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* [PATCH] fix spelling mistakes and clear up some wording.
@ 2011-06-07 18:35 Konrad Rzeszutek Wilk
  2011-06-07 18:35 ` [PATCH] ttm: Fix spelling mistakes and remove unused #ifdef Konrad Rzeszutek Wilk
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 3+ messages in thread
From: Konrad Rzeszutek Wilk @ 2011-06-07 18:35 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: linux-kernel, thomas, dri-devel, Jerome Glisse, Dave Airlie,
	David Airlie

While working on the DMA pool concept in the TTM code I re-read
everything once more to make sure I was not missing anything. Whilst doing
that I found some spelling mistakes and some wording that could be improved
a bit. So fixed it up and please consider this patch for 3.1.


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* [PATCH] ttm: Fix spelling mistakes and remove unused #ifdef
  2011-06-07 18:35 [PATCH] fix spelling mistakes and clear up some wording Konrad Rzeszutek Wilk
@ 2011-06-07 18:35 ` Konrad Rzeszutek Wilk
  2011-06-07 19:35   ` Randy Dunlap
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 3+ messages in thread
From: Konrad Rzeszutek Wilk @ 2011-06-07 18:35 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: linux-kernel, thomas, dri-devel, Jerome Glisse, Dave Airlie,
	David Airlie
  Cc: Konrad Rzeszutek Wilk

. and some comments to make it easier to understand.

Signed-off-by: Konrad Rzeszutek Wilk <konrad.wilk@oracle.com>
---
 drivers/gpu/drm/ttm/ttm_page_alloc.c |   14 +++++++-------
 include/drm/ttm/ttm_bo_api.h         |    3 ---
 include/drm/ttm/ttm_bo_driver.h      |    6 +++---
 include/drm/ttm/ttm_memory.h         |    2 +-
 include/drm/ttm/ttm_object.h         |    4 ++--
 include/drm/ttm/ttm_page_alloc.h     |    2 +-
 6 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

diff --git a/drivers/gpu/drm/ttm/ttm_page_alloc.c b/drivers/gpu/drm/ttm/ttm_page_alloc.c
index 9d9d929..3277965 100644
--- a/drivers/gpu/drm/ttm/ttm_page_alloc.c
+++ b/drivers/gpu/drm/ttm/ttm_page_alloc.c
@@ -355,7 +355,7 @@ restart:
 			if (nr_free)
 				goto restart;
 
-			/* Not allowed to fall tough or break because
+			/* Not allowed to fall through or break because
 			 * following context is inside spinlock while we are
 			 * outside here.
 			 */
@@ -554,7 +554,7 @@ out:
 }
 
 /**
- * Fill the given pool if there isn't enough pages and requested number of
+ * Fill the given pool if there isn't enough pages and the requested number of
  * pages is small.
  */
 static void ttm_page_pool_fill_locked(struct ttm_page_pool *pool,
@@ -575,7 +575,7 @@ static void ttm_page_pool_fill_locked(struct ttm_page_pool *pool,
 	pool->fill_lock = true;
 
 	/* If allocation request is small and there is not enough
-	 * pages in pool we fill the pool first */
+	 * pages in a pool we fill the pool up first. */
 	if (count < _manager->options.small
 		&& count > pool->npages) {
 		struct list_head new_pages;
@@ -612,9 +612,9 @@ static void ttm_page_pool_fill_locked(struct ttm_page_pool *pool,
 }
 
 /**
- * Cut count nubmer of pages from the pool and put them to return list
+ * Cut out a number of pages from the pool and put them on the return list.
  *
- * @return count of pages still to allocate to fill the request.
+ * @return count of pages still required to fulfill the request.
  */
 static unsigned ttm_page_pool_get_pages(struct ttm_page_pool *pool,
 		struct list_head *pages, int ttm_flags,
@@ -635,7 +635,7 @@ static unsigned ttm_page_pool_get_pages(struct ttm_page_pool *pool,
 		goto out;
 	}
 	/* find the last pages to include for requested number of pages. Split
-	 * pool to begin and halves to reduce search space. */
+	 * pool to begin and halve it to reduce search space. */
 	if (count <= pool->npages/2) {
 		i = 0;
 		list_for_each(p, &pool->list) {
@@ -649,7 +649,7 @@ static unsigned ttm_page_pool_get_pages(struct ttm_page_pool *pool,
 				break;
 		}
 	}
-	/* Cut count number of pages from pool */
+	/* Cut the count number of pages from the pool */
 	list_cut_position(pages, &pool->list, p);
 	pool->npages -= count;
 	count = 0;
diff --git a/include/drm/ttm/ttm_bo_api.h b/include/drm/ttm/ttm_bo_api.h
index 62a0e4c..42e3469 100644
--- a/include/drm/ttm/ttm_bo_api.h
+++ b/include/drm/ttm/ttm_bo_api.h
@@ -662,9 +662,6 @@ extern int ttm_bo_kmap(struct ttm_buffer_object *bo, unsigned long start_page,
 
 extern void ttm_bo_kunmap(struct ttm_bo_kmap_obj *map);
 
