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* [PATCH v2 0/3] Documentation fixes for kvm-upstream-workaround
@ 2022-08-17 12:48 Bagas Sanjaya
  2022-08-17 12:48 ` [PATCH v2 1/3] Documentation: ABI: tdx: fix formatting in ABI documentation Bagas Sanjaya
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From: Bagas Sanjaya @ 2022-08-17 12:48 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: linux-doc
  Cc: linux-kernel, kvm, Paolo Bonzini, Jonathan Corbet,
	Isaku Yamahata, Xiaoyao Li, Yu Zhang, Chao Peng, Bagas Sanjaya

Here is documentation fixes for kvm-upstream-workaround branch of TDX
tree [1]. The fixes below should be self-explanatory.

Changes since v1 [2]:
  - Wrap description of "shutdown" status to fit the table
  - Add Reported-by from kernel test robot

[1]: https://github.com/intel/tdx.git
[2]: https://lore.kernel.org/linux-doc/20220817095405.199662-1-bagasdotme@gmail.com/

Bagas Sanjaya (3):
  Documentation: ABI: tdx: fix formatting in ABI documentation
  Documentation: ABI: tdx: grammar improv
  Documentation: kvm: enclose the final closing brace in code block

 Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx | 62 ++++++++++----------
 Documentation/virt/kvm/api.rst               |  2 +-
 2 files changed, 33 insertions(+), 31 deletions(-)


base-commit: 85c097fdd1667a842a9e75d8f658fc16bd72981a
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* [PATCH v2 1/3] Documentation: ABI: tdx: fix formatting in ABI documentation
  2022-08-17 12:48 [PATCH v2 0/3] Documentation fixes for kvm-upstream-workaround Bagas Sanjaya
@ 2022-08-17 12:48 ` Bagas Sanjaya
  2022-08-17 12:48 ` [PATCH v2 2/3] Documentation: ABI: tdx: grammar improv Bagas Sanjaya
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From: Bagas Sanjaya @ 2022-08-17 12:48 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: linux-doc
  Cc: linux-kernel, kvm, Paolo Bonzini, Jonathan Corbet,
	Isaku Yamahata, Xiaoyao Li, Yu Zhang, Chao Peng, Bagas Sanjaya,
	kernel test robot

Sphinx reported many warnings on ABI testing symbols doc entry:

Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx:2: WARNING: Unexpected indentation.
Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx:2: WARNING: Block quote ends without a blank line; unexpected unindent.
Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx:2: WARNING: Malformed table.
Bottom/header table border does not match top border.

=============== ================================================
<snipped>
================== ============================================
Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx:22: WARNING: Blank line required after table.
Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx:22: WARNING: Unexpected indentation.
Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx:22: WARNING: Block quote ends without a blank line; unexpected unindent.
Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx:22: WARNING: Unexpected indentation.
Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx:22: WARNING: Block quote ends without a blank line; unexpected unindent.
Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx:22: WARNING: Definition list ends without a blank line; unexpected unindent.
Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx:22: WARNING: Unexpected indentation.
Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx:22: WARNING: Block quote ends without a blank line; unexpected unindent.
Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx:22: WARNING: Definition list ends without a blank line; unexpected unindent.
Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx:22: WARNING: Malformed table.
No bottom table border found.

================== ============================================
<snipped>

Fix the table and lists formatting.

Link: https://lore.kernel.org/linux-doc/202208171918.9a38xuei-lkp@intel.com/
Fixes: 12cafff9983dad ("x86/virt/tdx: Export TDX keyid number and status of TDX module via sysfs")
Reported-by: kernel test robot <lkp@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
---
 Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx | 32 ++++++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 19 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx b/Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx
index eba50870ba0e95..bd743d758d7d49 100644
--- a/Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx
+++ b/Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx
@@ -2,6 +2,7 @@ What:           /sys/firmware/tdx/
 Date:           March 2022
 KernelVersion:  5.17
 Contact:        Isaku Yamahata <isaku.yamahata@intel.com>, kvm@vger.kernel.org
+Users:          libvirt
 Description:
                 Intel's Trust Domain Extensions (TDX) protect guest VMs from
                 malicious hosts and some physical attacks.  This directory
@@ -12,16 +13,17 @@ Description:
                 the first phase firmware loader (a.k.a NP-SEAMLDR) that loads
                 the next loader and the second phase firmware loader(a.k.a
                 P-SEAMLDR) that loads the TDX firmware(a.k.a the "TDX module").
+
                 =============== ================================================
                 keyid_num       the number of SEAM keyid as an hexadecimal
                                 number with the "0x" prefix.
                 =============== ================================================
-Users:          libvirt
 
