[PATCH 1/3] proc.5: cfix

[PATCH 1/3] proc.5: cfix

[David Prévot]

---
 man5/proc.5 | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/man5/proc.5 b/man5/proc.5
index be6b755..123bc8f 100644
--- a/man5/proc.5
+++ b/man5/proc.5
@@ -155,14 +155,14 @@ bits for all file-mapped pages associated with the process.
 .IP
 Clearing the PG_Referenced and ACCESSED/YOUNG bits provides a method
 to measure approximately how much memory a process is using.
-One first inspects the values in the "Referenced:" fields
+One first inspects the values in the "Referenced" fields
 for the VMAs shown in
 .IR /proc/[pid]/smaps
 to get an idea of the memory footprint of the
 process.
 One then clears the PG_Referenced and ACCESSED/YOUNG bits
 and, after some measured time interval,
-once again inspects the values in the "Referenced:" fields
+once again inspects the values in the "Referenced" fields
 to get an idea of the change in memory footprint of the
 process during the measured interval.
 If one is interested only in inspecting the selected mapping types,
-- 
2.0.0.rc0

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[PATCH 2/3] inet.3: tfix

[David Prévot]

---
 man3/inet.3 | 1 -
 1 file changed, 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/man3/inet.3 b/man3/inet.3
index 611655d..18d2982 100644
--- a/man3/inet.3
+++ b/man3/inet.3
@@ -130,7 +130,6 @@ The form that uses exactly four decimal numbers is referred to as
 (or sometimes:
 .IR "IPv4 dotted-quad notation" ).
 
-If
 .BR inet_aton ()
 returns 1 if the supplied string was successfully interpreted,
 or 0 if the string is invalid
-- 
2.0.0.rc0

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[PATCH 3/3] inet_net_pton.3: wfix

[David Prévot]

---
 man3/inet_net_pton.3 | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/man3/inet_net_pton.3 b/man3/inet_net_pton.3
index 5017886..ec6a381 100644
--- a/man3/inet_net_pton.3
+++ b/man3/inet_net_pton.3
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ On success,
 returns the number of bits in the network number field
 of the result placed in
 .IR netp .
-For a discussion of the input presentation format and the return value,
+For a discussion on the input presentation format and the return value,
 see NOTES.
 
 .IR Note :
@@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ and
 It uses
 .BR inet_net_pton ()
 to convert the presentation format network address provided in
-its first command-line to binary form, displays the return value from
+its first command-line argument to binary form, displays the return value from
 .BR inet_net_pton ().
 It then uses
 .BR inet_net_ntop ()
-- 
2.0.0.rc0

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Re: [PATCH 1/3] proc.5: cfix

[Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)]

Hi David,

Including the ':' was intended. Why did you want to remove it?

Cheers,

Michael

On 05/04/2014 03:24 AM, David Prévot wrote:
> ---
>  man5/proc.5 | 4 ++--
>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/man5/proc.5 b/man5/proc.5
> index be6b755..123bc8f 100644
> --- a/man5/proc.5
> +++ b/man5/proc.5
> @@ -155,14 +155,14 @@ bits for all file-mapped pages associated with the process.
>  .IP
>  Clearing the PG_Referenced and ACCESSED/YOUNG bits provides a method
>  to measure approximately how much memory a process is using.
> -One first inspects the values in the "Referenced:" fields
> +One first inspects the values in the "Referenced" fields
>  for the VMAs shown in
>  .IR /proc/[pid]/smaps
>  to get an idea of the memory footprint of the
>  process.
>  One then clears the PG_Referenced and ACCESSED/YOUNG bits
>  and, after some measured time interval,
> -once again inspects the values in the "Referenced:" fields
> +once again inspects the values in the "Referenced" fields
>  to get an idea of the change in memory footprint of the
>  process during the measured interval.
>  If one is interested only in inspecting the selected mapping types,
> 


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Re: [PATCH 2/3] inet.3: tfix

[Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)]

Thanks, David. Applied.

