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* [PATCH] correct a few doubled-word nits in comments and documentation
@ 2012-03-28  8:45 Jim Meyering
  2012-03-28 15:57 ` Junio C Hamano
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 4+ messages in thread
From: Jim Meyering @ 2012-03-28  8:45 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: git list


Found by running this command:
$ git ls-files -z|xargs -0 perl -0777 -n \
 -e 'while (/\b(then?|[iao]n|i[fst]|but|f?or|at|and|[dt]o)\s+\1\b/gims)' \
 -e '  {' \
 -e '    $n = ($` =~ tr/\n/\n/ + 1);' \
 -e '    ($v = $&) =~ s/\n/\\n/g;' \
 -e '    print "$ARGV:$n:$v\n";' \
 -e '  }'

Why not just git grep -E ...?
That wouldn't work then the doubled words are separated by a newline.
This is derived from a Makefile syntax-check rule in gnulib's maint.mk:
  http://git.sv.gnu.org/cgit/gnulib.git/tree/top/maint.mk

Signed-off-by: Jim Meyering <meyering@redhat.com>
---
 Documentation/git-sh-i18n--envsubst.txt |    2 +-
 attr.h                                  |    2 +-
 gitweb/static/js/lib/cookies.js         |    2 +-
 po/README                               |    2 +-
 4 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/git-sh-i18n--envsubst.txt b/Documentation/git-sh-i18n--envsubst.txt
index 5c3ec32..2ffaf93 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-sh-i18n--envsubst.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-sh-i18n--envsubst.txt
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ plumbing scripts and/or are writing new ones.
 'git sh-i18n{litdd}envsubst' is Git's stripped-down copy of the GNU
 `envsubst(1)` program that comes with the GNU gettext package. It's
 used internally by linkgit:git-sh-i18n[1] to interpolate the variables
-passed to the the `eval_gettext` function.
+passed to the `eval_gettext` function.

 No promises are made about the interface, or that this
 program won't disappear without warning in the next version
diff --git a/attr.h b/attr.h
index eb8ca0d..dea590a 100644
--- a/attr.h
+++ b/attr.h
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ int git_check_attr(const char *path, int, struct git_attr_check *);

 /*
  * Retrieve all attributes that apply to the specified path.  *num
- * will be set the the number of attributes on the path; **check will
+ * will be set the number of attributes on the path; **check will
  * be set to point at a newly-allocated array of git_attr_check
  * objects describing the attributes and their values.  *check must be
  * free()ed by the caller.
diff --git a/gitweb/static/js/lib/cookies.js b/gitweb/static/js/lib/cookies.js
index 72b51cd..66b9a07 100644
--- a/gitweb/static/js/lib/cookies.js
+++ b/gitweb/static/js/lib/cookies.js
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
  *                            If a negative value is specified or a date in the past),
  *                            the cookie will be deleted.
  *                            If set to null or omitted, the cookie will be a session cookie
- *                            and will not be retained when the the browser exits.
+ *                            and will not be retained when the browser exits.
  * @param {String} [options.path] Restrict access of a cookie to particular directory
  *                               (default: path of page that created the cookie).
  * @param {String} [options.domain] Override what web sites are allowed to access cookie
diff --git a/po/README b/po/README
index 188ea2c..c1520e8 100644
--- a/po/README
+++ b/po/README
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ used:

 C:

- - Include builtin.h at the top, it'll pull in in gettext.h, which
+ - Include builtin.h at the top, it'll pull in gettext.h, which
    defines the gettext interface. Consult with the list if you need to
    use gettext.h directly.

