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From: paulmck@kernel.org
To: rcu@vger.kernel.org
Cc: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, kernel-team@fb.com,
	mingo@kernel.org, jiangshanlai@gmail.com,
	akpm@linux-foundation.org, mathieu.desnoyers@efficios.com,
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	fweisbec@gmail.com, oleg@redhat.com, joel@joelfernandes.org,
	Paul Gortmaker <paul.gortmaker@windriver.com>,
	Michael Opdenacker <michael.opdenacker@free-electrons.com>,
	"Paul E. McKenney" <paulmck@linux.vnet.ibm.com>,
	"Paul E . McKenney" <paulmck@kernel.org>
Subject: [PATCH tip/core/rcu 4/8] docs: Fix typos and drop/fix dead links in RCU documentation
Date: Tue,  5 Jan 2021 16:54:03 -0800
Message-ID: <20210106005407.12295-4-paulmck@kernel.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20210106005334.GA12159@paulmck-ThinkPad-P72>

From: Paul Gortmaker <paul.gortmaker@windriver.com>

It appears the Compaq link moved to a machine at HP for a while
after the merger of the two, but that doesn't work either.  A search
of HP for "wiz_2637" (w and w/o html suffix) comes up empty.

Since the references aren't critical to the documents we remove them.

Also, the lkml.kernel.org/g links have been broken for ages, so replace
them with lore.kernel.org/r links - standardize on lore for all links too.

Note that we put off fixing these 4y ago - presumably thinking that a
treewide fixup was pending.  Probably safe to go fix the RCU ones now.

https://lore.kernel.org/r/20160915144926.GD10850@linux.vnet.ibm.com/

Cc: Michael Opdenacker <michael.opdenacker@free-electrons.com>
Cc: Steven Rostedt <rostedt@goodmis.org>
Cc: "Paul E. McKenney" <paulmck@linux.vnet.ibm.com>
Signed-off-by: Paul Gortmaker <paul.gortmaker@windriver.com>
Signed-off-by: Paul E. McKenney <paulmck@kernel.org>
---
 .../RCU/Design/Requirements/Requirements.rst       | 23 +++++++++++-----------
 Documentation/RCU/checklist.rst                    |  8 +++-----
 2 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/RCU/Design/Requirements/Requirements.rst b/Documentation/RCU/Design/Requirements/Requirements.rst
index 1e3df77..f32f8fa 100644
--- a/Documentation/RCU/Design/Requirements/Requirements.rst
+++ b/Documentation/RCU/Design/Requirements/Requirements.rst
@@ -321,11 +321,10 @@ do_something_gp_buggy() below:
       12 }
 
 However, this temptation must be resisted because there are a
-surprisingly large number of ways that the compiler (to say nothing of
-`DEC Alpha CPUs <https://h71000.www7.hp.com/wizard/wiz_2637.html>`__)
-can trip this code up. For but one example, if the compiler were short
-of registers, it might choose to refetch from ``gp`` rather than keeping
-a separate copy in ``p`` as follows:
+surprisingly large number of ways that the compiler (or weak ordering
+CPUs like the DEC Alpha) can trip this code up. For but one example, if
+the compiler were short of registers, it might choose to refetch from
+``gp`` rather than keeping a separate copy in ``p`` as follows:
 
    ::
 
@@ -1183,7 +1182,7 @@ costs have plummeted. However, as I learned from Matt Mackall's
 `bloatwatch <http://elinux.org/Linux_Tiny-FAQ>`__ efforts, memory
 footprint is critically important on single-CPU systems with
 non-preemptible (``CONFIG_PREEMPT=n``) kernels, and thus `tiny
-RCU <https://lkml.kernel.org/g/20090113221724.GA15307@linux.vnet.ibm.com>`__
+RCU <https://lore.kernel.org/r/20090113221724.GA15307@linux.vnet.ibm.com>`__
 was born. Josh Triplett has since taken over the small-memory banner
 with his `Linux kernel tinification <https://tiny.wiki.kernel.org/>`__
 project, which resulted in `SRCU <#Sleepable%20RCU>`__ becoming optional
@@ -1624,7 +1623,7 @@ against mishaps and misuse:
    init_rcu_head() and cleaned up with destroy_rcu_head().
    Mathieu Desnoyers made me aware of this requirement, and also
    supplied the needed
-   `patch <https://lkml.kernel.org/g/20100319013024.GA28456@Krystal>`__.
+   `patch <https://lore.kernel.org/r/20100319013024.GA28456@Krystal>`__.
 #. An infinite loop in an RCU read-side critical section will eventually
    trigger an RCU CPU stall warning splat, with the duration of
    “eventually” being controlled by the ``RCU_CPU_STALL_TIMEOUT``
@@ -1716,7 +1715,7 @@ requires almost all of them be hidden behind a ``CONFIG_RCU_EXPERT``
 
 This all should be quite obvious, but the fact remains that Linus
 Torvalds recently had to
-`remind <https://lkml.kernel.org/g/CA+55aFy4wcCwaL4okTs8wXhGZ5h-ibecy_Meg9C4MNQrUnwMcg@mail.gmail.com>`__
+`remind <https://lore.kernel.org/r/CA+55aFy4wcCwaL4okTs8wXhGZ5h-ibecy_Meg9C4MNQrUnwMcg@mail.gmail.com>`__
 me of this requirement.
 
 Firmware Interface
@@ -1837,9 +1836,9 @@ NMI handlers.
 
