* [virtio-dev] [PATCH] editorial: update S390 Common I/O link
@ 2022-05-10 13:10 Michael S. Tsirkin
2022-05-10 13:29 ` Cornelia Huck
0 siblings, 1 reply; 3+ messages in thread
From: Michael S. Tsirkin @ 2022-05-10 13:10 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: virtio-comment, virtio-dev; +Cc: virtio, Paul Knight, Halil Pasic
Paul Knight wrote:
In running a link check, I noted several issues, none significant for this
initial public review publication:
- broken link in Normative references:
-- [S390 Common I/O] ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM
Publication SA22-7204,
http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS, and any
future revisions
(This link is currently broken, and I could not find any alternative source for
this document. - please rewrite the reference to indicate document is no longer
available at this link. You may also consider whether the solitary citation at
4.3.1.3 is still needed.)
This broken link is not a blocking issue for a Committee specification Draft,
but it will not be allowed for a Committee Specification.
Reported-by: Paul Knight <paul.knight@oasis-open.org>
Suggested-by: Halil Pasic <pasic@linux.ibm.com>
Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com>
---
introduction.tex | 3 ++-
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
diff --git a/introduction.tex b/introduction.tex
index 4dc7085..0a78e78 100644
--- a/introduction.tex
+++ b/introduction.tex
@@ -45,7 +45,8 @@ \section{Normative References}\label{sec:Normative References}
IDentifier (UUID) URN Namespace'', RFC 4122, DOI 10.17487/RFC4122,
July 2005. \newline\url{http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc4122.txt}\\
\phantomsection\label{intro:S390 PoP}\textbf{[S390 PoP]} & z/Architecture Principles of Operation, IBM Publication SA22-7832, \newline\url{http://publibfi.boulder.ibm.com/epubs/pdf/dz9zr009.pdf}, and any future revisions\\
- \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390 Common I/O]} & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204, \newline\url{http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS}, and any future revisions\\
+ \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390
+Common I/O]} & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204-01, \newline\url{https://www.ibm.com/resources/publications/OutputPubsDetails?PubID=SA22720401}, and any future revisions\\
\phantomsection\label{intro:PCI}\textbf{[PCI]} &
Conventional PCI Specifications,
\newline\url{http://www.pcisig.com/specifications/conventional/},
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* Re: [virtio-dev] [PATCH] editorial: update S390 Common I/O link
2022-05-10 13:10 [virtio-dev] [PATCH] editorial: update S390 Common I/O link Michael S. Tsirkin
@ 2022-05-10 13:29 ` Cornelia Huck
2022-05-10 13:47 ` Michael S. Tsirkin
0 siblings, 1 reply; 3+ messages in thread
From: Cornelia Huck @ 2022-05-10 13:29 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Michael S. Tsirkin, virtio-comment, virtio-dev
Cc: virtio, Paul Knight, Halil Pasic
On Tue, May 10 2022, "Michael S. Tsirkin" <mst@redhat.com> wrote:
> Paul Knight wrote:
>
> In running a link check, I noted several issues, none significant for this
> initial public review publication:
> - broken link in Normative references:
> -- [S390 Common I/O] ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM
> Publication SA22-7204,
> http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS, and any
> future revisions
> (This link is currently broken, and I could not find any alternative source for
> this document. - please rewrite the reference to indicate document is no longer
> available at this link. You may also consider whether the solitary citation at
> 4.3.1.3 is still needed.)
> This broken link is not a blocking issue for a Committee specification Draft,
> but it will not be allowed for a Committee Specification.
