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[116.206.12.33]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id z20-20020aa79494000000b0056f0753390csm8921576pfk.96.2022.11.28.19.16.40 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 bits=256/256); Mon, 28 Nov 2022 19:16:40 -0800 (PST) Received: by debian.me (Postfix, from userid 1000) id 3497B103E11; Tue, 29 Nov 2022 10:16:36 +0700 (WIB) Date: Tue, 29 Nov 2022 10:16:36 +0700 From: Bagas Sanjaya To: Qais Yousef Cc: Ingo Molnar , Peter Zijlstra , Vincent Guittot , Dietmar Eggemann , Jonathan Corbet , linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, Lukasz Luba , Xuewen Yan , Wei Wang , Jonathan JMChen , Hank , Paul Bone Subject: Re: [PATCH v2] Documentation: sched: Add a new sched-util-clamp.rst Message-ID: References: <20221127142657.1649347-1-qyousef@layalina.io> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha256; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="rQeuJg5WuXGQGv4c" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20221127142657.1649347-1-qyousef@layalina.io> Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org --rQeuJg5WuXGQGv4c Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Sun, Nov 27, 2022 at 02:26:57PM +0000, Qais Yousef wrote: > The new util clamp feature needs a document explaining what it is and > how to use it. The new document hopefully covers everything one needs to > know about uclamp. >=20 For patch subject, better say "Documentation: sched: Document util clamp feature". > Signed-off-by: Qais Yousef > Signed-off-by: Qais Yousef (Google) > --- >=20 > Changes in v2: >=20 > * Address various style comments from Bagas >=20 I don't see any of my wording suggestions from [1] being applied. Still a rather confused to read (maybe should be applied on top of jon's suggestions)? [1]: https://lore.kernel.org/lkml/Y3II59dyKuvQGIhG@debian.me/ [2]: https://lore.kernel.org/linux-doc/87cz976pwn.fsf@meer.lwn.net/ Thanks. --=20 An old man doll... just what I always wanted! - Clara --rQeuJg5WuXGQGv4c Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name="signature.asc" -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- iHUEABYIAB0WIQSSYQ6Cy7oyFNCHrUH2uYlJVVFOowUCY4V5iQAKCRD2uYlJVVFO o7hbAQC6ZmQaA71Mw+ML1SKY49EnY9RRYz6VAlcRH6LAVHOcCgEAm40jffgXGBdf HhLugCwjCmjy1zE2UkxlEe8H3OK3UQM= =8Ew3 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --rQeuJg5WuXGQGv4c--