 What:           /sys/firmware/tdx/tdx_module/
 Date:           March 2022
 KernelVersion:  5.17
 Contact:        Isaku Yamahata <isaku.yamahata@intel.com>, kvm@vger.kernel.org
+Users:          libvirt
 Description:
                 The TDX requires a firmware as known as the TDX module.  It comes
                 with its attributes, vendor_id, build_data, build_num,
@@ -36,19 +38,23 @@ Description:
 
                 ================== ============================================
                 status             string of the TDX module status.
-                                   "unknown"
-                                   "none": the TDX module is not loaded
-                                   "loaded": The TDX module is loaded, but not
-                                             initialized
-                                   "initialized": the TDX module is fully
-                                                  initialized
-                                   "shutdown": the TDX module is shutdown due to
-                                               error during initialization.
+
+                                   * "unknown", "none": the TDX module is not
+                                     loaded
+                                   * "loaded": The TDX module is loaded, but
+                                     not initialized
+                                   * "initialized": the TDX module is fully
+                                     initialized
+                                   * "shutdown": the TDX module is shutdown due
+                                     to error during initialization.
+
                 attributes         32bit flags of the TDX module attributes as
                                    a hexadecimal number with the "0x" prefix.
-                                   Bits 31 - a production module(0) or
-                                             a debug module(1).
-                                   Bits 30:0 Reserved - set to 0.
+
+                                   * Bits 31 - a production module(0) or
+                                     a debug module(1).
+                                   * Bits 30:0 Reserved - set to 0.
+
                 vendor_id          vendor ID as a hexadecimal number with the
                                    "0x" prefix.
                 build_date         build date in yyyymmdd BCD format.
@@ -59,4 +65,4 @@ Description:
                 major_version      major versionas a hexadecimal number with
                                    the "0x" prefix.
                 ================== ============================================
-Users:          libvirt
\ No newline at end of file
+
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* [PATCH v2 2/3] Documentation: ABI: tdx: grammar improv
  2022-08-17 12:48 [PATCH v2 0/3] Documentation fixes for kvm-upstream-workaround Bagas Sanjaya
  2022-08-17 12:48 ` [PATCH v2 1/3] Documentation: ABI: tdx: fix formatting in ABI documentation Bagas Sanjaya
@ 2022-08-17 12:48 ` Bagas Sanjaya
  2022-08-17 12:48 ` [PATCH v2 3/3] Documentation: kvm: enclose the final closing brace in code block Bagas Sanjaya
  2022-08-23  5:57 ` [PATCH v2 0/3] Documentation fixes for kvm-upstream-workaround Isaku Yamahata
  3 siblings, 0 replies; 5+ messages in thread
From: Bagas Sanjaya @ 2022-08-17 12:48 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: linux-doc
  Cc: linux-kernel, kvm, Paolo Bonzini, Jonathan Corbet,
	Isaku Yamahata, Xiaoyao Li, Yu Zhang, Chao Peng, Bagas Sanjaya

Improve the grammar used in TDX ABI documentation.

Fixes: 12cafff9983dad ("x86/virt/tdx: Export TDX keyid number and status of TDX module via sysfs")
Fixes: 5318e72c20e45a ("x86/virt/tdx: Export information about the TDX
module via sysfs")
Signed-off-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
---
 Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx | 32 +++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx b/Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx
index bd743d758d7d49..0f2feff311f047 100644
--- a/Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx
+++ b/Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-firmware-tdx
@@ -8,11 +8,11 @@ Description:
                 malicious hosts and some physical attacks.  This directory
                 represents the entry point directory for the TDX.
 
-                the TDX requires the TDX firmware to load into an isolated
-                memory region.  It requires a two-step loading process.  It uses
-                the first phase firmware loader (a.k.a NP-SEAMLDR) that loads
-                the next loader and the second phase firmware loader(a.k.a
-                P-SEAMLDR) that loads the TDX firmware(a.k.a the "TDX module").
+                This feature requires the TDX firmware to load into an isolated
+                memory region.  It uses two-step loading process; the first
+                phase is NP-SEAMLDR loader that loads the next one and the
+                second phase is P-SEAMLDR loader that loads the TDX firmware
+                (a.k.a the "TDX module").
 
                 =============== ================================================
                 keyid_num       the number of SEAM keyid as an hexadecimal
@@ -25,16 +25,12 @@ KernelVersion:  5.17
 Contact:        Isaku Yamahata <isaku.yamahata@intel.com>, kvm@vger.kernel.org
 Users:          libvirt
 Description:
-                The TDX requires a firmware as known as the TDX module.  It comes
-                with its attributes, vendor_id, build_data, build_num,
-                minor_version, major_version, etc.
-
-                Provides the information about the TDX module loaded on the
-                platform.  It contains the following read-only files.  The
-                information corresponds to the data structure, TDSYSINFO_STRUCT.
-                The admins or VMM management software like libvirt can refer to
-                that information, determine if TDX is supported, and identify
-                the loaded the TDX module.
+                The TDX feature requires a firmware that is known as the TDX
+                module. The module exposes its information in the following
+                read-only files. The information corresponds to the data
+                structure named TDSYSINFO_STRUCT. Administrators or VMM
+                managers like libvirt can refer to it to determine if TDX is
+                supported and identify the loaded module.
 
