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From: Quan Nguyen <quan@os.amperecomputing.com>
To: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
Cc: macro@orcam.me.uk, Lee Jones <lee@kernel.org>,
	Rob Herring <robh+dt@kernel.org>,
	Krzysztof Kozlowski <krzysztof.kozlowski+dt@linaro.org>,
	Jean Delvare <jdelvare@suse.com>,
	Guenter Roeck <linux@roeck-us.net>,
	Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>,
	Derek Kiernan <derek.kiernan@xilinx.com>,
	Dragan Cvetic <dragan.cvetic@xilinx.com>,
	Arnd Bergmann <arnd@arndb.de>,
	Greg Kroah-Hartman <gregkh@linuxfoundation.org>,
	Thu Nguyen <thu@os.amperecomputing.com>,
	linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, devicetree@vger.kernel.org,
	linux-hwmon@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org,
	OpenBMC Maillist <openbmc@lists.ozlabs.org>,
	Open Source Submission <patches@amperecomputing.com>,
	Phong Vo <phong@os.amperecomputing.com>,
	thang@os.amperecomputing.com
Subject: Re: [PATCH v9 2/9] docs: hwmon: (smpro-hwmon) Add documentation
Date: Thu, 6 Oct 2022 14:47:36 +0700	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <7c0d3614-f501-d398-e023-5754e2ec9528@os.amperecomputing.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <Yzg5GM97kM6/Hw82@debian.me>



On 01/10/2022 19:56, Bagas Sanjaya wrote:
> On Thu, Sep 29, 2022 at 04:43:14PM +0700, Quan Nguyen wrote:
>> diff --git a/Documentation/hwmon/smpro-hwmon.rst b/Documentation/hwmon/smpro-hwmon.rst
>> new file mode 100644
>> index 000000000000..3a9b14dacf89
>> --- /dev/null
>> +++ b/Documentation/hwmon/smpro-hwmon.rst
>> @@ -0,0 +1,101 @@
>> +.. SPDX-License-Identifier: GPL-2.0-only
>> +
>> +Kernel driver Ampere(R)'s Altra(R) SMpro hwmon
>> +==============================================
>> +
>> +Supported chips:
>> +
>> +  * Ampere(R) Altra(R)
>> +
>> +    Prefix: 'smpro'
>> +
>> +    Reference: Altra SoC BMC Interface Specification
>> +
>> +Author: Thu Nguyen <thu@os.amperecomputing.com>
>> +
>> +Description
>> +-----------
>> +This driver supports hardware monitoring for Ampere(R) Altra(R) SoC's based on the
>> +SMpro co-processor (SMpro).
>> +The following sensor types are supported by the driver:
>> +
>> +  * temperature
>> +  * voltage
>> +  * current
>> +  * power
>> +
>> +The SMpro interface provides the registers to query the various sensors and
>> +their values which are then exported to userspace by this driver.
>> +
>> +Usage Notes
>> +-----------
>> +
>> +SMpro hwmon driver creates at least two sysfs files for each sensor.
>> +
>> +* File ``<sensor_type><idx>_label`` reports the sensor label.
>> +* File ``<sensor_type><idx>_input`` returns the sensor value.
>> +
>> +The sysfs files are allocated in the SMpro root fs folder.
>> +There is one root folder for each SMpro instance.
>> +
>> +When the SoC is turned off, the driver will fail to read registers
>> +and return -ENXIO.
>> +
>> +Sysfs entries
>> +-------------
>> +
>> +The following sysfs files are supported:
>> +
>> +* Ampere(R) Altra(R):
>> +
>> +============    =============   ======  ===============================================
>> +Name            Unit            Perm    Description
>> +temp1_input     milli Celsius   RO      SoC temperature
>> +temp2_input     milli Celsius   RO      Max temperature reported among SoC VRDs
>> +temp2_crit      milli Celsius   RO      SoC VRD HOT Threshold temperature
>> +temp3_input     milli Celsius   RO      Max temperature reported among DIMM VRDs
>> +temp4_input     milli Celsius   RO      Max temperature reported among Core VRDs
>> +temp5_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH0
>> +temp5_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
>> +temp6_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH1
>> +temp6_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
>> +temp7_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH2
>> +temp7_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
>> +temp8_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH3
>> +temp8_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
>> +temp9_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH4
>> +temp9_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
>> +temp10_input    milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH5
>> +temp10_crit     milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
>> +temp11_input    milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH6
>> +temp11_crit     milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
>> +temp12_input    milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH7
>> +temp12_crit     milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
>> +temp13_input    milli Celsius   RO      Max temperature reported among RCA VRDs
>> +in0_input       milli Volts     RO      Core voltage
>> +in1_input       milli Volts     RO      SoC voltage
>> +in2_input       milli Volts     RO      DIMM VRD1 voltage
>> +in3_input       milli Volts     RO      DIMM VRD2 voltage
>> +in4_input       milli Volts     RO      RCA VRD voltage
>> +cur1_input      milli Amperes   RO      Core VRD current
>> +cur2_input      milli Amperes   RO      SoC VRD current
>> +cur3_input      milli Amperes   RO      DIMM VRD1 current
>> +cur4_input      milli Amperes   RO      DIMM VRD2 current
>> +cur5_input      milli Amperes   RO      RCA VRD current
>> +power1_input    micro Watts     RO      Core VRD power
>> +power2_input    micro Watts     RO      SoC VRD power
>> +power3_input    micro Watts     RO      DIMM VRD1 power
>> +power4_input    micro Watts     RO      DIMM VRD2 power