--
1.7.9.3


>From e887bda34232bd3cfb63f6a65e534fa14cfa42ca Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jim Meyering <meyering@redhat.com>
Date: Wed, 28 Mar 2012 10:34:28 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] correct spelling: an URL -> a URL


Signed-off-by: Jim Meyering <meyering@redhat.com>
---
 Documentation/git-submodule.txt             |    2 +-
 Documentation/gitmodules.txt                |    4 ++--
 Documentation/howto/using-merge-subtree.txt |    2 +-
 contrib/svn-fe/svn-fe.txt                   |    2 +-
 http.c                                      |    2 +-
 http.h                                      |    2 +-
 perl/Git.pm                                 |    2 +-
 transport.c                                 |    2 +-
 8 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/git-submodule.txt b/Documentation/git-submodule.txt
index b729649..c243ee5 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-submodule.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-submodule.txt
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ commit for each submodule.
 sync::
 	Synchronizes submodules' remote URL configuration setting
 	to the value specified in .gitmodules. It will only affect those
-	submodules which already have an url entry in .git/config (that is the
+	submodules which already have a URL entry in .git/config (that is the
 	case when they are initialized or freshly added). This is useful when
 	submodule URLs change upstream and you need to update your local
 	repositories accordingly.
diff --git a/Documentation/gitmodules.txt b/Documentation/gitmodules.txt
index 4040941..4e1fd52 100644
--- a/Documentation/gitmodules.txt
+++ b/Documentation/gitmodules.txt
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ submodule.<name>.path::
 	be unique within the .gitmodules file.

 submodule.<name>.url::
-	Defines an url from where the submodule repository can be cloned.
+	Defines a URL from which the submodule repository can be cloned.
 	This may be either an absolute URL ready to be passed to
 	linkgit:git-clone[1] or (if it begins with ./ or ../) a location
 	relative to the superproject's origin repository.
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ Consider the following .gitmodules file:

 This defines two submodules, `libfoo` and `libbar`. These are expected to
 be checked out in the paths 'include/foo' and 'include/bar', and for both
-submodules an url is specified which can be used for cloning the submodules.
+submodules a URL is specified which can be used for cloning the submodules.

 SEE ALSO
 --------
diff --git a/Documentation/howto/using-merge-subtree.txt b/Documentation/howto/using-merge-subtree.txt
index 2933056..1ae8d12 100644
--- a/Documentation/howto/using-merge-subtree.txt
+++ b/Documentation/howto/using-merge-subtree.txt
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ What you want is the 'subtree' merge strategy, which helps you in such a
 situation.

 In this example, let's say you have the repository at `/path/to/B` (but
-it can be an URL as well, if you want). You want to merge the 'master'
+it can be a URL as well, if you want). You want to merge the 'master'
 branch of that repository to the `dir-B` subdirectory in your current
 branch.

diff --git a/contrib/svn-fe/svn-fe.txt b/contrib/svn-fe/svn-fe.txt
index 2dd27ce..1128ab2 100644
--- a/contrib/svn-fe/svn-fe.txt
+++ b/contrib/svn-fe/svn-fe.txt
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ as committer, where 'user' is the value of the `svn:author` property
 and 'UUID' the repository's identifier.

 To support incremental imports, 'svn-fe' puts a `git-svn-id` line at
-the end of each commit log message if passed an url on the command
+the end of each commit log message if passed a URL on the command
 line.  This line has the form `git-svn-id: URL@REVNO UUID`.

 The resulting repository will generally require further processing
diff --git a/http.c b/http.c
index 8ac8eb6..f3f83d7 100644
--- a/http.c
+++ b/http.c
@@ -829,7 +829,7 @@ int http_get_strbuf(const char *url, struct strbuf *result, int options)
 }

 /*
- * Downloads an url and stores the result in the given file.
+ * Downloads a URL and stores the result in the given file.
  *
  * If a previous interrupted download is detected (i.e. a previous temporary
  * file is still around) the download is resumed.
diff --git a/http.h b/http.h
index 0b61653..915c286 100644
--- a/http.h
+++ b/http.h
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ extern char *get_remote_object_url(const char *url, const char *hex,
 #define HTTP_NOAUTH	5

 /*
- * Requests an url and stores the result in a strbuf.
+ * Requests a URL and stores the result in a strbuf.
  *
  * If the result pointer is NULL, a HTTP HEAD request is made instead of GET.
  */
diff --git a/perl/Git.pm b/perl/Git.pm
index f7ce511..497f420 100644
--- a/perl/Git.pm
+++ b/perl/Git.pm
@@ -691,7 +691,7 @@ The hash is in the format C<refname =\> hash>. For tags, the C<refname> entry
 contains the tag object while a C<refname^{}> entry gives the tagged objects.

