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* [PATCH 1/2] toolsoftrade: fix a typo
@ 2016-02-13 23:28 SeongJae Park
  2016-02-13 23:28 ` [PATCH 2/2] cpu: rearrange summary of chapter SeongJae Park
  2016-02-15  6:12 ` [PATCH 1/2] toolsoftrade: fix a typo Paul E. McKenney
  0 siblings, 2 replies; 4+ messages in thread
From: SeongJae Park @ 2016-02-13 23:28 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: paulmck; +Cc: perfbook, SeongJae Park

There is a miss of a tilde between line and line number. This change fix
the typo.

Signed-off-by: SeongJae Park <sj38.park@gmail.com>
---
 toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex b/toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex
index ccbe0ad..8d54d3a 100644
--- a/toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex
+++ b/toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex
@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ Otherwise, this is the parent, which checks for an error return from
 the \co{fork()} primitive on line~4, and prints an error and exits
 on lines~5-7 if so.
 Otherwise, the \co{fork()} has executed successfully, and the parent
-therefore executes line 9 with the variable \co{pid} containing the
+therefore executes line~9 with the variable \co{pid} containing the
 process ID of the child.

 \begin{figure}[tbp]
-- 
1.9.1


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* [PATCH 2/2] cpu: rearrange summary of chapter
  2016-02-13 23:28 [PATCH 1/2] toolsoftrade: fix a typo SeongJae Park
@ 2016-02-13 23:28 ` SeongJae Park
  2016-02-15  6:12   ` Paul E. McKenney
  2016-02-15  6:12 ` [PATCH 1/2] toolsoftrade: fix a typo Paul E. McKenney
  1 sibling, 1 reply; 4+ messages in thread
From: SeongJae Park @ 2016-02-13 23:28 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: paulmck; +Cc: perfbook, SeongJae Park

Summary of chapter and introduction about following chapters is in the
end part of `swdesign.tex` though it is not software design specific
content.  Moreover, the detailed introduction about following chapters
is in `cpu.tex`, too.  It would be better to gather them in one `tex`
file.  This commit gather them in `cpu.tex`.

Signed-off-by: SeongJae Park <sj38.park@gmail.com>
---
 cpu/cpu.tex      | 13 +++++++++++++
 cpu/swdesign.tex | 13 -------------
 2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/cpu/cpu.tex b/cpu/cpu.tex
index 6f1ae54..d765e71 100644
--- a/cpu/cpu.tex
+++ b/cpu/cpu.tex
@@ -43,6 +43,19 @@ text~\cite{Hennessy95a}.
 \input{cpu/hwfreelunch}
 \input{cpu/swdesign}

+So, to sum up:
+
+\begin{enumerate}
+\item	The good news is that multicore systems are inexpensive and
+	readily available.
+\item	More good news:  The overhead of many synchronization operations
+	is much lower than it was on parallel systems from the early 2000s.
+\item	The bad news is that the overhead of cache misses is still high,
+	especially on large systems.
+\end{enumerate}
+
+The remainder of this book describes ways of handling this bad news.
+
 In particular,
 Chapter~\ref{chp:Tools of the Trade} will cover some of the low-level
 tools used for parallel programming,
diff --git a/cpu/swdesign.tex b/cpu/swdesign.tex
index cdae106..4e9e91d 100644
--- a/cpu/swdesign.tex
+++ b/cpu/swdesign.tex
@@ -88,16 +88,3 @@ problem into one for which an embarrassingly parallel solution exists.
 	techniques to be used on the non-performance-critical bulk of
 	the program.
 } \QuickQuizEnd
-
-So, to sum up:
-
-\begin{enumerate}
-\item	The good news is that multicore systems are inexpensive and
-	readily available.
-\item	More good news:  The overhead of many synchronization operations
-	is much lower than it was on parallel systems from the early 2000s.
-\item	The bad news is that the overhead of cache misses is still high,
-	especially on large systems.
-\end{enumerate}
-
-The remainder of this book describes ways of handling this bad news.
-- 
1.9.1


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* Re: [PATCH 1/2] toolsoftrade: fix a typo
  2016-02-13 23:28 [PATCH 1/2] toolsoftrade: fix a typo SeongJae Park
  2016-02-13 23:28 ` [PATCH 2/2] cpu: rearrange summary of chapter SeongJae Park
@ 2016-02-15  6:12 ` Paul E. McKenney
  1 sibling, 0 replies; 4+ messages in thread
From: Paul E. McKenney @ 2016-02-15  6:12 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: SeongJae Park; +Cc: perfbook

On Sun, Feb 14, 2016 at 08:28:36AM +0900, SeongJae Park wrote:
> There is a miss of a tilde between line and line number. This change fix
> the typo.
> 
> Signed-off-by: SeongJae Park <sj38.park@gmail.com>

Queued, good catch, thank you!

