From: Andrew Cooper <andrew.cooper3@citrix.com>
To: Daniel Kiper <daniel.kiper@oracle.com>,
grub-devel@gnu.org, xen-devel@lists.xenproject.org
Cc: jgross@suse.com, eric.snowberg@oracle.com, arvidjaar@gmail.com,
phcoder@gmail.com, seth.goldberg@oracle.com
Subject: Re: [MULTIBOOT2 DOC PATCH 01/10] multiboot2: Remove redundant if
Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 22:02:16 +0100 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <6d1249bd-29b7-83d6-636d-7e888f88aa17@citrix.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <1465504244-17175-2-git-send-email-daniel.kiper@oracle.com>
On 09/06/2016 21:30, Daniel Kiper wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Daniel Kiper <daniel.kiper@oracle.com>
> ---
> doc/multiboot.texi | 2 +-
> 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
>
> diff --git a/doc/multiboot.texi b/doc/multiboot.texi
> index 4b92918..27e5a2f 100644
> --- a/doc/multiboot.texi
> +++ b/doc/multiboot.texi
> @@ -425,7 +425,7 @@ u32 | size |
>
> @samp{type} is divided into 2 parts. Lower contains an identifier of contents of the rest of the tag.
> @samp{size} contains the size of tag including header fields.
> -If bit @samp{0} of @samp{flags} (also known as @samp{optional}) is set if bootloader may ignore this tag if it
> +If bit @samp{0} of @samp{flags} (also known as @samp{optional}) is set bootloader may ignore this tag if it
As a native English speaker, I think you want to s/if/, the/ in this
case. Neither option currently parses.
~Andrew
> lacks relevant support.
> Tags are terminated by a tag of type @samp{0} and size @samp{8}.
>
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[not found] <1465504244-17175-1-git-send-email-daniel.kiper@oracle.com>
2016-06-09 20:30 ` [MULTIBOOT2 DOC PATCH 01/10] multiboot2: Remove redundant if Daniel Kiper
2016-06-09 20:30 ` [MULTIBOOT2 DOC PATCH 02/10] multiboot2: Clarify meaning of information request header tag Daniel Kiper
2016-06-09 21:14 ` Andrew Cooper
2016-06-09 20:30 ` [MULTIBOOT2 DOC PATCH 03/10] multiboot2: Fix description of EFI boot services tag Daniel Kiper
2016-06-09 20:30 ` [MULTIBOOT2 DOC PATCH 04/10] multiboot2: Add description of support for EFI boot services Daniel Kiper
2016-06-09 20:30 ` [MULTIBOOT2 DOC PATCH 05/10] multiboot2: Add description of EFI image handle tags Daniel Kiper
2016-06-09 20:30 ` [MULTIBOOT2 DOC PATCH 06/10] multiboot2: Add description of support for relocatable images Daniel Kiper
2016-06-09 21:36 ` Andrew Cooper
2016-06-10 17:36 ` Daniel Kiper
2016-06-09 20:30 ` [MULTIBOOT2 DOC PATCH 07/10] multiboot2: Say that memory maps may not be available on EFI platforms Daniel Kiper
2016-06-09 21:37 ` Andrew Cooper
2016-06-09 20:30 ` [MULTIBOOT2 DOC PATCH 08/10] multiboot2: Add C structure alignment and padding consideration section Daniel Kiper
2016-06-09 22:07 ` Andrew Cooper
[not found] ` <1c1e54de-2f19-20b6-b8c8-229619b95038@citrix.com>
2016-06-10 17:58 ` Daniel Kiper
2016-06-09 20:30 ` [MULTIBOOT2 DOC PATCH 09/10] multiboot2: Add me to authors Daniel Kiper
2016-06-09 20:30 ` [MULTIBOOT2 DOC PATCH 10/10] multiboot2: Bump version to 2.0 Daniel Kiper
[not found] ` <1465504244-17175-2-git-send-email-daniel.kiper@oracle.com>
2016-06-09 21:02 ` Andrew Cooper [this message]
[not found] ` <1465504244-17175-5-git-send-email-daniel.kiper@oracle.com>
2016-06-09 21:31 ` [MULTIBOOT2 DOC PATCH 04/10] multiboot2: Add description of support for EFI boot services Andrew Cooper
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