From: Andrew Cooper <andrew.cooper3@citrix.com> To: Jan Beulich <JBeulich@suse.com> Cc: Stefano Stabellini <sstabellini@kernel.org>, Wei Liu <wei.liu2@citrix.com>, Konrad Rzeszutek Wilk <konrad.wilk@oracle.com>, George Dunlap <George.Dunlap@eu.citrix.com>, Tim Deegan <tim@xen.org>, Julien Grall <julien.grall@arm.com>, xen-devel <xen-devel@lists.xenproject.org>, Ian Jackson <ian.jackson@citrix.com> Subject: Re: [PATCH 2/2] docs: Introduce some hypercall page documentation Date: Thu, 23 May 2019 13:02:30 +0100 [thread overview] Message-ID: <e6814c96-cf1c-d28e-4a37-4a0072baa7e7@citrix.com> (raw) In-Reply-To: <5CE686ED0200007800231AC4@prv1-mh.provo.novell.com> On 23/05/2019 12:41, Jan Beulich wrote: >>>> On 23.05.19 at 13:01, <andrew.cooper3@citrix.com> wrote: >> On 23/05/2019 11:56, Jan Beulich wrote: >>>>>> On 23.05.19 at 12:20, <andrew.cooper3@citrix.com> wrote: >>>> This also introduced the top-level Guest Documentation section. >>>> >>>> Signed-off-by: Andrew Cooper <andrew.cooper3@citrix.com> >>> Large parts of this are entirely x86-centric, yet hypercalls exist >>> for Arm as well. If this is intentional, then I think you should say >>> so above. >> It is all x86 specific, which is why it is grouped under "x86 guest >> documentation". > Neither the path nor anything near the top of the added file suggest > this is "x86 guest documentation". How is one to make this > connection? Or are you referring to the sole entry that ends up in > docs/guest-guide/index.rst? Yes, and by the way you ask this question, I presume you haven't seen how sphinx renders it. Nevertheless, the observation below does warrant some changes here. > > One other remark: Who's the intended audience? Citing the patch: > This documentation concerns the APIs and ABIs available to guests. It is > intended for OS developers trying to use a Xen feature, and for Xen > developers > to avoid breaking things. > People > writing code targeting the hypercall interface, I assume. This > includes people who may not at all be familiar with the AT&T > peculiarities of the assembly language used (mainly for > naming registers). It's easy for the to understand what is > meant nevertheless, but to be honest I'd prefer if the SDM / > PM register names were used instead, i.e. in particular > without the % prefixes (but also omitting the $ on the INT > operand). While this case is, dropping the AT&T-isms is easy, I'm not convinced that will be the case elsewhere. Also, I don't want us to be in a case where we develop exclusively with AT&T, but have our documentation written in Intel syntax. > >> As for future plans, the actual hypercalls will live in the architecture >> neutral guest documentation section. >> >> ARM doesn't actually use anything here, because they have a single >> spec-defined instruction for making hypercalls which exists in all >> virt-capable hardware. > But register usage would still be relevant to describe, even if > it may just be by stating that it matches a certain ABI defined > elsewhere. That belongs in ARM's hypercall-abi.rst, not x86's, and it is this observation which demonstrates that a path distinction is necessary. ~Andrew _______________________________________________ Xen-devel mailing list Xen-devel@lists.xenproject.org https://lists.xenproject.org/mailman/listinfo/xen-devel
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From: Andrew Cooper <andrew.cooper3@citrix.com> To: Jan Beulich <JBeulich@suse.com> Cc: Stefano Stabellini <sstabellini@kernel.org>, Wei Liu <wei.liu2@citrix.com>, Konrad Rzeszutek Wilk <konrad.wilk@oracle.com>, George Dunlap <George.Dunlap@eu.citrix.com>, Tim Deegan <tim@xen.org>, Julien Grall <julien.grall@arm.com>, xen-devel <xen-devel@lists.xenproject.org>, Ian Jackson <ian.jackson@citrix.com> Subject: Re: [Xen-devel] [PATCH 2/2] docs: Introduce some hypercall page documentation Date: Thu, 23 May 2019 13:02:30 +0100 [thread overview] Message-ID: <e6814c96-cf1c-d28e-4a37-4a0072baa7e7@citrix.com> (raw) Message-ID: <20190523120230.oYyNWUV965YpYvgiDJlDYb8UDDmeU0gME9agIvO1zNI@z> (raw) In-Reply-To: <5CE686ED0200007800231AC4@prv1-mh.provo.novell.com> On 23/05/2019 12:41, Jan Beulich wrote: >>>> On 23.05.19 at 