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[106.167.171.201]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id q17-20020a170902dad100b001d3eff0728asm11629610plx.78.2023.12.27.02.34.10 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 bits=128/128); Wed, 27 Dec 2023 02:34:12 -0800 (PST) Message-ID: <59dc36ad-16f3-4424-b698-0a1678c3a48e@gmail.com> Date: Wed, 27 Dec 2023 19:34:09 +0900 Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: perfbook@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla Thunderbird Subject: Re: [PATCH -perfbook v4] howto: make ref to git archive explicit Content-Language: en-US To: zhouzhouyi@gmail.com, paulmck@kernel.org References: <1703669665-21764-1-git-send-email-zhouzhouyi@gmail.com> Cc: perfbook@vger.kernel.org, Akira Yokosawa From: Akira Yokosawa In-Reply-To: <1703669665-21764-1-git-send-email-zhouzhouyi@gmail.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit On Wed, 27 Dec 2023 17:34:25 +0800, zhouzhouyi@gmail.com wrote: > From: Zhouyi Zhou > > Make "git archive" in answer to Quick Quiz 1.3 more explicit, so that reader can easily know where > "git archive" is. Now that this patch adds just a footnote mentioning Section 1.5, commit log can use some adjustments. How about: Make "git archive" in answer to Quick Quiz 1.3 more explicit by adding a footnote, so that a first-time reader, who have never read Section 1.5, can easily know how to clone the Git repo and build PDFs. That said, I'm beginning to wonder how many of first-time readers would bother trying -nq builds without having got annoyed by those lots of QQz's in perfbook. ;-) > > Suggested-by: Akira Yokosawa > Signed-off-by: Zhouyi Zhou Reviewed-by: Akira Yokosawa Thanks, Akira > --- > Hi Akira > > Thank you for your valuable suggestions and guidances, I learned a lot > during this process ;-) > > And I invoke make -j 20 in my ubuntu 22.04, everything works great! > > Our editor Yunjing Li is still too modest to provide her email, sorry. > > Thanks for your patient and hard work. > > Thanks > Zhouyi > -- > howto/howto.tex | 4 +++- > 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) > > diff --git a/howto/howto.tex b/howto/howto.tex > index 55270cba..8d678644 100644 > --- a/howto/howto.tex > +++ b/howto/howto.tex > @@ -226,7 +226,9 @@ Here are a few possible strategies: > only a blank sheet of paper. > \item If you find the Quick Quizzes distracting but impossible > to ignore, you can always clone the \LaTeX{} source for > - this book from the git archive. > + this book from the git archive.\footnote{ > + See \cref{sec:howto:Whose Book Is This?} > + for instructions to do this.} > You can then run the command \co{make nq}, which will > produce a \co{perfbook-nq.pdf}. > This PDF contains unobtrusive boxed tags where the Quick Quizzes