>
> Reported-by: Paul Knight <paul.knight@oasis-open.org>
> Suggested-by: Halil Pasic <pasic@linux.ibm.com>
> Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com>
> ---
> introduction.tex | 3 ++-
> 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
>
> diff --git a/introduction.tex b/introduction.tex
> index 4dc7085..0a78e78 100644
> --- a/introduction.tex
> +++ b/introduction.tex
> @@ -45,7 +45,8 @@ \section{Normative References}\label{sec:Normative References}
> IDentifier (UUID) URN Namespace'', RFC 4122, DOI 10.17487/RFC4122,
> July 2005. \newline\url{http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc4122.txt}\\
> \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 PoP}\textbf{[S390 PoP]} & z/Architecture Principles of Operation, IBM Publication SA22-7832, \newline\url{http://publibfi.boulder.ibm.com/epubs/pdf/dz9zr009.pdf}, and any future revisions\\
> - \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390 Common I/O]} & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204, \newline\url{http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS}, and any future revisions\\
> + \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390
> +Common I/O]} & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204-01, \newline\url{https://www.ibm.com/resources/publications/OutputPubsDetails?PubID=SA22720401}, and any future revisions\\
Ok, in the context diff I see that we don't use any suffix for the PoP,
so I guess that we shouldn't use a suffix here, either.
> \phantomsection\label{intro:PCI}\textbf{[PCI]} &
> Conventional PCI Specifications,
> \newline\url{http://www.pcisig.com/specifications/conventional/},
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* Re: [virtio-dev] [PATCH] editorial: update S390 Common I/O link
2022-05-10 13:29 ` Cornelia Huck
@ 2022-05-10 13:47 ` Michael S. Tsirkin
0 siblings, 0 replies; 3+ messages in thread
From: Michael S. Tsirkin @ 2022-05-10 13:47 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Cornelia Huck
Cc: virtio-comment, virtio-dev, virtio, Paul Knight, Halil Pasic
On Tue, May 10, 2022 at 03:29:45PM +0200, Cornelia Huck wrote:
> On Tue, May 10 2022, "Michael S. Tsirkin" <mst@redhat.com> wrote:
>
> > Paul Knight wrote:
> >
> > In running a link check, I noted several issues, none significant for this
> > initial public review publication:
> > - broken link in Normative references:
> > -- [S390 Common I/O] ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM
> > Publication SA22-7204,
> > http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS, and any
> > future revisions
> > (This link is currently broken, and I could not find any alternative source for
> > this document. - please rewrite the reference to indicate document is no longer
> > available at this link. You may also consider whether the solitary citation at
> > 4.3.1.3 is still needed.)
> > This broken link is not a blocking issue for a Committee specification Draft,
> > but it will not be allowed for a Committee Specification.
> >
> > Reported-by: Paul Knight <paul.knight@oasis-open.org>
> > Suggested-by: Halil Pasic <pasic@linux.ibm.com>
> > Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com>
> > ---
> > introduction.tex | 3 ++-
> > 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
> >
> > diff --git a/introduction.tex b/introduction.tex
> > index 4dc7085..0a78e78 100644
> > --- a/introduction.tex
> > +++ b/introduction.tex
> > @@ -45,7 +45,8 @@ \section{Normative References}\label{sec:Normative References}
> > IDentifier (UUID) URN Namespace'', RFC 4122, DOI 10.17487/RFC4122,
> > July 2005. \newline\url{http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc4122.txt}\\
> > \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 PoP}\textbf{[S390 PoP]} & z/Architecture Principles of Operation, IBM Publication SA22-7832, \newline\url{http://publibfi.boulder.ibm.com/epubs/pdf/dz9zr009.pdf}, and any future revisions\\
> > - \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390 Common I/O]} & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204, \newline\url{http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS}, and any future revisions\\
> > + \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390
> > +Common I/O]} & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204-01, \newline\url{https://www.ibm.com/resources/publications/OutputPubsDetails?PubID=SA22720401}, and any future revisions\\
>
> Ok, in the context diff I see that we don't use any suffix for the PoP,
> so I guess that we shouldn't use a suffix here, either.
Sorry I don't really understand what you are saying here.
Is this an ack?
> > \phantomsection\label{intro:PCI}\textbf{[PCI]} &
> > Conventional PCI Specifications,
> > \newline\url{http://www.pcisig.com/specifications/conventional/},
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