* [PATCH 1/3] Documentation: trace/ftrace: drop doubled words
2020-07-03 21:24 [PATCH 0/3] Documentation: trace: eliminate doubled words Randy Dunlap
@ 2020-07-03 21:24 ` Randy Dunlap
2020-07-03 21:24 ` [PATCH 2/3] Documentation: trace/histogram-design: " Randy Dunlap
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From: Randy Dunlap @ 2020-07-03 21:24 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: linux-kernel
Cc: Randy Dunlap, Jonathan Corbet, linux-doc, Steven Rostedt,
Ingo Molnar, Alexander Shishkin
Drop the doubled words "for" and "that".
Signed-off-by: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>
Cc: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
Cc: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org
Cc: Steven Rostedt <rostedt@goodmis.org>
Cc: Ingo Molnar <mingo@redhat.com>
---
Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst | 4 ++--
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
--- linux-next-20200701.orig/Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst
+++ linux-next-20200701/Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst
@@ -561,7 +561,7 @@ of ftrace. Here is a list of some of the
trace_marker_raw:
- This is similar to trace_marker above, but is meant for for binary data
+ This is similar to trace_marker above, but is meant for binary data
to be written to it, where a tool can be used to parse the data
from trace_pipe_raw.
@@ -1394,7 +1394,7 @@ an example::
=> x86_64_start_reservations
=> x86_64_start_kernel
-Here we see that that we had a latency of 16 microseconds (which is
+Here we see that we had a latency of 16 microseconds (which is
very good). The _raw_spin_lock_irq in run_timer_softirq disabled
interrupts. The difference between the 16 and the displayed
timestamp 25us occurred because the clock was incremented
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* [PATCH 2/3] Documentation: trace/histogram-design: drop doubled words
2020-07-03 21:24 [PATCH 0/3] Documentation: trace: eliminate doubled words Randy Dunlap
2020-07-03 21:24 ` [PATCH 1/3] Documentation: trace/ftrace: drop " Randy Dunlap
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2020-07-03 21:24 ` [PATCH 3/3] Documentation: trace/stm: " Randy Dunlap
2020-07-05 20:41 ` [PATCH 0/3] Documentation: trace: eliminate " Jonathan Corbet
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From: Randy Dunlap @ 2020-07-03 21:24 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: linux-kernel
Cc: Randy Dunlap, Jonathan Corbet, linux-doc, Steven Rostedt,
Ingo Molnar, Alexander Shishkin
Drop the doubled words "to" and "the".
Signed-off-by: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>
Cc: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
Cc: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org
Cc: Steven Rostedt <rostedt@goodmis.org>
Cc: Ingo Molnar <mingo@redhat.com>
---
Documentation/trace/histogram-design.rst | 4 ++--
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
--- linux-next-20200701.orig/Documentation/trace/histogram-design.rst
+++ linux-next-20200701/Documentation/trace/histogram-design.rst
@@ -780,7 +780,7 @@ same part of the hist_data->fields[] arr
Moving on to the sched_switch trigger hist_debug output, in addition
to the unused wakeup_lat variable, we see a new section displaying
variable references. Variable references are displayed in a separate
-section because in addition to to being logically separate from
+section because in addition to being logically separate from
variables and values, they actually live in a separate hist_data
array, var_refs[].
@@ -863,7 +863,7 @@ event.
The onmatch() action below basically says that whenever we have a
sched_switch event, if we have a matching sched_waking event, in this
case if we have a pid in the sched_waking histogram that matches the
-the next_pid field on this sched_switch event, we retrieve the
+next_pid field on this sched_switch event, we retrieve the
variables specified in the wakeup_latency() trace action, and use
them to generate a new wakeup_latency event into the trace stream.
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* [PATCH 3/3] Documentation: trace/stm: drop doubled words
2020-07-03 21:24 [PATCH 0/3] Documentation: trace: eliminate doubled words Randy Dunlap
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From: Randy Dunlap @ 2020-07-03 21:24 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: linux-kernel
Cc: Randy Dunlap, Jonathan Corbet, linux-doc, Steven Rostedt,
Ingo Molnar, Alexander Shishkin
Change "and and" to "and an".
Fix spello of "example".
Signed-off-by: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>
Cc: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
Cc: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org
Cc: Steven Rostedt <rostedt@goodmis.org>
Cc: Ingo Molnar <mingo@redhat.com>
Cc: Alexander Shishkin <alexander.shishkin@linux.intel.com>
---
Documentation/trace/stm.rst | 4 ++--
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
--- linux-next-20200701.orig/Documentation/trace/stm.rst
+++ linux-next-20200701/Documentation/trace/stm.rst
@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@ This policy is a tree structure containi
have a name (string identifier) and a range of masters and channels
associated with it, located in "stp-policy" subsystem directory in
configfs. The topmost directory's name (the policy) is formatted as
-the STM device name to which this policy applies and and arbitrary
-string identifier separated by a stop. From the examle above, a rule
+the STM device name to which this policy applies and an arbitrary
+string identifier separated by a stop. From the example above, a rule
may look like this::
$ ls /config/stp-policy/dummy_stm.my-policy/user
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* Re: [PATCH 0/3] Documentation: trace: eliminate doubled words
2020-07-03 21:24 [PATCH 0/3] Documentation: trace: eliminate doubled words Randy Dunlap
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From: Jonathan Corbet @ 2020-07-05 20:41 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Randy Dunlap
Cc: linux-kernel, linux-doc, Steven Rostedt, Ingo Molnar, Alexander Shishkin
On Fri, 3 Jul 2020 14:24:50 -0700
Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org> wrote:
> Fix doubled (duplicated) words in trace documentation.
>
> Cc: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
> Cc: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org
> Cc: Steven Rostedt <rostedt@goodmis.org>
> Cc: Ingo Molnar <mingo@redhat.com>
> Cc: Alexander Shishkin <alexander.shishkin@linux.intel.com>
>
>
> Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst | 4 ++--
> Documentation/trace/histogram-design.rst | 4 ++--
> Documentation/trace/stm.rst | 4 ++--
> 3 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
>
Applied, thanks.
jon
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