small improvement for initrd.4 (more)

small improvement for initrd.4 (more)

[Yuri Kozlov]

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Hello.

--- man-pages-git/man4/initrd.4 2010-03-26 17:46:41.000000000 +0300
+++ /tmp/initrd.4       2010-07-25 16:15:46.000000000 +0400
@@ -246,7 +246,7 @@
 For more information on setting the root file system see also the
 .BR LILO
 and
-LOADLIN
+.BR LOADLIN
 documentation.
 .PP
 It is also possible for the
@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@
 normal root device to the NFS directory
 .I /var/nfsroot
 on a local networked NFS server with IP number 193.8.232.7 for a system with
-IP number 193.8.232.7 and named "idefix":
+IP number 193.8.232.2 and named "idefix":
 .nf
 
     echo /var/nfsroot >/proc/sys/kernel/nfs-root-name
@@ -408,7 +408,7 @@
 from CD-ROM without the need of any floppies.
 The distribution could also use a
 .B LILO
-boot floppy and then bootstrap a bigger ram disk via
+boot floppy and then bootstrap a bigger RAM disk via
 .IR /dev/initrd
 from the CD-ROM.
 .\"


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Best Regards,
Yuri Kozlov


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--- man-pages-git/man4/initrd.4	2010-03-26 17:46:41.000000000 +0300
+++ /tmp/initrd.4	2010-07-25 16:15:46.000000000 +0400
@@ -246,7 +246,7 @@
 For more information on setting the root file system see also the
 .BR LILO
 and
-LOADLIN
+.BR LOADLIN
 documentation.
 .PP
 It is also possible for the
@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@
 normal root device to the NFS directory
 .I /var/nfsroot
 on a local networked NFS server with IP number 193.8.232.7 for a system with
-IP number 193.8.232.7 and named "idefix":
+IP number 193.8.232.2 and named "idefix":
 .nf
 
     echo /var/nfsroot >/proc/sys/kernel/nfs-root-name
@@ -408,7 +408,7 @@
 from CD-ROM without the need of any floppies.
 The distribution could also use a
 .B LILO
-boot floppy and then bootstrap a bigger ram disk via
+boot floppy and then bootstrap a bigger RAM disk via
 .IR /dev/initrd
 from the CD-ROM.
 .\"

Re: small improvement for initrd.4 (more)

[Michael Kerrisk]

Hello Yuri,

Thanks. Applied for 3.26.

Cheers,

Michael


On Sun, Jul 25, 2010 at 2:22 PM, Yuri Kozlov <yuray-YPGtXv8QU+00kPtPmH8OGQ@public.gmane.org> wrote:
> Hello.
>
> --- man-pages-git/man4/initrd.4 2010-03-26 17:46:41.000000000 +0300
> +++ /tmp/initrd.4       2010-07-25 16:15:46.000000000 +0400
> @@ -246,7 +246,7 @@
>  For more information on setting the root file system see also the
>  .BR LILO
>  and
> -LOADLIN
> +.BR LOADLIN
>  documentation.
>  .PP
>  It is also possible for the
> @@ -289,7 +289,7 @@
>  normal root device to the NFS directory
>  .I /var/nfsroot
>  on a local networked NFS server with IP number 193.8.232.7 for a system with
> -IP number 193.8.232.7 and named "idefix":
> +IP number 193.8.232.2 and named "idefix":
>  .nf
>
>     echo /var/nfsroot >/proc/sys/kernel/nfs-root-name
> @@ -408,7 +408,7 @@
>  from CD-ROM without the need of any floppies.
>  The distribution could also use a
>  .B LILO
> -boot floppy and then bootstrap a bigger ram disk via
> +boot floppy and then bootstrap a bigger RAM disk via
>  .IR /dev/initrd
>  from the CD-ROM.
>  .\"
>
>
> --
> Best Regards,
> Yuri Kozlov
>
>



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Michael Kerrisk
Linux man-pages maintainer; http://www.kernel.org/doc/man-pages/
Author of "The Linux Programming Interface" http://blog.man7.org/
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