Cheers,

Michael


On 05/04/2014 03:24 AM, David Prévot wrote:
> ---
>  man3/inet.3 | 1 -
>  1 file changed, 1 deletion(-)
> 
> diff --git a/man3/inet.3 b/man3/inet.3
> index 611655d..18d2982 100644
> --- a/man3/inet.3
> +++ b/man3/inet.3
> @@ -130,7 +130,6 @@ The form that uses exactly four decimal numbers is referred to as
>  (or sometimes:
>  .IR "IPv4 dotted-quad notation" ).
>  
> -If
>  .BR inet_aton ()
>  returns 1 if the supplied string was successfully interpreted,
>  or 0 if the string is invalid
> 


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Re: [PATCH 3/3] inet_net_pton.3: wfix

[Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)]

Hi David,

On 05/04/2014 03:24 AM, David Prévot wrote:
> ---
>  man3/inet_net_pton.3 | 4 ++--
>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/man3/inet_net_pton.3 b/man3/inet_net_pton.3
> index 5017886..ec6a381 100644
> --- a/man3/inet_net_pton.3
> +++ b/man3/inet_net_pton.3
> @@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ On success,
>  returns the number of bits in the network number field
>  of the result placed in
>  .IR netp .
> -For a discussion of the input presentation format and the return value,
> +For a discussion on the input presentation format and the return value,

"of" is more usual here. I didn't apply this piece.

>  see NOTES.
>  
>  .IR Note :
> @@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ and
>  It uses
>  .BR inet_net_pton ()
>  to convert the presentation format network address provided in
> -its first command-line to binary form, displays the return value from
> +its first command-line argument to binary form, displays the return value from

I applied this fix.

>  .BR inet_net_pton ().
>  It then uses
>  .BR inet_net_ntop ()

Thanks,

Michael




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Re: [PATCH 1/3] proc.5: cfix

[David Prévot]

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Hi Michael,

Le 04/05/2014 01:41, Michael Kerrisk (man-pages) a écrit :

> Including the ':' was intended. Why did you want to remove it?

The purpose is just a consistency fix: there is another occurrence of
"Referenced" in the same context in the /proc/[pid]/smaps paragraph,
with a few other fields, always inside double quotes, and without a colon.

Regards

David

> On 05/04/2014 03:24 AM, David Prévot wrote:
>> ---
>>  man5/proc.5 | 4 ++--
>>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
>>
>> diff --git a/man5/proc.5 b/man5/proc.5
>> index be6b755..123bc8f 100644
>> --- a/man5/proc.5
>> +++ b/man5/proc.5
>> @@ -155,14 +155,14 @@ bits for all file-mapped pages associated with the process.
>>  .IP
>>  Clearing the PG_Referenced and ACCESSED/YOUNG bits provides a method
>>  to measure approximately how much memory a process is using.
>> -One first inspects the values in the "Referenced:" fields
>> +One first inspects the values in the "Referenced" fields
>>  for the VMAs shown in
>>  .IR /proc/[pid]/smaps
>>  to get an idea of the memory footprint of the
>>  process.
>>  One then clears the PG_Referenced and ACCESSED/YOUNG bits
>>  and, after some measured time interval,
>> -once again inspects the values in the "Referenced:" fields
>> +once again inspects the values in the "Referenced" fields
>>  to get an idea of the change in memory footprint of the
>>  process during the measured interval.
>>  If one is interested only in inspecting the selected mapping types,
>>
> 
> 

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Re: [PATCH 1/3] proc.5: cfix

[Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)]

On 05/05/2014 01:04 AM, David Prévot wrote:
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> 
> Hi Michael,
> 
> Le 04/05/2014 01:41, Michael Kerrisk (man-pages) a écrit :
> 
>> Including the ':' was intended. Why did you want to remove it?
> 
> The purpose is just a consistency fix: there is another occurrence of
> "Referenced" in the same context in the /proc/[pid]/smaps paragraph,
> with a few other fields, always inside double quotes, and without a colon.

Ahh -- okay. Thanks for catching that. Applied.

Cheers,

Michael


>> On 05/04/2014 03:24 AM, David Prévot wrote:
>>> ---
>>>  man5/proc.5 | 4 ++--
>>>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
>>>
>>> diff --git a/man5/proc.5 b/man5/proc.5
>>> index be6b755..123bc8f 100644
>>> --- a/man5/proc.5
>>> +++ b/man5/proc.5
>>> @@ -155,14 +155,14 @@ bits for all file-mapped pages associated with the process.
>>>  .IP
>>>  Clearing the PG_Referenced and ACCESSED/YOUNG bits provides a method
>>>  to measure approximately how much memory a process is using.
>>> -One first inspects the values in the "Referenced:" fields
>>> +One first inspects the values in the "Referenced" fields
>>>  for the VMAs shown in
>>>  .IR /proc/[pid]/smaps
>>>  to get an idea of the memory footprint of the
>>>  process.
>>>  One then clears the PG_Referenced and ACCESSED/YOUNG bits
>>>  and, after some measured time interval,
>>> -once again inspects the values in the "Referenced:" fields
>>> +once again inspects the values in the "Referenced" fields
>>>  to get an idea of the change in memory footprint of the
>>>  process during the measured interval.
>>>  If one is interested only in inspecting the selected mapping types,
>>>
>>
>>
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