From: "Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)" Message-ID: <76f5d3a7-626e-563b-c1bd-d318a476a8ed@gmail.com> Date: Thu, 1 Apr 2021 14:00:25 +0200 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:78.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/78.8.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: <20210329221833.517923-1-peterx@redhat.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8; format=flowed Content-Language: en-US Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Hi Peter, On 3/30/21 12:18 AM, Peter Xu wrote: > v5: > - add r-bs for Mike R. > - Fix spelling mistake "diable" [Mike R.] > - s/Starting from/Since/ for patch 2 (also replaced two existing ones in the > same file) [Alex] > - s/un-write-protect/write-unprotect/ [Alex] > - s/The process was interrupted and need to retry/The process was interrupted; > retry this call/ in the last patch. [Alex] > > v4: > - Fixed a few "subordinate clauses" (SC) cases [Alex] > - Reword in ioctl_userfaultfd.2 to use bold font for the two modes referenced, > so as to be clear on what is "both" referring to [Alex] > > v3: > - Don't use "Currently", instead add "(since x.y)" mark where proper [Alex] > - Always use semantic newlines across the whole patchset [Alex] > - Use quote when possible, rather than escapes [Alex] > - Fix one missing replacement of ".BR" -> ".B" [Alex] > - Some other trivial rephrases here and there when fixing up above > > v2 changes: > - Fix wordings as suggested [MikeR] > - convert ".BR" to ".B" where proper for the patchset [Alex] > - rearrange a few lines in the last two patches where they got messed up > - document more things, e.g. UFFDIO_COPY_MODE_WP; and also on how to resolve a > wr-protect page fault. > > There're two features missing in current manpage, namely: > > (1) Userfaultfd Thread-ID feature > (2) Userfaultfd write protect mode > > There's also a 3rd one which was just contributed from Axel - Axel, I think it > would be great if you can add that part too, probably after the whole > hugetlbfs/shmem minor mode reaches the linux master branch. > > Please review, thanks. > > Peter Xu (4): > userfaultfd.2: Add UFFD_FEATURE_THREAD_ID docs > userfaultfd.2: Add write-protect mode > ioctl_userfaultfd.2: Add UFFD_FEATURE_THREAD_ID docs > ioctl_userfaultfd.2: Add write-protect mode docs I applied all 4 patches (with a few minor fixes to 1/4 and 4/4 (cosmetic fixes; some of them about the 80-col right margin)): Thanks! Alex > > man2/ioctl_userfaultfd.2 | 89 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++- > man2/userfaultfd.2 | 121 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++-- > 2 files changed, 203 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) > -- Alejandro Colomar Linux man-pages comaintainer; https://www.kernel.org/doc/man-pages/ http://www.alejandro-colomar.es/