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From: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
To: Qais Yousef <qyousef@layalina.io>
Cc: Ingo Molnar <mingo@kernel.org>,
	Peter Zijlstra <peterz@infradead.org>,
	Vincent Guittot <vincent.guittot@linaro.org>,
	Dietmar Eggemann <dietmar.eggemann@arm.com>,
	Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>,
	linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org,
	Lukasz Luba <lukasz.luba@arm.com>,
	Xuewen Yan <xuewen.yan94@gmail.com>, Wei Wang <wvw@google.com>,
	Jonathan JMChen <Jonathan.JMChen@mediatek.com>,
	Hank <han.lin@mediatek.com>, Paul Bone <pbone@mozilla.com>
Subject: Re: [PATCH v2] Documentation: sched: Add a new sched-util-clamp.rst
Date: Tue, 29 Nov 2022 10:16:36 +0700	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <Y4V5lDHNqYHEzEaI@debian.me> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20221127142657.1649347-1-qyousef@layalina.io>

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On Sun, Nov 27, 2022 at 02:26:57PM +0000, Qais Yousef wrote:
> The new util clamp feature needs a document explaining what it is and
> how to use it. The new document hopefully covers everything one needs to
> know about uclamp.
> 

For patch subject, better say "Documentation: sched: Document util clamp
feature".

> Signed-off-by: Qais Yousef <qais.yousef@arm.com>
> Signed-off-by: Qais Yousef (Google) <qyousef@layalina.io>
> ---
> 
> Changes in v2:
> 
> 	* Address various style comments from Bagas
> 

I don't see any of my wording suggestions from [1] being applied. Still
a rather confused to read (maybe should be applied on top of jon's
suggestions)?

[1]: https://lore.kernel.org/lkml/Y3II59dyKuvQGIhG@debian.me/
[2]: https://lore.kernel.org/linux-doc/87cz976pwn.fsf@meer.lwn.net/

Thanks.

-- 
An old man doll... just what I always wanted! - Clara

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  parent reply	other threads:[~2022-11-29  3:16 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 7+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2022-11-27 14:26 [PATCH v2] Documentation: sched: Add a new sched-util-clamp.rst Qais Yousef
2022-11-28 15:48 ` Jonathan Corbet
2022-12-03 13:40   ` Qais Yousef
2022-11-29  3:16 ` Bagas Sanjaya [this message]
2022-12-03 13:40   ` Qais Yousef
2022-11-29 10:32 ` Lukasz Luba
2022-12-03 13:40   ` Qais Yousef

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