>> +power5_input    micro Watts     RO      RCA VRD power
>> +============    =============   ======  ===============================================
>> +
>> +Example::
>> +
>> +    # cat in0_input
>> +    830
>> +    # cat temp1_input
>> +    37000
>> +    # cat curr1_input
>> +    9000
>> +    # cat power5_input
>> +    19500000
>   
> The documentation above can be improved (both grammar and formatting):
> 
> ---- >8 ----
> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/hwmon/smpro-hwmon.rst b/Documentation/hwmon/smpro-hwmon.rst
> index 3a9b14dacf8975..fb7b3665735bba 100644
> --- a/Documentation/hwmon/smpro-hwmon.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/hwmon/smpro-hwmon.rst
> @@ -7,39 +7,39 @@ Supported chips:
>   
>     * Ampere(R) Altra(R)
>   
> -    Prefix: 'smpro'
> +    Prefix: ``smpro``
>   
> -    Reference: Altra SoC BMC Interface Specification
> +    Reference: `Altra SoC BMC Interface Specification`
>   
>   Author: Thu Nguyen <thu@os.amperecomputing.com>
>   
>   Description
>   -----------
> -This driver supports hardware monitoring for Ampere(R) Altra(R) SoC's based on the
> -SMpro co-processor (SMpro).
> -The following sensor types are supported by the driver:
> +The smpro-hwmon driver supports hardware monitoring for Ampere(R) Altra(R)
> +SoCs based on the SMpro co-processor (SMpro).  The following sensor metrics
> +are supported by the driver:
>   
>     * temperature
>     * voltage
>     * current
>     * power
>   
> -The SMpro interface provides the registers to query the various sensors and
> +The interface provides the registers to query the various sensors and
>   their values which are then exported to userspace by this driver.
>   
>   Usage Notes
>   -----------
>   
> -SMpro hwmon driver creates at least two sysfs files for each sensor.
> +The driver creates at least two sysfs files for each sensor.
>   
> -* File ``<sensor_type><idx>_label`` reports the sensor label.
> -* File ``<sensor_type><idx>_input`` returns the sensor value.
> +* ``<sensor_type><idx>_label`` reports the sensor label.
> +* ``<sensor_type><idx>_input`` returns the sensor value.
>   
> -The sysfs files are allocated in the SMpro root fs folder.
> -There is one root folder for each SMpro instance.
> +The sysfs files are allocated in the SMpro rootfs folder, with one root
> +directory for each instance.
>   
> -When the SoC is turned off, the driver will fail to read registers
> -and return -ENXIO.
> +When the SoC is turned off, the driver will fail to read registers and
> +return ``-ENXIO``.
>   
>   Sysfs entries
>   -------------
> @@ -48,48 +48,49 @@ The following sysfs files are supported:
>   
>   * Ampere(R) Altra(R):
>   
> -============    =============   ======  ===============================================
> -Name            Unit            Perm    Description
> -temp1_input     milli Celsius   RO      SoC temperature
> -temp2_input     milli Celsius   RO      Max temperature reported among SoC VRDs
> -temp2_crit      milli Celsius   RO      SoC VRD HOT Threshold temperature
> -temp3_input     milli Celsius   RO      Max temperature reported among DIMM VRDs
> -temp4_input     milli Celsius   RO      Max temperature reported among Core VRDs
> -temp5_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH0
> -temp5_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> -temp6_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH1
> -temp6_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> -temp7_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH2
> -temp7_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> -temp8_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH3
> -temp8_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> -temp9_input     milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH4
> -temp9_crit      milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> -temp10_input    milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH5
> -temp10_crit     milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> -temp11_input    milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH6
> -temp11_crit     milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> -temp12_input    milli Celsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH7
> -temp12_crit     milli Celsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> -temp13_input    milli Celsius   RO      Max temperature reported among RCA VRDs
> -in0_input       milli Volts     RO      Core voltage
> -in1_input       milli Volts     RO      SoC voltage
> -in2_input       milli Volts     RO      DIMM VRD1 voltage
> -in3_input       milli Volts     RO      DIMM VRD2 voltage
> -in4_input       milli Volts     RO      RCA VRD voltage
> -cur1_input      milli Amperes   RO      Core VRD current
> -cur2_input      milli Amperes   RO      SoC VRD current
> -cur3_input      milli Amperes   RO      DIMM VRD1 current
> -cur4_input      milli Amperes   RO      DIMM VRD2 current
> -cur5_input      milli Amperes   RO      RCA VRD current
> -power1_input    micro Watts     RO      Core VRD power
> -power2_input    micro Watts     RO      SoC VRD power
> -power3_input    micro Watts     RO      DIMM VRD1 power
> -power4_input    micro Watts     RO      DIMM VRD2 power
> -power5_input    micro Watts     RO      RCA VRD power
> -============    =============   ======  ===============================================
> +  ============    =============  ======  ===============================================
> +  Name            Unit           Perm    Description
