* [PATCH 0/2] doc-diff fixes on maint
@ 2021-10-24 17:08 Martin Ågren
2021-10-24 17:08 ` [PATCH 1/2] git.txt: fix typo Martin Ågren
2021-10-24 17:08 ` [PATCH 2/2] git-bundle.txt: add missing words and punctuation Martin Ågren
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From: Martin Ågren @ 2021-10-24 17:08 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: git; +Cc: Matthias Aßhauer, Ævar Arnfjörð Bjarmason
Two small patches to address some things I noticed when going through
the doc-diff between v2.33.0 and 9d530dc002 ("The fourteenth batch",
2021-10-18).
This is based on maint, since the original commits are already in
v2.33.1.
Martin Ågren (2):
git.txt: fix typo
git-bundle.txt: add missing words and punctuation
Documentation/git-bundle.txt | 8 ++++----
Documentation/git.txt | 2 +-
2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
--
2.33.1.711.g9d530dc002
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* [PATCH 1/2] git.txt: fix typo
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@ 2021-10-24 17:08 ` Martin Ågren
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From: Martin Ågren @ 2021-10-24 17:08 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: git; +Cc: Matthias Aßhauer
Fix the spelling of "internally".
Signed-off-by: Martin Ågren <martin.agren@gmail.com>
---
Documentation/git.txt | 2 +-
1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/git.txt b/Documentation/git.txt
index 95fe6f31b4..6bb06d0b52 100644
--- a/Documentation/git.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git.txt
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ OPTIONS
--version::
Prints the Git suite version that the 'git' program came from.
+
-This option is internaly converted to `git version ...` and accepts
+This option is internally converted to `git version ...` and accepts
the same options as the linkgit:git-version[1] command. If `--help` is
also given, it takes precedence over `--version`.
--
2.33.1.711.g9d530dc002
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* [PATCH 2/2] git-bundle.txt: add missing words and punctuation
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2021-10-24 17:08 ` [PATCH 1/2] git.txt: fix typo Martin Ågren
@ 2021-10-24 17:08 ` Martin Ågren
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From: Martin Ågren @ 2021-10-24 17:08 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: git; +Cc: Ævar Arnfjörð Bjarmason
Add an "and" to separate the two halves of the first sentence of the
paragraph more. Add a comma to similarly separate the two halves of the
second sentence a bit better. Add a period at the end of the paragraph.
Further down in the file, add the missing "be" in "must be accompanied".
Signed-off-by: Martin Ågren <martin.agren@gmail.com>
---
Documentation/git-bundle.txt | 8 ++++----
1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/git-bundle.txt b/Documentation/git-bundle.txt
index ac0d003835..50ea8c82ca 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-bundle.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-bundle.txt
@@ -51,10 +51,10 @@ using the `--thin` option to linkgit:git-pack-objects[1], and
unbundled using the `--fix-thin` option to linkgit:git-index-pack[1].
There is no option to create a "thick pack" when using revision
-exclusions, users should not be concerned about the difference. By
-using "thin packs" bundles created using exclusions are smaller in
+exclusions, and users should not be concerned about the difference. By
+using "thin packs", bundles created using exclusions are smaller in
size. That they're "thin" under the hood is merely noted here as a
-curiosity, and as a reference to other documentation
+curiosity, and as a reference to other documentation.
See link:technical/bundle-format.html[the `bundle-format`
documentation] for more details and the discussion of "thin pack" in
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ unbundle <file>::
SPECIFYING REFERENCES
---------------------
-Revisions must accompanied by reference names to be packaged in a
+Revisions must be accompanied by reference names to be packaged in a
bundle.
More than one reference may be packaged, and more than one set of prerequisite objects can
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