-#if 0
-#endif
-
 /**
  * ttm_fbdev_mmap - mmap fbdev memory backed by a ttm buffer object.
  *
diff --git a/include/drm/ttm/ttm_bo_driver.h b/include/drm/ttm/ttm_bo_driver.h
index 09af2d7..94eb143 100644
--- a/include/drm/ttm/ttm_bo_driver.h
+++ b/include/drm/ttm/ttm_bo_driver.h
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ struct ttm_backend_func {
 	 *
 	 * Bind the backend pages into the aperture in the location
 	 * indicated by @bo_mem. This function should be able to handle
-	 * differences between aperture- and system page sizes.
+	 * differences between aperture and system page sizes.
 	 */
 	int (*bind) (struct ttm_backend *backend, struct ttm_mem_reg *bo_mem);
 
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ struct ttm_backend_func {
 	 * @backend: Pointer to a struct ttm_backend.
 	 *
 	 * Unbind previously bound backend pages. This function should be
-	 * able to handle differences between aperture- and system page sizes.
+	 * able to handle differences between aperture and system page sizes.
 	 */
 	int (*unbind) (struct ttm_backend *backend);
 
@@ -786,7 +786,7 @@ extern int ttm_bo_device_release(struct ttm_bo_device *bdev);
  * ttm_bo_device_init
  *
  * @bdev: A pointer to a struct ttm_bo_device to initialize.
- * @mem_global: A pointer to an initialized struct ttm_mem_global.
+ * @glob: A pointer to an initialized struct ttm_bo_global.
  * @driver: A pointer to a struct ttm_bo_driver set up by the caller.
  * @file_page_offset: Offset into the device address space that is available
  * for buffer data. This ensures compatibility with other users of the
diff --git a/include/drm/ttm/ttm_memory.h b/include/drm/ttm/ttm_memory.h
index b199170..26c1f78 100644
--- a/include/drm/ttm/ttm_memory.h
+++ b/include/drm/ttm/ttm_memory.h
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
  * @do_shrink: The callback function.
  *
  * Arguments to the do_shrink functions are intended to be passed using
- * inheritance. That is, the argument class derives from struct ttm_mem_srink,
+ * inheritance. That is, the argument class derives from struct ttm_mem_shrink,
  * and can be accessed using container_of().
  */
 
diff --git a/include/drm/ttm/ttm_object.h b/include/drm/ttm/ttm_object.h
index 0d9db09..e46054e 100644
--- a/include/drm/ttm/ttm_object.h
+++ b/include/drm/ttm/ttm_object.h
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ struct ttm_object_device;
  *
  * @ref_obj_release: A function to be called when a reference object
  * with another ttm_ref_type than TTM_REF_USAGE is deleted.
- * this function may, for example, release a lock held by a user-space
+ * This function may, for example, release a lock held by a user-space
  * process.
  *
  * This struct is intended to be used as a base struct for objects that
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ extern struct ttm_base_object *ttm_base_object_lookup(struct ttm_object_file
 /**
  * ttm_base_object_unref
  *
- * @p_base: Pointer to a pointer referncing a struct ttm_base_object.
+ * @p_base: Pointer to a pointer referencing a struct ttm_base_object.
  *
  * Decrements the base object refcount and clears the pointer pointed to by
  * p_base.
diff --git a/include/drm/ttm/ttm_page_alloc.h b/include/drm/ttm/ttm_page_alloc.h
index 8062890..129de12 100644
--- a/include/drm/ttm/ttm_page_alloc.h
+++ b/include/drm/ttm/ttm_page_alloc.h
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
 /**
  * Get count number of pages from pool to pages list.
  *
- * @pages: heado of empty linked list where pages are filled.
+ * @pages: head of empty linked list where pages are filled.
  * @flags: ttm flags for page allocation.
  * @cstate: ttm caching state for the page.
  * @count: number of pages to allocate.
-- 
1.7.4.1


