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Subject: Re: [ANNOUNCE] Linux Hardened Device Drivers Project 
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On Fri, 20 Sep 2002, Rhoads, Rob wrote:

| Project Announcement:
| --------------------
|
| Initially we've created a specification, a few kernel modules
| that implement a set of driver programming interfaces, and
| a sample device driver that demonstrates those interfaces.
| -

Only addressing spec bugs for now.
More comments tomorrow when I'm more awake.

section
3.1.1.1	"Table 2 takes a closer look at the fields...."
	No, it doesn't.

3.2.3	"The CONFIG_DRIVER_STATISTICS flag...."
	but section 5.1 calls it CONFIG_DRIVER_STATS.

3.3.2	"The CONFIG_DRIVER_STATISTICS build configuration option"
	should be CONFIG_DRIVER_DIAGNOSTICS
	and change "statistics support" to "diagnostics support"

3.4.2.7.3, example 2:  missing final '|' after "%s"

3.4.3.8.1, Comments on #defines:
	aren't several of these backwards?

3.4.3.8.3, last #define:  bad font change.

-- 
~Randy