 C<REPOSITORY> has the same meaning as the appropriate C<git-ls-remote>
-argument; either an URL or a remote name (if called on a repository instance).
+argument; either a URL or a remote name (if called on a repository instance).
 C<GROUPS> is an optional arrayref that can contain 'tags' to return all the
 tags and/or 'heads' to return all the heads. C<REFGLOB> is an optional array
 of strings containing a shell-like glob to further limit the refs returned in
diff --git a/transport.c b/transport.c
index 181f8f2..ea9dcb6 100644
--- a/transport.c
+++ b/transport.c
@@ -1154,7 +1154,7 @@ int transport_disconnect(struct transport *transport)
 }

 /*
- * Strip username (and password) from an url and return
+ * Strip username (and password) from a URL and return
  * it in a newly allocated string.
  */
 char *transport_anonymize_url(const char *url)
--
1.7.9.3

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* Re: [PATCH] correct a few doubled-word nits in comments and documentation
  2012-03-28  8:45 [PATCH] correct a few doubled-word nits in comments and documentation Jim Meyering
@ 2012-03-28 15:57 ` Junio C Hamano
  2012-03-28 16:21   ` Jim Meyering
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 4+ messages in thread
From: Junio C Hamano @ 2012-03-28 15:57 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Jim Meyering; +Cc: git list

Thanks; by the way, you have an extra patch message concatenated after
the main one.

^ permalink raw reply	[flat|nested] 4+ messages in thread

* [PATCH] correct a few doubled-word nits in comments and documentation
  2012-03-28 15:57 ` Junio C Hamano
@ 2012-03-28 16:21   ` Jim Meyering
  2012-03-28 17:41     ` Jonathan Nieder
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 4+ messages in thread
From: Jim Meyering @ 2012-03-28 16:21 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Junio C Hamano; +Cc: git list


Found by running this command:
$ git ls-files -z|xargs -0 perl -0777 -n \
 -e 'while (/\b(then?|[iao]n|i[fst]|but|f?or|at|and|[dt]o)\s+\1\b/gims)' \
 -e '  {' \
 -e '    $n = ($` =~ tr/\n/\n/ + 1);' \
 -e '    ($v = $&) =~ s/\n/\\n/g;' \
 -e '    print "$ARGV:$n:$v\n";' \
 -e '  }'

Signed-off-by: Jim Meyering <meyering@redhat.com>
---
> Thanks; by the way, you have an extra patch message concatenated after
> the main one.

Sorry about that.  In case it helps, here's a better version.


 Documentation/git-sh-i18n--envsubst.txt |    2 +-
 attr.h                                  |    2 +-
 gitweb/static/js/lib/cookies.js         |    2 +-
 po/README                               |    2 +-
 4 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/git-sh-i18n--envsubst.txt b/Documentation/git-sh-i18n--envsubst.txt
index 5c3ec32..2ffaf93 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-sh-i18n--envsubst.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-sh-i18n--envsubst.txt
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ plumbing scripts and/or are writing new ones.
 'git sh-i18n{litdd}envsubst' is Git's stripped-down copy of the GNU
 `envsubst(1)` program that comes with the GNU gettext package. It's
 used internally by linkgit:git-sh-i18n[1] to interpolate the variables
-passed to the the `eval_gettext` function.
+passed to the `eval_gettext` function.

 No promises are made about the interface, or that this
 program won't disappear without warning in the next version
diff --git a/attr.h b/attr.h
index eb8ca0d..dea590a 100644
--- a/attr.h
+++ b/attr.h
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ int git_check_attr(const char *path, int, struct git_attr_check *);

