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From: 王贇 <yun.wang@linux.alibaba.com>
To: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
Cc: "Ingo Molnar" <mingo@redhat.com>,
	"Peter Zijlstra" <peterz@infradead.org>,
	"Juri Lelli" <juri.lelli@redhat.com>,
	"Vincent Guittot" <vincent.guittot@linaro.org>,
	"Dietmar Eggemann" <dietmar.eggemann@arm.com>,
	"Steven Rostedt" <rostedt@goodmis.org>,
	"Ben Segall" <bsegall@google.com>, "Mel Gorman" <mgorman@suse.de>,
	"Luis Chamberlain" <mcgrof@kernel.org>,
	"Kees Cook" <keescook@chromium.org>,
	"Iurii Zaikin" <yzaikin@google.com>,
	"Michal Koutný" <mkoutny@suse.com>,
	linux-fsdevel@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org,
	linux-doc@vger.kernel.org,
	"Paul E. McKenney" <paulmck@linux.ibm.com>
Subject: Re: [PATCH 3/3] sched/numa: documentation for per-cgroup numa stat
Date: Thu, 14 Nov 2019 09:52:10 +0800
Message-ID: <359ef90a-aecc-c382-0dd2-2ad7445fb821@linux.alibaba.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20191113080912.041918ce@lwn.net>

Hi, Jonathan

On 2019/11/13 下午11:09, Jonathan Corbet wrote:
> On Wed, 13 Nov 2019 11:45:59 +0800
> 王贇 <yun.wang@linux.alibaba.com> wrote:
> 
>> Add the description for 'cg_numa_stat', also a new doc to explain
>> the details on how to deal with the per-cgroup numa statistics.
>>
>> Cc: Peter Zijlstra <peterz@infradead.org>
>> Cc: Michal Koutný <mkoutny@suse.com>
>> Cc: Mel Gorman <mgorman@suse.de>
>> Signed-off-by: Michael Wang <yun.wang@linux.alibaba.com>
>> ---
>>  Documentation/admin-guide/cg-numa-stat.rst      | 161 ++++++++++++++++++++++++
>>  Documentation/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.txt |   4 +
>>  Documentation/admin-guide/sysctl/kernel.rst     |   9 ++
>>  3 files changed, 174 insertions(+)
>>  create mode 100644 Documentation/admin-guide/cg-numa-stat.rst
> 
> Thanks for adding documentation for your new feature!  When you add a new
> RST file, though, you should also add it to index.rst so that it becomes a
> part of the docs build.

Thanks for pointing out :-) will fix this in next version.

> 
> A couple of nits below...
> 
>> diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/cg-numa-stat.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/cg-numa-stat.rst
>> new file mode 100644
>> index 000000000000..87b716c51e16
>> --- /dev/null
[snip]
>> +For example the 'cpu.numa_stat' show:
>> +  locality 39541 60962 36842 72519 118605 721778 946553
>> +  exectime 1220127 1458684
> 
> You almost certainly want that rendered as a literal block, so say
> "show::".  There are other places where you'll want to do that as well. 

I see, will fix such cases.

> 
>> +The locality is sectioned into 7 regions, closely as:
>> +  0-13% 14-27% 28-42% 43-56% 57-71% 72-85% 86-100%
>> +
>> +And exectime is sectioned into 2 nodes, 0 and 1 in this case.
>> +
>> +Thus we know the workload of this group and it's descendants have totally
>> +executed 1220127ms on node_0 and 1458684ms on node_1, tasks with locality
>> +around 0~13% executed for 39541 ms, and tasks with locality around 87~100%
>> +executed for 946553 ms, which imply most of the memory access are local.
>> +
>> +Monitoring
>> +-----------------
> 
> A slightly long underline :)

Aha, will fix this too.