                 ================== ============================================
                 status             string of the TDX module status.
@@ -48,12 +44,12 @@ Description:
                                    * "shutdown": the TDX module is shutdown due
                                      to error during initialization.
 
-                attributes         32bit flags of the TDX module attributes as
+                attributes         32-bit flags of the TDX module attributes as
                                    a hexadecimal number with the "0x" prefix.
 
                                    * Bits 31 - a production module(0) or
                                      a debug module(1).
-                                   * Bits 30:0 Reserved - set to 0.
+                                   * Bits 0-30 - Reserved - set to 0.
 
                 vendor_id          vendor ID as a hexadecimal number with the
                                    "0x" prefix.
@@ -62,7 +58,7 @@ Description:
                                    the "0x" prefix.
                 minor_version      minor version as a hexadecimal number with
                                    the "0x" prefix.
-                major_version      major versionas a hexadecimal number with
+                major_version      major version as a hexadecimal number with
                                    the "0x" prefix.
                 ================== ============================================
 
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* [PATCH v2 3/3] Documentation: kvm: enclose the final closing brace in code block
  2022-08-17 12:48 [PATCH v2 0/3] Documentation fixes for kvm-upstream-workaround Bagas Sanjaya
  2022-08-17 12:48 ` [PATCH v2 1/3] Documentation: ABI: tdx: fix formatting in ABI documentation Bagas Sanjaya
  2022-08-17 12:48 ` [PATCH v2 2/3] Documentation: ABI: tdx: grammar improv Bagas Sanjaya
@ 2022-08-17 12:48 ` Bagas Sanjaya
  2022-08-23  5:57 ` [PATCH v2 0/3] Documentation fixes for kvm-upstream-workaround Isaku Yamahata
  3 siblings, 0 replies; 5+ messages in thread
From: Bagas Sanjaya @ 2022-08-17 12:48 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: linux-doc
  Cc: linux-kernel, kvm, Paolo Bonzini, Jonathan Corbet,
	Isaku Yamahata, Xiaoyao Li, Yu Zhang, Chao Peng, Bagas Sanjaya,
	kernel test robot

Sphinx reported literal block warning:

Documentation/virt/kvm/api.rst:1362: WARNING: Literal block ends without a blank line; unexpected unindent.

The warning is caused by the final closing brace in KVM_SET_USER_MEMORY_REGION
struct definition is not indented as literal code block.

Indent the closing brace to fix the warning.

Link: https://lore.kernel.org/linux-doc/202208171109.lCfseeP6-lkp@intel.com/
Fixes: bb90daae9d7551 ("KVM: Extend the memslot to support fd-based private memory")
Reported-by: kernel test robot <lkp@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
---
 Documentation/virt/kvm/api.rst | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/virt/kvm/api.rst b/Documentation/virt/kvm/api.rst
index d9d43078080030..4acf4d1c95c099 100644
--- a/Documentation/virt/kvm/api.rst
+++ b/Documentation/virt/kvm/api.rst
@@ -1359,7 +1359,7 @@ yet and must be cleared on entry.
 	__u32 private_fd;
 	__u32 pad1;
 	__u64 pad2[14];
-};
+  };
 
   /\* for kvm_memory_region::flags \*/
   #define KVM_MEM_LOG_DIRTY_PAGES	(1UL << 0)
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* Re: [PATCH v2 0/3] Documentation fixes for kvm-upstream-workaround
  2022-08-17 12:48 [PATCH v2 0/3] Documentation fixes for kvm-upstream-workaround Bagas Sanjaya
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  2022-08-17 12:48 ` [PATCH v2 3/3] Documentation: kvm: enclose the final closing brace in code block Bagas Sanjaya
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From: Isaku Yamahata @ 2022-08-23  5:57 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Bagas Sanjaya
  Cc: linux-doc, linux-kernel, kvm, Paolo Bonzini, Jonathan Corbet,
	Isaku Yamahata, Xiaoyao Li, Yu Zhang, Chao Peng, isaku.yamahata


On Wed, Aug 17, 2022 at 07:48:34PM +0700,
Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com> wrote:

> Here is documentation fixes for kvm-upstream-workaround branch of TDX
> tree [1]. The fixes below should be self-explanatory.

Thanks for patches. I'll merge it into the repo.
-- 
Isaku Yamahata <isaku.yamahata@gmail.com>

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