[PATCH] tty: n_gsm: modify the doc punctuation "," to "."

[PATCH] tty: n_gsm: modify the doc punctuation "," to "."

[Zhenguo Zhao]

From: Zhenguo Zhao <Zhenguo.Zhao1@unisoc.com>

End punctuation of items 5 and 6 are ".",other lists
should be modify to "."

Signed-off-by: Zhenguo Zhao <Zhenguo.Zhao1@unisoc.com>
---
 Documentation/driver-api/serial/n_gsm.rst | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/driver-api/serial/n_gsm.rst b/Documentation/driver-api/serial/n_gsm.rst
index 87dfcd5..154c75e 100644
--- a/Documentation/driver-api/serial/n_gsm.rst
+++ b/Documentation/driver-api/serial/n_gsm.rst
@@ -14,11 +14,11 @@ How to use it
 -------------
 1. initialize the modem in 0710 mux mode (usually AT+CMUX= command) through
    its serial port. Depending on the modem used, you can pass more or less
-   parameters to this command,
+   parameters to this command.
 2. switch the serial line to using the n_gsm line discipline by using
-   TIOCSETD ioctl,
-3. configure the mux using GSMIOC_GETCONF / GSMIOC_SETCONF ioctl,
-4. obtain base gsmtty number for the used serial port,
+   TIOCSETD ioctl.
+3. configure the mux using GSMIOC_GETCONF / GSMIOC_SETCONF ioctl.
+4. obtain base gsmtty number for the used serial port.
 
 Major parts of the initialization program :
 (a good starting point is util-linux-ng/sys-utils/ldattach.c)::
-- 
1.9.1

Re: [PATCH] tty: n_gsm: modify the doc punctuation "," to "."

[Greg KH]

On Fri, Jun 18, 2021 at 10:03:31AM +0800, Zhenguo Zhao wrote:
> From: Zhenguo Zhao <Zhenguo.Zhao1@unisoc.com>
> 
> End punctuation of items 5 and 6 are ".",other lists
> should be modify to "."
> 
> Signed-off-by: Zhenguo Zhao <Zhenguo.Zhao1@unisoc.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/driver-api/serial/n_gsm.rst | 8 ++++----
>  1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/driver-api/serial/n_gsm.rst b/Documentation/driver-api/serial/n_gsm.rst
> index 87dfcd5..154c75e 100644
> --- a/Documentation/driver-api/serial/n_gsm.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/driver-api/serial/n_gsm.rst
> @@ -14,11 +14,11 @@ How to use it
>  -------------
>  1. initialize the modem in 0710 mux mode (usually AT+CMUX= command) through
>     its serial port. Depending on the modem used, you can pass more or less
> -   parameters to this command,
> +   parameters to this command.
>  2. switch the serial line to using the n_gsm line discipline by using
> -   TIOCSETD ioctl,
> -3. configure the mux using GSMIOC_GETCONF / GSMIOC_SETCONF ioctl,
> -4. obtain base gsmtty number for the used serial port,
> +   TIOCSETD ioctl.
> +3. configure the mux using GSMIOC_GETCONF / GSMIOC_SETCONF ioctl.
> +4. obtain base gsmtty number for the used serial port.
>  

Strangly, the use of a ',' here is correct as this is a list of things
to do in a specific order.  If you wrote this all out at once in a
single sentance without the numbers, a ',' would make sense.

But this isn't a big deal, if you want to use '.' then please capitalize
the first word of each item in the list.

Picky, yes, sorry.

greg k-h