> +  ============    =============  ======  ===============================================
> +  temp1_input     millicelsius   RO      SoC temperature
> +  temp2_input     millicelsius   RO      Max temperature reported among SoC VRDs
> +  temp2_crit      millicelsius   RO      SoC VRD HOT Threshold temperature
> +  temp3_input     millicelsius   RO      Max temperature reported among DIMM VRDs
> +  temp4_input     millicelsius   RO      Max temperature reported among Core VRDs
> +  temp5_input     millicelsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH0
> +  temp5_crit      millicelsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> +  temp6_input     millicelsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH1
> +  temp6_crit      millicelsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> +  temp7_input     millicelsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH2
> +  temp7_crit      millicelsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> +  temp8_input     millicelsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH3
> +  temp8_crit      millicelsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> +  temp9_input     millicelsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH4
> +  temp9_crit      millicelsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> +  temp10_input    millicelsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH5
> +  temp10_crit     millicelsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> +  temp11_input    millicelsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH6
> +  temp11_crit     millicelsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> +  temp12_input    millicelsius   RO      Temperature of DIMM0 on CH7
> +  temp12_crit     millicelsius   RO      MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> +  temp13_input    millicelsius   RO      Max temperature reported among RCA VRDs
> +  in0_input       millivolts     RO      Core voltage
> +  in1_input       millivolts     RO      SoC voltage
> +  in2_input       millivolts     RO      DIMM VRD1 voltage
> +  in3_input       millivolts     RO      DIMM VRD2 voltage
> +  in4_input       millivolts     RO      RCA VRD voltage
> +  cur1_input      milliamperes   RO      Core VRD current
> +  cur2_input      milliamperes   RO      SoC VRD current
> +  cur3_input      milliamperes   RO      DIMM VRD1 current
> +  cur4_input      milliamperes   RO      DIMM VRD2 current
> +  cur5_input      milliamperes   RO      RCA VRD current
> +  power1_input    microwatts     RO      Core VRD power
> +  power2_input    microwatts     RO      SoC VRD power
> +  power3_input    microwatts     RO      DIMM VRD1 power
> +  power4_input    microwatts     RO      DIMM VRD2 power
> +  power5_input    microwatts     RO      RCA VRD power
> +  ============    =============  ======  ===============================================
>   
> -Example::
> +  Example::
>   
>       # cat in0_input
>       830
> 

Thank you Bagas, will apply in next version.
- Quan

  reply	other threads:[~2022-10-06  7:48 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 35+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2022-09-29  9:43 [PATCH v9 0/9] Add Ampere's Altra SMPro MFD and its child drivers Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:43 ` [PATCH v9 1/9] hwmon: smpro: Add Ampere's Altra smpro-hwmon driver Quan Nguyen
2022-10-01 12:59   ` Bagas Sanjaya
2022-10-06  7:47     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-10-26 15:00   ` Guenter Roeck
2022-10-27  3:39     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:43 ` [PATCH v9 2/9] docs: hwmon: (smpro-hwmon) Add documentation Quan Nguyen
2022-10-01 12:56   ` Bagas Sanjaya
2022-10-06  7:47     ` Quan Nguyen [this message]
2022-09-29  9:43 ` [PATCH v9 3/9] misc: smpro-errmon: Add Ampere's SMpro error monitor driver Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:53   ` Greg Kroah-Hartman
2022-10-06  7:44     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:43 ` [PATCH v9 4/9] docs: misc-devices: (smpro-errmon) Add documentation Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:56   ` Greg Kroah-Hartman
2022-10-06  7:46     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-09-30  6:07   ` kernel test robot
2022-09-30 13:13   ` Bagas Sanjaya
2022-10-06  7:46     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:43 ` [PATCH v9 5/9] misc: smpro-misc: Add Ampere's Altra SMpro misc driver Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:55   ` Greg Kroah-Hartman
2022-10-06  7:45     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:43 ` [PATCH v9 6/9] docs: misc-devices: (smpro-misc) Add documentation Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:56   ` Greg Kroah-Hartman
2022-10-06  7:45     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-10-01  4:11   ` Bagas Sanjaya
2022-10-06  7:47     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:43 ` [PATCH v9 7/9] dt-bindings: mfd: Add bindings for Ampere Altra SMPro MFD driver Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:43 ` [PATCH v9 8/9] mfd: Add Ampere's Altra SMpro " Quan Nguyen
2022-10-01 10:11   ` kernel test robot
2022-10-24 12:39   ` Lee Jones
2022-10-27  3:39     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-09-29  9:43 ` [PATCH v9 9/9] docs: ABI: testing: Document the Ampere Altra Family's SMpro sysfs interfaces Quan Nguyen
2022-09-30  9:38   ` Bagas Sanjaya
2022-10-06  7:46     ` Quan Nguyen
2022-09-30 19:41   ` kernel test robot

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