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From: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
To: luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org,
	linux-i2c@vger.kernel.org
Cc: Wolfram Sang <wsa@kernel.org>, Peter Rosin <peda@axentia.se>,
	linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH 4/9] docs: i2c: smbus-protocol: improve DataLow/DataHigh definition
Date: Tue, 9 Aug 2022 08:55:22 +0700	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <b5aa9682-48c3-ac1b-7d8f-f16d268f235d@gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20220808141708.1021103-5-luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com>

On 8/8/22 21:17, luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com wrote:
> From: Luca Ceresoli <luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com>
> 
> Use a more professional wording.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Luca Ceresoli <luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/i2c/smbus-protocol.rst | 4 ++--
>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/i2c/smbus-protocol.rst b/Documentation/i2c/smbus-protocol.rst
> index 55e209c7e520..4942c4cad4ad 100644
> --- a/Documentation/i2c/smbus-protocol.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/i2c/smbus-protocol.rst
> @@ -45,8 +45,8 @@ Addr  (7 bits)  I2C 7 bit address. Note that this can be expanded to
>                  get a 10 bit I2C address.
>  Comm  (8 bits)  Command byte, a data byte which often selects a register on
>                  the device.
> -Data  (8 bits)  A plain data byte. Sometimes, I write DataLow, DataHigh
> -                for 16 bit data.
> +Data  (8 bits)  A plain data byte. DataLow and DataHigh represent the low and
> +                high byte of a 16 bit word.
>  Count (8 bits)  A data byte containing the length of a block operation.
>  
>  [..]            Data sent by I2C device, as opposed to data sent by the host

Looks better, thanks.

Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>

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  reply	other threads:[~2022-08-09  1:55 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 24+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2022-08-08 14:16 [PATCH 0/9] docs: i2c: rework I2C documentation, part II luca.ceresoli
2022-08-08 14:17 ` [PATCH 1/9] docs: i2c: i2c-protocol: update introductory paragraph luca.ceresoli
2022-08-11 21:03   ` Wolfram Sang
2022-08-08 14:17 ` [PATCH 2/9] docs: i2c: i2c-protocol,smbus-protocol: remove nonsense words luca.ceresoli
2022-08-11 21:03   ` Wolfram Sang
2022-08-08 14:17 ` [PATCH 3/9] docs: i2c: i2c-protocol: remove unused legend items luca.ceresoli
2022-08-11 21:05   ` Wolfram Sang
2022-08-08 14:17 ` [PATCH 4/9] docs: i2c: smbus-protocol: improve DataLow/DataHigh definition luca.ceresoli
2022-08-09  1:55   ` Bagas Sanjaya [this message]
2022-08-11 21:05   ` Wolfram Sang
2022-08-08 14:17 ` [PATCH 5/9] docs: i2c: instantiating-devices: add syntax coloring to dts and C blocks luca.ceresoli
2022-08-11 21:07   ` Wolfram Sang
2022-08-08 14:17 ` [PATCH 6/9] docs: i2c: i2c-topology: fix incorrect heading luca.ceresoli
2022-08-11 21:09   ` Wolfram Sang
2022-08-08 14:17 ` [PATCH 7/9] docs: i2c: i2c-topology: reorder sections more logically luca.ceresoli
2022-08-09  2:08   ` Bagas Sanjaya
2022-08-09  7:06     ` Luca Ceresoli
2022-08-11 21:09   ` Wolfram Sang
2022-08-08 14:17 ` [PATCH 8/9] docs: i2c: i2c-sysfs: improve wording luca.ceresoli
2022-08-11 21:13   ` Wolfram Sang
2022-08-11 21:23     ` Wolfram Sang
2022-08-12  7:13       ` Luca Ceresoli
2022-08-08 14:17 ` [PATCH 9/9] docs: i2c: i2c-sysfs: fix hyperlinks luca.ceresoli
2022-08-11 21:21   ` Wolfram Sang

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