							Thanx, Paul

> ---
>  toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex | 2 +-
>  1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
> 
> diff --git a/toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex b/toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex
> index ccbe0ad..8d54d3a 100644
> --- a/toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex
> +++ b/toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex
> @@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ Otherwise, this is the parent, which checks for an error return from
>  the \co{fork()} primitive on line~4, and prints an error and exits
>  on lines~5-7 if so.
>  Otherwise, the \co{fork()} has executed successfully, and the parent
> -therefore executes line 9 with the variable \co{pid} containing the
> +therefore executes line~9 with the variable \co{pid} containing the
>  process ID of the child.
> 
>  \begin{figure}[tbp]
> -- 
> 1.9.1
> 


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* Re: [PATCH 2/2] cpu: rearrange summary of chapter
  2016-02-13 23:28 ` [PATCH 2/2] cpu: rearrange summary of chapter SeongJae Park
@ 2016-02-15  6:12   ` Paul E. McKenney
  0 siblings, 0 replies; 4+ messages in thread
From: Paul E. McKenney @ 2016-02-15  6:12 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: SeongJae Park; +Cc: perfbook

On Sun, Feb 14, 2016 at 08:28:37AM +0900, SeongJae Park wrote:
> Summary of chapter and introduction about following chapters is in the
> end part of `swdesign.tex` though it is not software design specific
> content.  Moreover, the detailed introduction about following chapters
> is in `cpu.tex`, too.  It would be better to gather them in one `tex`
> file.  This commit gather them in `cpu.tex`.
> 
> Signed-off-by: SeongJae Park <sj38.park@gmail.com>

I hesitated before taking this, as I am not much on pure code-motion
patches, but did eventually queue it.  Thank you!

							Thanx, Paul

> ---
>  cpu/cpu.tex      | 13 +++++++++++++
>  cpu/swdesign.tex | 13 -------------
>  2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/cpu/cpu.tex b/cpu/cpu.tex
> index 6f1ae54..d765e71 100644
> --- a/cpu/cpu.tex
> +++ b/cpu/cpu.tex
> @@ -43,6 +43,19 @@ text~\cite{Hennessy95a}.
>  \input{cpu/hwfreelunch}
>  \input{cpu/swdesign}
> 
> +So, to sum up:
> +
> +\begin{enumerate}
> +\item	The good news is that multicore systems are inexpensive and
> +	readily available.
> +\item	More good news:  The overhead of many synchronization operations
> +	is much lower than it was on parallel systems from the early 2000s.
> +\item	The bad news is that the overhead of cache misses is still high,
> +	especially on large systems.
> +\end{enumerate}
> +
> +The remainder of this book describes ways of handling this bad news.
> +
>  In particular,
>  Chapter~\ref{chp:Tools of the Trade} will cover some of the low-level
>  tools used for parallel programming,
> diff --git a/cpu/swdesign.tex b/cpu/swdesign.tex
> index cdae106..4e9e91d 100644
> --- a/cpu/swdesign.tex
> +++ b/cpu/swdesign.tex
> @@ -88,16 +88,3 @@ problem into one for which an embarrassingly parallel solution exists.
>  	techniques to be used on the non-performance-critical bulk of
>  	the program.
>  } \QuickQuizEnd
> -
> -So, to sum up:
> -
> -\begin{enumerate}
> -\item	The good news is that multicore systems are inexpensive and
> -	readily available.
> -\item	More good news:  The overhead of many synchronization operations
> -	is much lower than it was on parallel systems from the early 2000s.
> -\item	The bad news is that the overhead of cache misses is still high,
> -	especially on large systems.
> -\end{enumerate}
> -
> -The remainder of this book describes ways of handling this bad news.
> -- 
> 1.9.1
> 


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