Regards,
Michael Wang

> 
> I'll stop here; thanks again for adding documentation.
> 
> jon
> 

  reply index

Thread overview: 62+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2019-11-13  3:43 [PATCH 0/3] sched/numa: introduce advanced numa statistic 王贇
2019-11-13  3:44 ` [PATCH 1/3] sched/numa: advanced per-cgroup " 王贇
2019-11-13  3:45 ` [PATCH 2/3] sched/numa: expose per-task pages-migration-failure 王贇
2019-11-13  3:45 ` [PATCH 3/3] sched/numa: documentation for per-cgroup numa stat 王贇
2019-11-13 15:09   ` Jonathan Corbet
2019-11-14  1:52     ` 王贇 [this message]
2019-11-13 18:28   ` Iurii Zaikin
2019-11-14  2:22     ` 王贇
2019-11-15  2:29   ` [PATCH v2 " 王贇
2019-11-20  9:45 ` [PATCH 0/3] sched/numa: introduce advanced numa statistic 王贇
2019-11-25  1:35 ` 王贇
2019-11-27  1:48 ` [PATCH v2 " 王贇
2019-11-27  1:49   ` [PATCH v2 1/3] sched/numa: advanced per-cgroup " 王贇
2019-11-27 10:19     ` Mel Gorman
2019-11-28  2:09       ` 王贇
2019-11-28 12:39         ` Michal Koutný
2019-11-28 13:41           ` 王贇
2019-11-28 15:58             ` Michal Koutný
2019-11-29  1:52               ` 王贇
2019-11-29  5:19                 ` 王贇
2019-11-29 10:06                   ` Michal Koutný
2019-12-02  2:11                     ` 王贇
2019-11-27  1:50   ` [PATCH v2 2/3] sched/numa: expose per-task pages-migration-failure 王贇
2019-11-27 10:00     ` Mel Gorman
2019-12-02  2:22     ` 王贇
2019-11-27  1:50   ` [PATCH v2 3/3] sched/numa: documentation for per-cgroup numa stat 王贇
2019-11-27  4:58     ` Randy Dunlap
2019-11-27  5:54       ` 王贇
2019-12-03  5:59   ` [PATCH v3 0/2] sched/numa: introduce numa locality 王贇
2019-12-03  6:00     ` [PATCH v3 1/2] sched/numa: introduce per-cgroup NUMA locality info 王贇
2019-12-04  2:33       ` Randy Dunlap
2019-12-04  2:38         ` 王贇
2019-12-03  6:02     ` [PATCH v3 2/2] sched/numa: documentation for per-cgroup numa statistics 王贇
2019-12-03 13:43       ` Jonathan Corbet
2019-12-04  2:27         ` 王贇
2019-12-04  7:58     ` [PATCH v4 0/2] sched/numa: introduce numa locality 王贇
2019-12-04  7:59       ` [PATCH v4 1/2] sched/numa: introduce per-cgroup NUMA locality info 王贇
2019-12-05  3:28         ` Randy Dunlap
2019-12-05  3:29           ` Randy Dunlap
2019-12-05  3:52             ` 王贇
2019-12-04  8:00       ` [PATCH v4 2/2] sched/numa: documentation for per-cgroup numa statistics 王贇
2019-12-05  3:40         ` Randy Dunlap
2019-12-05  6:53       ` [PATCH v5 0/2] sched/numa: introduce numa locality 王贇
2019-12-05  6:53         ` [PATCH v5 1/2] sched/numa: introduce per-cgroup NUMA locality info 王贇
2019-12-05  6:54         ` [PATCH v5 2/2] sched/numa: documentation for per-cgroup numa, statistics 王贇
2019-12-10  2:19         ` [PATCH v5 0/2] sched/numa: introduce numa locality 王贇
2019-12-13  1:43         ` [PATCH v6 " 王贇
2019-12-13  1:47           ` [PATCH v6 1/2] sched/numa: introduce per-cgroup NUMA locality info 王贇
2020-01-03 15:14             ` Michal Koutný
2020-01-04  4:51               ` 王贇
2019-12-13  1:48           ` [PATCH v6 2/2] sched/numa: documentation for per-cgroup numa 王贇
2019-12-27  2:22           ` [PATCH v6 0/2] sched/numa: introduce numa locality 王贇
2020-01-17  2:19           ` 王贇
2020-01-19  6:08           ` [PATCH v7 " 王贇
2020-01-19  6:09             ` [PATCH v7 1/2] sched/numa: introduce per-cgroup NUMA locality info 王贇
2020-01-19  6:09             ` [PATCH v7 2/2] sched/numa: documentation for per-cgroup numa, statistics 王贇
2020-01-21  0:12               ` Randy Dunlap
2020-01-21  1:58                 ` 王贇
2020-01-21  1:56             ` [PATCH v8 0/2] sched/numa: introduce numa locality 王贇
2020-01-21  1:57               ` [PATCH v8 1/2] sched/numa: introduce per-cgroup NUMA locality info 王贇
2020-01-21  1:57               ` [PATCH v8 2/2] sched/numa: documentation for per-cgroup numa, statistics 王贇
2020-01-21  2:08                 ` Randy Dunlap

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