[PATCH v2] editorial: update S390 Common I/O link

[PATCH v2] editorial: update S390 Common I/O link

[Michael S. Tsirkin]

Paul Knight wrote:

In running a link check, I noted several issues, none significant for this
initial public review publication:
- broken link in Normative references:
-- [S390 Common I/O] ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM
Publication SA22-7204,
http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS, and any
future revisions
(This link is currently broken, and I could not find any alternative source for
this document. - please rewrite the reference to indicate document is no longer
available at this link. You may also consider whether the solitary citation at
4.3.1.3 is still needed.)
This broken link is not a blocking issue for a Committee specification Draft,
but it will not be allowed for a Committee Specification.

Reported-by: Paul Knight <paul.knight@oasis-open.org>
Suggested-by: Halil Pasic <pasic@linux.ibm.com>
Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com>
---

changes from v1:
	do not tweak description just the url

 introduction.tex | 3 ++-
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/introduction.tex b/introduction.tex
index 4dc7085..aa9ec1b 100644
--- a/introduction.tex
+++ b/introduction.tex
@@ -45,7 +45,8 @@ \section{Normative References}\label{sec:Normative References}
 IDentifier (UUID) URN Namespace'', RFC 4122, DOI 10.17487/RFC4122,
 July 2005. \newline\url{http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc4122.txt}\\
 	\phantomsection\label{intro:S390 PoP}\textbf{[S390 PoP]} & z/Architecture Principles of Operation, IBM Publication SA22-7832, \newline\url{http://publibfi.boulder.ibm.com/epubs/pdf/dz9zr009.pdf}, and any future revisions\\
-	\phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390 Common I/O]} & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204, \newline\url{http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS}, and any future revisions\\
+	\phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390
+Common I/O]} & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204, \newline\url{https://www.ibm.com/resources/publications/OutputPubsDetails?PubID=SA22720401}, and any future revisions\\
 	\phantomsection\label{intro:PCI}\textbf{[PCI]} &
 	Conventional PCI Specifications,
 	\newline\url{http://www.pcisig.com/specifications/conventional/},
-- 
MST

[virtio] Re: [PATCH v2] editorial: update S390 Common I/O link

[Cornelia Huck]

On Tue, May 10 2022, "Michael S. Tsirkin" <mst@redhat.com> wrote:

> Paul Knight wrote:
>
> In running a link check, I noted several issues, none significant for this
> initial public review publication:
> - broken link in Normative references:
> -- [S390 Common I/O] ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM
> Publication SA22-7204,
> http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS, and any
> future revisions
> (This link is currently broken, and I could not find any alternative source for
> this document. - please rewrite the reference to indicate document is no longer
> available at this link. You may also consider whether the solitary citation at
> 4.3.1.3 is still needed.)
> This broken link is not a blocking issue for a Committee specification Draft,
> but it will not be allowed for a Committee Specification.
>
> Reported-by: Paul Knight <paul.knight@oasis-open.org>
> Suggested-by: Halil Pasic <pasic@linux.ibm.com>
> Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com>
> ---
>
> changes from v1:
> 	do not tweak description just the url
>
>  introduction.tex | 3 ++-
>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

Reviewed-by: Cornelia Huck <cohuck@redhat.com>


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Re: [virtio-dev] [PATCH v2] editorial: update S390 Common I/O link

[Halil Pasic]

On Tue, 10 May 2022 10:01:56 -0400
"Michael S. Tsirkin" <mst@redhat.com> wrote:

> Paul Knight wrote:
> 
> In running a link check, I noted several issues, none significant for this
> initial public review publication:
> - broken link in Normative references:
> -- [S390 Common I/O] ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM
> Publication SA22-7204,
> http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS, and any
> future revisions
> (This link is currently broken, and I could not find any alternative source for
> this document. - please rewrite the reference to indicate document is no longer
> available at this link. You may also consider whether the solitary citation at
> 4.3.1.3 is still needed.)
> This broken link is not a blocking issue for a Committee specification Draft,
> but it will not be allowed for a Committee Specification.
> 
> Reported-by: Paul Knight <paul.knight@oasis-open.org>
> Suggested-by: Halil Pasic <pasic@linux.ibm.com>
> Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com>

Reviewed-by: Halil Pasic <pasic@linux.ibm.com>

> ---
> 
> changes from v1:
> 	do not tweak description just the url
> 
>  introduction.tex | 3 ++-
>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
> 
> diff --git a/introduction.tex b/introduction.tex
> index 4dc7085..aa9ec1b 100644
> --- a/introduction.tex
> +++ b/introduction.tex
> @@ -45,7 +45,8 @@ \section{Normative References}\label{sec:Normative References}
>  IDentifier (UUID) URN Namespace'', RFC 4122, DOI 10.17487/RFC4122,
>  July 2005. \newline\url{http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc4122.txt}\\
>  	\phantomsection\label{intro:S390 PoP}\textbf{[S390 PoP]} & z/Architecture Principles of Operation, IBM Publication SA22-7832, \newline\url{http://publibfi.boulder.ibm.com/epubs/pdf/dz9zr009.pdf}, and any future revisions\\
> -	\phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390 Common I/O]} & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204, \newline\url{http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS}, and any future revisions\\
> +	\phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390
> +Common I/O]} & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204, \newline\url{https://www.ibm.com/resources/publications/OutputPubsDetails?PubID=SA22720401}, and any future revisions\\
>  	\phantomsection\label{intro:PCI}\textbf{[PCI]} &
>  	Conventional PCI Specifications,
>  	\newline\url{http://www.pcisig.com/specifications/conventional/},