 The name notwithstanding, some Linux-kernel architectures can have
 nested NMIs, which RCU must handle correctly. Andy Lutomirski `surprised
-me <https://lkml.kernel.org/r/CALCETrXLq1y7e_dKFPgou-FKHB6Pu-r8+t-6Ds+8=va7anBWDA@mail.gmail.com>`__
+me <https://lore.kernel.org/r/CALCETrXLq1y7e_dKFPgou-FKHB6Pu-r8+t-6Ds+8=va7anBWDA@mail.gmail.com>`__
 with this requirement; he also kindly surprised me with `an
-algorithm <https://lkml.kernel.org/r/CALCETrXSY9JpW3uE6H8WYk81sg56qasA2aqmjMPsq5dOtzso=g@mail.gmail.com>`__
+algorithm <https://lore.kernel.org/r/CALCETrXSY9JpW3uE6H8WYk81sg56qasA2aqmjMPsq5dOtzso=g@mail.gmail.com>`__
 that meets this requirement.
 
 Furthermore, NMI handlers can be interrupted by what appear to RCU to be
@@ -2264,7 +2263,7 @@ more extreme measures. Returning to the ``page`` structure, the
 ``rcu_head`` field shares storage with a great many other structures
 that are used at various points in the corresponding page's lifetime. In
 order to correctly resolve certain `race
-conditions <https://lkml.kernel.org/g/1439976106-137226-1-git-send-email-kirill.shutemov@linux.intel.com>`__,
+conditions <https://lore.kernel.org/r/1439976106-137226-1-git-send-email-kirill.shutemov@linux.intel.com>`__,
 the Linux kernel's memory-management subsystem needs a particular bit to
 remain zero during all phases of grace-period processing, and that bit
 happens to map to the bottom bit of the ``rcu_head`` structure's
@@ -2328,7 +2327,7 @@ preempted. This requirement made its presence known after users made it
 clear that an earlier `real-time
 patch <https://lwn.net/Articles/107930/>`__ did not meet their needs, in
 conjunction with some `RCU
-issues <https://lkml.kernel.org/g/20050318002026.GA2693@us.ibm.com>`__
+issues <https://lore.kernel.org/r/20050318002026.GA2693@us.ibm.com>`__
 encountered by a very early version of the -rt patchset.
 
 In addition, RCU must make do with a sub-100-microsecond real-time
diff --git a/Documentation/RCU/checklist.rst b/Documentation/RCU/checklist.rst
index bb7128e..2d1dc1d 100644
--- a/Documentation/RCU/checklist.rst
+++ b/Documentation/RCU/checklist.rst
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ over a rather long period of time, but improvements are always welcome!
 	is less readable and prevents lockdep from detecting locking issues.
 
 	Letting RCU-protected pointers "leak" out of an RCU read-side
-	critical section is every bid as bad as letting them leak out
+	critical section is every bit as bad as letting them leak out
 	from under a lock.  Unless, of course, you have arranged some
 	other means of protection, such as a lock or a reference count
 	-before- letting them out of the RCU read-side critical section.
@@ -129,9 +129,7 @@ over a rather long period of time, but improvements are always welcome!
 		accesses.  The rcu_dereference() primitive ensures that
 		the CPU picks up the pointer before it picks up the data
 		that the pointer points to.  This really is necessary
-		on Alpha CPUs.	If you don't believe me, see:
-
-			http://www.openvms.compaq.com/wizard/wiz_2637.html
+		on Alpha CPUs.
 
 		The rcu_dereference() primitive is also an excellent
 		documentation aid, letting the person reading the
@@ -216,7 +214,7 @@ over a rather long period of time, but improvements are always welcome!
 7.	As of v4.20, a given kernel implements only one RCU flavor,
 	which is RCU-sched for PREEMPT=n and RCU-preempt for PREEMPT=y.
 	If the updater uses call_rcu() or synchronize_rcu(),
-	then the corresponding readers my use rcu_read_lock() and
+	then the corresponding readers may use rcu_read_lock() and
 	rcu_read_unlock(), rcu_read_lock_bh() and rcu_read_unlock_bh(),
 	or any pair of primitives that disables and re-enables preemption,
 	for example, rcu_read_lock_sched() and rcu_read_unlock_sched().
-- 
2.9.5


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Thread overview: 9+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2021-01-06  0:53 [PATCH tip/core/rcu 0/8] Documentation updates for v5.12 Paul E. McKenney
2021-01-06  0:54 ` [PATCH tip/core/rcu 1/8] docs: Remove redundant "``" from Requirements.rst paulmck
2021-01-06  0:54 ` [PATCH tip/core/rcu 2/8] doc: Remove obsolete RCU-bh and RCU-sched update-side API members paulmck
2021-01-06  0:54 ` [PATCH tip/core/rcu 3/8] list: Fix a typo at the kernel-doc markup paulmck
2021-01-06  0:54 ` paulmck [this message]
2021-01-06  0:54 ` [PATCH tip/core/rcu 5/8] doc: Update RCU requirements RCU_INIT_POINTER() description paulmck
2021-01-06  0:54 ` [PATCH tip/core/rcu 6/8] doc: Remove obsolete rcutree.rcu_idle_lazy_gp_delay boot parameter paulmck
2021-01-06  0:54 ` [PATCH tip/core/rcu 7/8] doc: Update RCU's requirements page about the PREEMPT_RT wiki paulmck
2021-01-06  0:54 ` [PATCH tip/core/rcu 8/8] doc: Use CONFIG_PREEMPTION paulmck

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