 /*
  * Retrieve all attributes that apply to the specified path.  *num
- * will be set the the number of attributes on the path; **check will
+ * will be set the number of attributes on the path; **check will
  * be set to point at a newly-allocated array of git_attr_check
  * objects describing the attributes and their values.  *check must be
  * free()ed by the caller.
diff --git a/gitweb/static/js/lib/cookies.js b/gitweb/static/js/lib/cookies.js
index 72b51cd..66b9a07 100644
--- a/gitweb/static/js/lib/cookies.js
+++ b/gitweb/static/js/lib/cookies.js
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
  *                            If a negative value is specified or a date in the past),
  *                            the cookie will be deleted.
  *                            If set to null or omitted, the cookie will be a session cookie
- *                            and will not be retained when the the browser exits.
+ *                            and will not be retained when the browser exits.
  * @param {String} [options.path] Restrict access of a cookie to particular directory
  *                               (default: path of page that created the cookie).
  * @param {String} [options.domain] Override what web sites are allowed to access cookie
diff --git a/po/README b/po/README
index 188ea2c..c1520e8 100644
--- a/po/README
+++ b/po/README
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ used:

 C:

- - Include builtin.h at the top, it'll pull in in gettext.h, which
+ - Include builtin.h at the top, it'll pull in gettext.h, which
    defines the gettext interface. Consult with the list if you need to
    use gettext.h directly.

--
1.7.9.3

^ permalink raw reply related	[flat|nested] 4+ messages in thread

* Re: [PATCH] correct a few doubled-word nits in comments and documentation
  2012-03-28 16:21   ` Jim Meyering
@ 2012-03-28 17:41     ` Jonathan Nieder
  0 siblings, 0 replies; 4+ messages in thread
From: Jonathan Nieder @ 2012-03-28 17:41 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Jim Meyering
  Cc: Junio C Hamano, git list, Ævar Arnfjörð Bjarmason

(+cc: Ævar for a side note marked with (*) below)
Hi,

Jim Meyering wrote:

> Found by running this command:
> $ git ls-files -z|xargs -0 perl -0777 -n \
>  -e 'while (/\b(then?|[iao]n|i[fst]|but|f?or|at|and|[dt]o)\s+\1\b/gims)' \
>  -e '  {' \
>  -e '    $n = ($` =~ tr/\n/\n/ + 1);' \
>  -e '    ($v = $&) =~ s/\n/\\n/g;' \
>  -e '    print "$ARGV:$n:$v\n";' \
>  -e '  }'

Yeah, this often happens when a person returns to writing after being
interrupted in the middle of a train of thought.

[...]
> +++ b/Documentation/git-sh-i18n--envsubst.txt
> @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ plumbing scripts and/or are writing new ones.
[...]
>  used internally by linkgit:git-sh-i18n[1] to interpolate the variables
> -passed to the the `eval_gettext` function.
> +passed to the `eval_gettext` function.

Good catch.

[...]
> +++ b/attr.h
> @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ int git_check_attr(const char *path, int, struct git_attr_check *);
> 
>  /*
>   * Retrieve all attributes that apply to the specified path.  *num
> - * will be set the the number of attributes on the path; **check will
> + * will be set the number of attributes on the path; **check will

Shouldn't this say "to the"?

[...]
> +++ b/gitweb/static/js/lib/cookies.js
> @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
>   *                            If set to null or omitted, the cookie will be a session cookie
> - *                            and will not be retained when the the browser exits.
> + *                            and will not be retained when the browser exits.

Looks good.

[...]
> +++ b/po/README
> @@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ used:
> 
>  C:
> 
> - - Include builtin.h at the top, it'll pull in in gettext.h, which
> + - Include builtin.h at the top, it'll pull in gettext.h, which
>     defines the gettext interface. Consult with the list if you need to
>     use gettext.h directly.

Not related to this patch, but the sentence is a comma splice.  I'm
also not convinced that #include-ing builtin.h is actually a good idea
when you are not defining or using functions declared in that header. (*)

But that's all orthogonal to your patch, so looks good.

Patch for squashing in follows.

Thanks,
Jonathan

diff --git i/attr.h w/attr.h
index dea590a7..8b08d33a 100644
--- i/attr.h
+++ w/attr.h
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ int git_check_attr(const char *path, int, struct git_attr_check *);
 
 /*
  * Retrieve all attributes that apply to the specified path.  *num
- * will be set the number of attributes on the path; **check will
+ * will be set to the number of attributes on the path; **check will
  * be set to point at a newly-allocated array of git_attr_check
  * objects describing the attributes and their values.  *check must be
  * free()ed by the caller.

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