13:01, <andrew.cooper3@citrix.com> wrote: >> On 23/05/2019 11:56, Jan Beulich wrote: >>>>>> On 23.05.19 at 12:20, <andrew.cooper3@citrix.com> wrote: >>>> This also introduced the top-level Guest Documentation section. >>>> >>>> Signed-off-by: Andrew Cooper <andrew.cooper3@citrix.com> >>> Large parts of this are entirely x86-centric, yet hypercalls exist >>> for Arm as well. If this is intentional, then I think you should say >>> so above. >> It is all x86 specific, which is why it is grouped under "x86 guest >> documentation". > Neither the path nor anything near the top of the added file suggest > this is "x86 guest documentation". How is one to make this > connection? Or are you referring to the sole entry that ends up in > docs/guest-guide/index.rst? Yes, and by the way you ask this question, I presume you haven't seen how sphinx renders it. Nevertheless, the observation below does warrant some changes here. > > One other remark: Who's the intended audience? Citing the patch: > This documentation concerns the APIs and ABIs available to guests. It is > intended for OS developers trying to use a Xen feature, and for Xen > developers > to avoid breaking things. > People > writing code targeting the hypercall interface, I assume. This > includes people who may not at all be familiar with the AT&T > peculiarities of the assembly language used (mainly for > naming registers). It's easy for the to understand what is > meant nevertheless, but to be honest I'd prefer if the SDM / > PM register names were used instead, i.e. in particular > without the % prefixes (but also omitting the $ on the INT > operand). While this case is, dropping the AT&T-isms is easy, I'm not convinced that will be the case elsewhere. Also, I don't want us to be in a case where we develop exclusively with AT&T, but have our documentation written in Intel syntax. > >> As for future plans, the actual hypercalls will live in the architecture >> neutral guest documentation section. >> >> ARM doesn't actually use anything here, because they have a single >> spec-defined instruction for making hypercalls which exists in all >> virt-capable hardware. > But register usage would still be relevant to describe, even if > it may just be by stating that it matches a certain ABI defined > elsewhere. That belongs in ARM's hypercall-abi.rst, not x86's, and it is this observation which demonstrates that a path distinction is necessary. ~Andrew _______________________________________________ Xen-devel mailing list Xen-devel@lists.xenproject.org https://lists.xenproject.org/mailman/listinfo/xen-devel
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2019-05-23 12:02 UTC|newest] Thread overview: 31+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top 2019-05-23 10:20 [PATCH 0/2] Hypercall page docs and code cleanup Andrew Cooper 2019-05-23 10:20 ` [Xen-devel] " Andrew Cooper 2019-05-23 10:20 ` [PATCH 1/2] x86: init_hypercall_page() cleanup Andrew Cooper 2019-05-23 10:20 ` [Xen-devel] " Andrew Cooper 2019-05-23 10:23 ` Wei Liu 2019-05-23 10:23 ` [Xen-devel] " Wei Liu 2019-05-23 10:49 ` Jan Beulich 2019-05-23 10:49 ` [Xen-devel] " Jan Beulich 2019-05-28 5:31 ` Tian, Kevin 2019-05-28 5:31 ` [Xen-devel] " Tian, Kevin 2019-06-19 16:17 ` Woods, Brian 2019-05-23 10:20 ` [PATCH 2/2] docs: Introduce some hypercall page documentation Andrew Cooper 2019-05-23 10:20 ` [Xen-devel] " Andrew Cooper 2019-05-23 10:23 ` Wei Liu 2019-05-23 10:23 ` [Xen-devel] " Wei Liu 2019-05-23 10:56 ` Jan Beulich 2019-05-23 10:56 ` [Xen-devel] " Jan Beulich 2019-05-23 11:01 ` Andrew Cooper 2019-05-23 11:01 ` [Xen-devel] " Andrew Cooper 2019-05-23 11:41 ` Jan Beulich 2019-05-23 11:41 ` [Xen-devel] " Jan Beulich 2019-05-23 12:02 ` Andrew Cooper [this message] 2019-05-23 12:02 ` Andrew Cooper 2019-05-23 12:14 ` Jan Beulich 2019-05-23 12:14 ` [Xen-devel] " Jan Beulich 2019-05-29 4:10 ` [PATCH v2 " Andrew Cooper 2019-05-29 4:10 ` [Xen-devel] " Andrew Cooper [not found] ` <EF573A6C020000F58E2C01CD@prv1-mh.provo.novell.com> 2019-05-29 8:45 ` Jan Beulich 2019-05-29 8:45 ` [Xen-devel] " Jan Beulich 2019-05-29 11:50 ` Andrew Cooper 2019-05-29 11:50 ` [Xen-devel] " Andrew Cooper
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