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From: John Kacur <jkacur@redhat.com>
To: lkml <linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org>,
	Steven Rostedt <rostedt@goodmis.org>,
	Daniel Bristot de Oliveria <bristot@kernel.org>
Cc: RT <linux-rt-users@vger.kernel.org>,
	linux-trace-devel@vger.kernel.org, John Kacur <jkacur@redhat.com>
Subject: [PATCH v2] rtla: Minor grammar fix for rtla README
Date: Fri,  8 Apr 2022 12:10:12 -0400	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20220408161012.10544-1-jkacur@redhat.com> (raw)

- Change to "The rtla meta-tool includes"
- Remove an unnecessary "But, "
- Adjust the formatting of the paragraph resulting from the changes.
- Simplify the wording for the libraries and tools.

Signed-off-by: John Kacur <jkacur@redhat.com>
---
 tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt | 12 +++++-------
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt b/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
index 6c88446f7e74..0fbad2640b8c 100644
--- a/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
+++ b/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
@@ -1,15 +1,13 @@
 RTLA: Real-Time Linux Analysis tools
 
-The rtla is a meta-tool that includes a set of commands that
-aims to analyze the real-time properties of Linux. But, instead of
-testing Linux as a black box, rtla leverages kernel tracing
-capabilities to provide precise information about the properties
-and root causes of unexpected results.
+The rtla meta-tool includes a set of commands that aims to analyze
+the real-time properties of Linux. Instead of testing Linux as a black box,
+rtla leverages kernel tracing capabilities to provide precise information
+about the properties and root causes of unexpected results.
 
 Installing RTLA
 
-RTLA depends on some libraries and tools. More precisely, it depends on the
-following libraries:
+RTLA depends on the following libraries and tools:
 
  - libtracefs
  - libtraceevent
-- 
2.35.1


             reply	other threads:[~2022-04-08 16:10 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 2+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2022-04-08 16:10 John Kacur [this message]
2022-04-09 17:29 ` [PATCH v2] rtla: Minor grammar fix for rtla README Daniel Bristot de Oliveira

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