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* Re: [PATCH] ttm: Fix spelling mistakes and remove unused #ifdef
  2011-06-07 18:35 ` [PATCH] ttm: Fix spelling mistakes and remove unused #ifdef Konrad Rzeszutek Wilk
@ 2011-06-07 19:35   ` Randy Dunlap
  0 siblings, 0 replies; 3+ messages in thread
From: Randy Dunlap @ 2011-06-07 19:35 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Konrad Rzeszutek Wilk
  Cc: linux-kernel, thomas, dri-devel, Jerome Glisse, Dave Airlie,
	David Airlie

On Tue,  7 Jun 2011 14:35:52 -0400 Konrad Rzeszutek Wilk wrote:

> . and some comments to make it easier to understand.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Konrad Rzeszutek Wilk <konrad.wilk@oracle.com>
> ---
>  drivers/gpu/drm/ttm/ttm_page_alloc.c |   14 +++++++-------
>  include/drm/ttm/ttm_bo_api.h         |    3 ---
>  include/drm/ttm/ttm_bo_driver.h      |    6 +++---
>  include/drm/ttm/ttm_memory.h         |    2 +-
>  include/drm/ttm/ttm_object.h         |    4 ++--
>  include/drm/ttm/ttm_page_alloc.h     |    2 +-
>  6 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/drivers/gpu/drm/ttm/ttm_page_alloc.c b/drivers/gpu/drm/ttm/ttm_page_alloc.c
> index 9d9d929..3277965 100644
> --- a/drivers/gpu/drm/ttm/ttm_page_alloc.c
> +++ b/drivers/gpu/drm/ttm/ttm_page_alloc.c
> @@ -355,7 +355,7 @@ restart:
>  			if (nr_free)
>  				goto restart;
>  
> -			/* Not allowed to fall tough or break because
> +			/* Not allowed to fall through or break because
>  			 * following context is inside spinlock while we are
>  			 * outside here.
>  			 */
> @@ -554,7 +554,7 @@ out:
>  }
>  
>  /**
> - * Fill the given pool if there isn't enough pages and requested number of
> + * Fill the given pool if there isn't enough pages and the requested number of

                                   aren't

>   * pages is small.
>   */
>  static void ttm_page_pool_fill_locked(struct ttm_page_pool *pool,
> @@ -575,7 +575,7 @@ static void ttm_page_pool_fill_locked(struct ttm_page_pool *pool,
>  	pool->fill_lock = true;
>  
>  	/* If allocation request is small and there is not enough

	                                            are not enough

> -	 * pages in pool we fill the pool first */
> +	 * pages in a pool we fill the pool up first. */
>  	if (count < _manager->options.small
>  		&& count > pool->npages) {
>  		struct list_head new_pages;
> @@ -612,9 +612,9 @@ static void ttm_page_pool_fill_locked(struct ttm_page_pool *pool,
>  }
>  
>  /**
> - * Cut count nubmer of pages from the pool and put them to return list
> + * Cut out a number of pages from the pool and put them on the return list.

No, it wants 'count' or <count> in there, like:

 * Cut 'count' number of pages from the pool and put them on the return list.

>   *
> - * @return count of pages still to allocate to fill the request.
> + * @return count of pages still required to fulfill the request.
>   */
>  static unsigned ttm_page_pool_get_pages(struct ttm_page_pool *pool,
>  		struct list_head *pages, int ttm_flags,
> @@ -635,7 +635,7 @@ static unsigned ttm_page_pool_get_pages(struct ttm_page_pool *pool,
>  		goto out;
>  	}
>  	/* find the last pages to include for requested number of pages. Split
> -	 * pool to begin and halves to reduce search space. */
> +	 * pool to begin and halve it to reduce search space. */
>  	if (count <= pool->npages/2) {
>  		i = 0;
>  		list_for_each(p, &pool->list) {
> @@ -649,7 +649,7 @@ static unsigned ttm_page_pool_get_pages(struct ttm_page_pool *pool,
>  				break;
>  		}
>  	}
> -	/* Cut count number of pages from pool */
> +	/* Cut the count number of pages from the pool */

Not any better IMO.  How about:
	/* Cut <count> number of pages from the pool */
or
	/* Cut 'count' number of pages from the pool */

>  	list_cut_position(pages, &pool->list, p);
>  	pool->npages -= count;
>  	count = 0;

[snip]



---
~Randy
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